《One piece My story》chapter 11
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OPMS 11
For the people curious about it clyde and cynthia looks like that
Clyde: (just take off the hide eye and the hat )
http://www.renders-graphiques.fr/image/upload/normal/Hetalia_England_render.png
Cynthia: ( just think the eyes are green emerald and that she has no Chest )
http://www.knowledgehi.com/thumbnails/detail/20130309/blondes%20vocaloid%20flowers%20blue%20eyes%20blood%20long%20hair%20zippers%20simple%20background%20anime%20girls%20wires%20lilie_www.knowledgehi.com_73.jpg
As for Dex I really can't find any picture that looks like what I have in mind so no pictures sorry.
Spoiler kinda:
Also I don't intend to copy The strawhat crew, they will be some similarity but not that much, and we only miss 2 of the characters I planned for now, And I am trying my best to make my character feel alive, but it's really hard when you started writing 10 days ago, Rome wasn't built in one day and so his my skill to write, it gets better as the chapter goes but It has a lot of flaws. Especially the part at making my characters problem, for me they are the ideal characters that will never fail to do what they want and I am really trying my hardest to prevent this from happening.
And last but most important thing, Dexter and the other have flaws, Dexter has 3, he loves his money, Hate betrayal and people breaking promises and a last one that will be revealed much much later in the fiction, as for cynthia she is a big battlemaniac that will never say no to a challenge and Clyde is a pervert.
End of the kinda spoiler
Ghost town and Cocoyasi story and Marines
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GOL D. ROGER, a legend, the most powerful pirate to have ever set sail on the sea, his death should've stopped all piracy activities in the world.
But it didn't, as his last breath came, his words inspired thousand of people to set sail,
" My treasure? It exist, I've left him somewhere in the new world, FIND IT!" he died with a smiles.
This was the start of the golden age of pirates! (cue the One piece intro )
– Dexter –
We got to Cocoyasi village, and I must say that it's a surprise to everyone, it's like a ghost city, no one in the streets, and said streets looks like there was a war that happened recently.
" Let's search for someone else, there must be at least one person alive around here." I said and we got to work, why do we always get into weird places I hope we can find a Log pose and get out of here.
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We looked everywhere but couldn't find someone, when we were about to give up I saw someone in the corner of a building.
" There ! Hey you next to the building, can you help us ?" The person ran away, Shit!
" We gotta catch him!"
"" Okay "" We all followed the shadow I saw, all the way to a field of Tangerines (Didn't know this fruit existed ) we saw the shadow get into a house.
I got closer to the door and knocked on it. No one came to open it.
" Hey is there someone in here ? Don't worry we're not bad people we just want to know a thing or two."
" Maybe we should just break the door?" Clyde said, he doesn't do anything politely does he ?
At those word the door started opening, once open a girl with blue hair came out with a gun.
" Get out of here, I'm sure you are Arlong allies!" Before I could respond Cynthia got in front of me.
" Why would you think we are with Arlong ? We are not even fishmen." The girl didn't falter a bit and pointed the gun straight at Cynthia now
" He could've paid you like he did with the marines !" Well I don't know who Arlong his but he doesn't look like a nice guy.
" Look we are not with this Arlong, all we want is to find someone selling Log pose and get out of here." I said, This time the girl downed her gun and made motion to come inside.
Once inside we saw Almost nothing in it, a table, some bookshelves and some cooking materials.
" I'm Nojiko, welcome to my house, I'm sorry for poiting a gun at you but since Arlong came to this island you can't trust strangers."
" Who is Arlong anyway ?" I asked a very Obvious question, so obvious in fact that it earned me a Stupid look from everyone in the room " What ?"
" Arlong is a fishmen pirate with a 20.000.000 B bounty on his head, he's know for his hatred of humans I'm surprised you never heard of him he's well known to be on of the most dangerous pirates on east blue." Said Cytnhia
" Never heard of him, anyway why would not trust strangers because of him, if he hates human he wouldn't talk with them would he?"
" He paid marines to never attack him, and to Extort money from us sometimes too. We can't trust anyone we don't know here now, also you are here for a log pose right ? You won't find one here, Arlong took all of them when he came and sells them for a really High price."
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" So if we want one we'll have to take it from him ? Ok Cynthia, Clyde we know what to do now."
Nojiko looked surprised " Take One from Arlong ? Are you crazy ?! He is one of the most dangerous pirates of east blue ! You will never be able to take one!" I think it's time, I've always wanted to say this.
" Oh I didnt say who I was right, then allow me. I am Dexter, a pirate with a 18.000.000 Million bounty, captain of the Blood family crew and user of the Blood Blood Devil fruit, Pleased to meet you." And I ended my line by transforming my arms into blood. Nojiko was stunned, but before she could respond the door opened behind us.
" Nojiko are you here ? I'm back with enough money to buy the villa-" Another women came in, this one had orange hair, when she saw us she stopped moving and was staring.
" Ah nami, you're back ?" Nojiko responded ignoring the face that her friend seemed to be frozen.
" Nojiko why is there three pirates in our home, one of them being a dangerous one that killed Otis Baldfayn and destroyed a marine base ?"
" Didn't know I was that famous, as to answer why, well you see we stopped to cocyasi village is because we heard someone had Log pose and we need one for Grandline, now If you'll excuse us We have a Log pose to take from arlong, thank you for the help Nojiko."
" You want to steal a Log Pose from Arlong ? You won't be able to get into Arlong park like this."
Said Nami
" Who said anything about stealing it ? Arlong is gonna give us one and if he doesn't I'll make sure to crush him, simple as that." She looked like she wanted to say something but didn't have the time as loud knocking came on the door.
" Nami we know you are in here ! I am Nezumi, you have stolen money from a lot of pirates, this money has to be given to the marines." ( I am not sure about this one but I really have no better way of phrasing it sorry.)
" Marines huh ? What are they doing here ?"
" This guy works for Arlong, from the looks of it he wants to take away all the money I've stolen to prevent me from buying Cocoyasi village, but I'm not gonna let him !" Nami started walking towards the door when Nojiko stooped her.
" Nami You can't get out, we don't know what he wants ! Maybe it's a trap from Arlong !"
" But I can't let him find everything ! If he does I will never have the time to find a million berry again!" She is determined to stop him, I'll help for now. I opened the door to see a mouse…
Nevermind it's a man with a mouse hate and mouse like mustache, what the heck.
" Who are you ? And what are you doing here ?" He didn't expect me coming out of the house and was clearly surprised.
" I am Dexter, a pirate, but it's not important right now, what's important is that you are gonna leave this place before I make you."
" Chi chi chi chi chi, Leaving this place ? I don't think so ! You heard him guys, he's a pirate get him!" All the soldier he had behind him charged at me with their sword, I let them pierce me with it.
They started smiling and laughing when they saw blood, but lost their smile when I made all the sword pass through my body and fall.
" Devil fruit user !" this sentence again, I've heard it a lot since I ate my devil fruit, anyway
" Yes I am, and sorry to tell you but it's the end of the line for you." I turned my arm into blood and threw blood in the air towards them, you know what's coming next, " Blood rain." the screams of marines soldier getting hit by my blood rain slowly died down as they all fell to the ground, I then absorbed all the blood around, leaving nothing except the corpses.
" Dexter you are scary when you do this you know ?" Said Cynthia
" At least I cleared the blood, and you didn't see yourself, all the poor guys you sent flying, I saw the bodies and it's a mess. Anyway we have to a Log pose to take, let's go."
" I'm coming with you !" Said nami from behind as she started running towards us.
" If you want as long as you can take care of yourself."
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Chapter 11 done
You know what's next boys, Arlong fight !
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