《The Legend of the [Place Holder]》Status / Changes I want to make
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So as some of you have noticed I am not using certain aspects of my setup like i should, journals for example or Alex's childhood.
On the note of the journals - It's a good idea and a nice system if implemented well but thats not for me ... not yet at least. Maybe in a future fiction i will do something about it
I am also going to get rid of the talents that never came into effect or mentioned after though i will be moving clear mind to be a skill instead.
I am also thinking of aging Alex to atleast 9 and keeping the childhood chapters as intermission chapters early on. They, for some reason are harder to write for me than progression chapters.
Finally i am thinking of cutting out the early age chapters and putting them in later as interludes (C1 and C2) but that depends on whether they still fit into the restructuring or i could use anything from them later.
Redo the Registration chapter to be in the form of a baptism (non religious in this case unless the Admins are gods [I am not going that way] but after multiple millenia they could be considered such by the denizens) for young children.
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