《Spirit》A new Name, the beginning
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Chen Tian opened his eyes and saw that he was being held by a man, the man was wearing a red chang pao with purple trims he was big and muscular with black long hair green eyes and a big beard. After being held by this man Chen Tian understood that this person was his father and Chen Tian was in his new world.
Chen Tian looked around the room and saw On top of the bed was a woman who was in her late 20’s. Her exhausted and pale face was drenched in sweat but her appearance was still beautiful. The women had long auburn hair and icey blue eyes, jadelike white skin and red lips.
The woman looked up with a tired expression at the man by her side and smiled,
"My dear allow me to see my baby."
Chen Tians father frowned looked over the child once more. “Did not expect, his body to be so ordinary.” Yi chu said, then he softly carried the child over in his arms
Well ordinary is better then weak Chen Tian thought, wait i still have my memories that means ive retained everthing from my past life.
Yi Yun held onto her child tenderly and gave him a kiss on the forehead and spoke happily
"even if he is ordinary he is our child and we need to give him a name since he is a boy i will name him Jin Azeriel. "
Jin Azeriel i thought, hmm a good name,yes i am Jin Azeriel.
Yi Chu picked up his child went out of the room, outside the room, a group of 20 people, ranging from young to old, were lined up. The elders of the group in front looked at the child being carried by Yi Chu. The rest of the men all gathered around Yi Chu to inspect the child.
The child looked healty with jadelike white skin and piercing green eyes that seemed he understood everything around him.
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When Yi chu said he was born with an ordinary body you could see the group tried their best to look happy and smile by the news, but you could feel the dark and depressed atmosphere. Even their eyes looking at Jin was filled with pity. Jin could see the pity in their eyes and the eyes of his father.
Suddenly one of the elders said "he can still become a mage even if he cant become a warrior." it was Jins grandfather who spoke.
Yi Guo looked just like his son only older with white long hair and a big white beard and green eyes.
"It has been 300 years since last our clan had a mage" another elder blurted out,
"that is true" the group said shaking there heads.
"Well we just have to wait and see we wont know untill Jin turns five if he has any affinity for magic and he cant start to train before he is ten." Jins father said.
The group of elders and family returned to their own rooms and houses and Jin was carried to his room to sleep.
While Jin was put in his crib he thought so this isnt only a martial land, but a magic land to. Ill need to investigate tomorrow im feeling tired now i need to sleep.
During the next few months Jin slept most of the time only to wake a couple hours a day, but he managed to get some information.
To start with was his Yi clan, the Yi clan was a branch of the imperial family the Yiu Clan.
The Yi clan was a clan of warriors that served the imperial Yiu clan, the Yi clan mostly served as guards, soldiers and officers in the imperial army and even strategists.
Of course Jin's father Yi Chu was the bodyguard and instructor for the imperial prince Yiu Gen.
Yiu Gen was twelve years old and a second rank warrior. He looked arrogant and proud he had a round face a thin nose black hair and brown eyes.
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Not evryone could start their path as a warrior when you reached the age of ten. you would know if you could train as a warrior or mage at age five, then you could choose your path and start with the preparation for which path you had choosen.
As a warrior you would start out as a first rank warrior and progress up to – ninth rank warrior the same with mages first rank mage- ninth rank mage.
After you reached the peak of rank 9 as a warrior or mage the next step would be earth king for warriors and earth sage for mages. After peak 9 earth king or sage the nxt step would be heavenly king and heavenly sage each with nine levels.
As a warrior you would summon the elements in your body to make you stronger depending on the element you could use it as a defense like armor or even summon it around ur weapon. As a mage you would use the elements outside your body to cast spells.
The four basic Elements are Wind, Earth, Water and Fire. And two special elements darkness and light.
Five months have passed since Jin was born and he would now crawl all over the mansion. The last month was spent in the library going trough some books mostly on elements and magic but also on the geoghraphy of the land Jin was now living in.
Jin found out he was living in the Sun empire of the Sky continent, next to the Sun empire was the moon and star forrest which was the elf kingdom. The mountain valleys which belonged to the dwarves and the desolate lands belonged to the demon kingdoms but they had not been seen for thousands of years.
The next four years Jin spendt in the Yi clans library learning about the culture, history of the continent an other races especially the languages of the elf, dwarves and demons. After four years Jin could speak the dwarves language and the basic of elven but had problems with the demonic language, but they had not been around for thousand of years so he didnt mind it that much.
Jin had grown he was now just around one meter in height a little shorter then other children his age. Jin looked more like his mother with beautiful auburn hair to his shoulders white healty skin and a pair of piercing green eyes. And because of his ordinary body without any muscles he looked a little femine.
Soon it was the date set for the elemental affinity test for warrior and mages to decide which path they should tread on.
Jins father was now the bodyguard and instructor for the second prince Yiu Sei who just turned five and would travel with him to the elemental affinity test so that left Jins mother Yi Jun to travel with Jin.
Jins mother walked up to Jin and told him "just because your father dos not take you with him for the elemental affinity test does not mean he dont love you,"
Jun looked Jin in the eyes to see if he understood and continued to say "but his responsibilty to the imperial family as the instructor and guard for the second prince wont allow him to take you. " Jun told him this while giving Jin a big hug and a kiss on the cheek. Jin did not really care that much about his faher. From the time he was born the only ones that talked to him and cared was his mother and parternal grandfather, one of the elders of the clan that hoped Jin would become a mage.
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