《Isekai Harem Trope(WIP)》Chapter 8: Evaluation[Simon][Explicit]
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Waking up the next day felt different. There was anxious energy in the air. My mother made me promise to finish my evaluation even if it could be slightly traumatic, my father was less enthused but agreed with my mother mumbling that it was for my protection. I did not know what was going on or what I 'knew' that made me skip going to my final day of school.
Anxiety started building up the more I stayed in their vicinity so I quickly left. This evaluation feature did not exist in the game but if it was just the graduation evaluation it should not be so ominous. That problem took the back burner as soon as I left my house, in my haste to leave the house I had forgotten something crucial, there was no disguise. The effect was immediate I could feel the lecherous gazes roaming all across my body even in my less than fashionable attire. Everywhere I looked I was met with gazes both hidden and overt. This world was based on a lewd game, after all, this sort of attention should be expected. What they did not teach young men was that being stared at like a slab of meat was uncomfortable regardless of sex especially if rules around consent were very open.
Like a light at the end of a tunnel, a voice called out.
"You ok?"
I turned to see both of them only to do a double-take. Instead of their leather breast wraps and micro jeans, they were wearing a beautiful strapless micro dress with a deep v cut that emphasized their long legs, and large bosoms, and hinted at the solid midriff that tapered out to give a near-perfect hourglass. They were also wearing makeup that accentuated all their most prominent facial features, I would have called them above average before now they looked downright beautiful to the point I was momentarily stunned at the shift from the hooker look to an even more tantalizing beauty. They dressed to impress. The only difference between the two was one chose red the other blue
"What is it? Is it too much. Do you not like it?" asked Audrey thinking my silent stare as a form of scrutiny.
"No. I think he likes it?" said Brianna, questioning hope in her voice.
"They look really good on you..." I said still completely bamboozled at their shocking rise.
Both of them blushed furiously in unison and like guard dogs surrounded me on both sides then said.
"Shall we?" there was a very minor an undertone of pity in their voice which I pretended not to notice.
"Umm. Don't you have jobs?" I asked.
"We took a break. We had a lot of holidays saved up," answered Audrey. I had a lot of questions, like is it okay for a guard captain to take a break? Is there some sort of holiday system, was it not a more modern invention? etc. But at that moment I was more thankful than anything. I felt my shoulders relax not realizing that they were stiff all this time.
"Let's go," I said feeling a lot more confident all of a sudden. I think having two women fawn over you would do that to a man and not to mention my traits egging me along.
The journey was quiet though I could feel their mood rising every moment they spent in my company which in turn made me happy. In the second half, I engaged in some banter as the anxiousness started to set in and their goofy nature that was at odds with their seductress looks helped quite a bit.
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At last, we were at the evaluation center, in the game it was the tutorial section. When you finished school and awakened you came here if you were a man to give others an idea of what you were capable of. In the game, there was mock combat to teach you combat mechanics, a written to teach you civil mechanics, and a social to give you a hint at the lewd nature of the game. That made me realize something I had completely forgotten because I always skipped the tutorial, there is a blowjob scene in this event. Now all of a sudden I got a lot more apprehensive, it had completely slipped my mind and now my first experience with this game's sex system is going to be a blowjob from a random person.
Now would be the time to mention why I was so apprehensive about the lewd nature of this game. See, there is this game mechanic that gives women a buff whenever they take in sperm from any orifice but also makes them addicted to your sperm if you do it repeatedly because the buff is extremely strong, specifically to the one whose sperm they took in. This is used as a plot point in the game in a very brutal and inhumane way which was why I was not so happy. A lot of things made a little more sense which did not make me happy at all.
Being a bitch at this point, however, would do me no good. I needed that evaluation or I would have no identification making me the target of many seedy organizations who trafficked in men making this the supremely better option.
They both promised to wait as I entered the huge mansion-sized building, there was a crowd of people with the highest concentration of men I saw till this point meaning all of them were men just inside the giant wooden entrance. I was standing in a large hall with about 20 of us standing about, there were also about 30 women in heavy armor acting as guards with a woman standing on a podium at the end of the hall. We all waited for probably half an hour but to me, it felt a lot longer as the anticipation built, most of the people started forming clicks in the crowd but probably due to standoffish nature nobody even tried to approach me. After about 10 more of us joined the double doors behind us closed and guards circle us and guided us to the podium. The grey stone with the red and gold artistry gave this place a very royal feel as we were escorted the few dozen feet to the podium. Standing there was a woman with completely grey hair but other than that titbit nothing was showing her age, another effect of sperm which is often referred to as male essence was a very significant part of this game. She still looked like someone in her thirties but carried a regal wise air that foretold of her vast experience.
She gave us a speech that word for word the intro text dump. However, her somber but feminine delivery gave it an added weight making me pay attention though I had it memorized. The summary was that men were precious and few and they should be protected but the dungeons only allow delving with a union meaning both men and women were necessary. The dungeon was the source of much of this world's economy making it a necessary evil for men to delve. To that end men needed to be strong and vital, their abilities properly assessed so that they do not lose their lives taking on missions or delve runs above what they can handle. Many untrained men die every day, too many for society to sustain itself so we must train hard to help society by both responsibly delving and working to bring new life to this world to that end they will guide us to make we do not fall and stumble. The last part made me stop, that was new, there was no pregnancy tag in this game but this was a real-world so I guess people are not just randomly generated. I had no time to think deeper on this as we were told to make three groups: fighter, mage, and support. They warned us that the test would be different for each and the certification as well. We would be locked out of missions we might want if we chose based on the test is easiest to use and not what we want to do afterward, she looked specifically at our group as she said this. Another weird thing is I did not remember there being different tests based on what starting we went for, though I had not done this part in a long time so could be mistaken.
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After the speech, we were herded to our respective areas. For our group, we were taken to the basement by a new woman wearing cleric robes while 8 guards surrounded us one for each. Honestly, the guard detail felt a bit much but I was just an examinee so what did I know. As we stopped in front of a metal door, a guard came next to me and before I realized what was happening started to restrain me. It happened so fast that I did not even get to react as my arms were restrained in a sort of magical lock. I say magical because the moment they came on I could not even think of resisting like I was physically incapable of doing anything at all.
"This might seem barbaric but I promise it is for your good." said the cleric in a singsong voice. She wore a veil along with very loose cleric robes that probably had some hiding properties because I could not properly make her out.
"Now make a line," she ordered.
Like puppets we did as ordered, my mind still bewildered by what was happening. I was pushed to the first and just stood there waiting for my next orders though my mind was screaming at me to do anything but.
She then opened the steel doors using some sort of lock and said, " You at the front, enter."
I went in followed by her and the door slammed shut behind us.
We were in a brightly lit room, though there were no inorganic light sources. Instead inside a yellow glowing magical circle stood the most beautiful creature I have ever laid my eyes on.
She was a literal angel, nude as she was I was given a perfect view of everything she had to offer. Golden blonde hair that flowed past her waist, Sapphire blue eyes that could peer into your soul, A perfect hourglass figure, skin white like that even looked smooth as silk, I could write a novel on her beauty alone but it was her nonhuman features that were truly celestial. She had six white feathery wings that emitted a soft white glow. On her head was a halo that glowed with a bright yellow light that illuminated the whole room and most of all she emanated a soothing aura that put me right at ease forgetting anything and everything but her.
"Come," she said in a voice so divine I could not help but obey.
"No, do not." said the priest, and my feet stopped like someone cemented them to the floor. I found the willpower to stare at the priest in absolute fury, how dare she stop me from obeying my goddess.
The angel looked at the priest with a frown which only added fuel to my ever-growing anger.
"Ok." said the priest a hint of relief in her voice.
"Now, standstill," she said as she moved next to me and started to take off my pants. I was confused but I could see a pleasured smile frame the perfect heart-shaped face of my goddess so I immediately tried to help as best as I could despite my wrists being locked together. Soon I was naked below my waists with my manhood standing at attention because of all the stimulation. I peered at my goddess to see her gaze fixed on my manhood with extreme need making my anger spike at the villain keeping me still.
"Move to the edge of the circle, allow your dick to enter the circle but no more, if she tries to pull you in push out immediately." ordered the priest I darted to my goddess only to be stopped at the edge by the damnable locks.
"Now seraph have your meal but remember the bargain." said the priest.
And so the act began.
There was a brilliant smile on the face of my goddess as she sensually got close to my frozen form only to be stopped by an invisible boundary. She huffed in annoyance making me wish I could bring her smile back post-haste but then she noticed a part of me she could touch. With hands softer than any known quantity she caressed my manhood making me moan in delight, soon my filthy precum coated her majestic fingers making a wish to apologize but she only brought it up to her delicate mouth, and opened her full ruby red lips and gave it a slow sensual lick. Her whole vibrated with ecstasy at the taste of my filth, I was glad there was something my lowly self could that gave her joy. After that jaw-dropping show, she got to her knees in a slow deliberate fashion locking eyes with me the whole time. I felt goosebumps as her mouth got level with my manhood her breath on my sensitive skin sending overwhelming pleasure across all my senses. Slowly she opened her mouth, her warm breath coating my manhood making me physically ache with anticipation.
While still keeping perfect eye contact she slowly engulfed half my manhood before making a seal with her perfect lips encasing my cock within. Then her wet soft warm prison started a soft suction with her tongue giving my tip slow circling licks. The pleasure was so intense that within moments I spurted my seed into her welcoming mouth. There was a bright flash of light from her halo as she swallowed my load. Exhaustion hit me like I had run a day-long marathon and I wanted to sit down to catch my breath but peering at my goddess told me that she was yet to be satisfied and looked up at me with hope keeping my waning cock still in her mouth.
I knew what I had to do so I entered the circle to let my goddess feed on me more easily. I could hear a shout from the back of the room but my ears were deaf to anything but the needs of my goddess. Her eyes lit up with joy and she wrapped my lower half with her wings giving my shaking legs much-needed support. At this point I could feel her wrapping my mind in a warm blanket telling me that everything would be alright before asking a simple question, do I want her? The question cut deep even deeper than the haze I was into the point my clarity returned for a moment but my answer did not change, I answered her yes without hesitation. I could feel innocent elation as she consumed my manhood completely pushing me to pleasure I could not even begin to comprehend even with my two lives combined. All became a backdrop to her divine blowjob, calling it a blowjob was an insult to the divine art she was performing. Soon I orgasmed for the second time in as many minutes but this time the feeling was different, there was the increased fatigue sure but along with it came something new, something that was pushing my consciousness to oblivion. That did not dissuade her one bit and manhood was still inside the heaven that was her mouth and without any rest the moment my seed stopped spurting her sensual actions began once more. This was a step too far and hunched over only to be braced by her wings her mental cooing pushing me over the brink, I let her suction guide me to my slumber while she took all that was necessary.
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