Hi everyone that reads Spirit

Some answers and stuff about the Story

First i want to thank everyone for reading and commenting it has really helped me out

This is my first story and after the realease of the chapters i get some feedback on what i could do different and it really is helpful as i am learning on the way.

But some people will always like something sombody hates we are all different.

Magic

The empire Jin lives in dosn’t care much for magicians as it is a warrior empire, there are not much about magic spells and history of magic in the Sun empire, but who knows whats outside of the Sun empire or hidden inside.

Mental age

Jins mental age should be 31 but his social intellegence is far from it he spent his first 21 years learning and training himself and others, he didn’t have a normal childhood being out playing with other children, making friends and interacting with other children his age. The time spent in the Sun empire is no different. He is higly intelligent but his emotional intellegence is not that high

Bandits

When Jin met the bandits he had no battle experience never had an arrow sticking out of his shoulder before, you could be any martial artis but if one shoots an arrow trhough your shoulder and a group with weapons runs towards you. The bandits only saw Jin fall down the cliff they didnt see him entering the cave.

Mage/Warrior

I am not trying to change the mc to a warrior in the following chapters you will see what i am planing for the mc.

Jins father

Yi chu is the bodyguard/trainer to the imperial princes and as such does not spend much time at home. When jin was born without a dantian his father kinda lost interest as he couldn’t be a warrior even as a mage he is just slightly higher then humans on the food chain.

Again i want to thank everyone that has helped me out with the story and everyone that has commented.

I appreciate all comments, keep them comming.

If you have other questions post them and i will try answering as fast as i can.....................