a/n: i wanted to write more for charm's death scene, but i thought that it would be a little much for one chapter. looking

back on it i feel unsatisfied with it. so here is a rewrite of it.

in the end the only ones to stay were ghost and Johanna, the others going back up to the bed, not necessarily to sleep. i

start to get to work cutting her up. i heal the wounds i make as i cut her fingers and toes off before eating them in full

view of her, i then apply a huge dose of paralytic which makes he unable to move anything below the neck. i cut chunks

out of her left leg and eat a couple of them.

"mmmm, tasty. the flesh of gods has an absolutely divine flavor, not only that but it gives a huge power boost" jack

i give her my best bloodstained smile, scaring the shit out of her, literally.

"damn it, i can't have you soiling the meat." jack

i use some water magic and wash her, making sure she is completely clean before stooping. i can feel the fear leaking off

of her mind. i cut the rest of her left leg off below the knee.

"i wonder what it would taste like cooked." jack

i use some fire to sear the leg, causing the bone to become brittle and snap in places, the hair to all burn off, and, after

the sent of burning hair disappears, lets off a mouthwatering sent. i take a bite and it tastes much different than it did

when raw, instead of sweet it tastes savory. the crunch of the bone is softer, less like hard Candy and more like a saltine

cracker.

"hmm, definitely a different flavor, it still tastes divine, but it is savory instead of sweet." jack

now in addition to fear i can feel a twinge of sorrow. i cut of the right leg below the knee and eat it the same way as the

first. the only problem with cooking it is the blood, there isn't enough of it. i eat the upper legs raw, leaving her with

nothing below the waist. naturally i close up the wounds with a little magic.

i then use force magic to carefully remove her pelvic bone with out letting her bleed out, took a full 10 minutes and was

mentally exhausting. i turned into my shadow form and tried to eat the bone that way, it was a rather interesting

experience. imagine tasting something absolutely delicious from every part of your body. i actually got an erection due

to the pleasure, fortunately it went away after i yelled at my emotions.

when i turned back Into my physical form i create a ball of magic with a particular function. i also make sure that it will

last for 24 hours, not that i will need it for that long. i then stick the hand holding the ball of magic into her chest and pull

out her heart, leaving the ball. the magic i inserted into her chest will function as a heart for around 24 hours before

disappearing.

"I'm stumped, should i eat your heart cooked or raw?" jack

after a moment of silence broken only by pained whimpering i realize that she can't speak due to the spell i cast on her

earlier.

"well, i don't think you can respond anyway" jack

i shove the whole heart in my mouth, leaving more blood on my mouth. the heart is easily the most delicious part of the

body that i have eaten thus far. i lose myself for what feels like a minute and find myself in front of a legless, armless

goddess. i then quickly heal her to prevent blood loss. i take out a dissection knife i brought for this time and make an

incision in her stomach and Begin to remove her organs one by one, or i would if she hadn't fainted. i wake her up with

some rejuvenation magic.

"bad girl, i can't have you falling asleep" jack

i start to remove her organs one by one, eating them while remaking the vital ones the same way as i did with the heart.

of course i didn't eat the intestines, something about shit seems unappetizing. i then begin to remove her vertebrae one

by one, snacking on them like chips, they have a similar texture. after I'm done with the vertebrae i remove her tail bone, and then her ribs, now the only bone in her body is her skull, and I'm not so sure that i can remove it without killing her so

I'll save that for last.

i look down at the saggy lump of flesh that used to be a divine creature and decide what part to eat next. i decide to start

at the bottom, i cut chunks out of her and pop them in my mouth for about an hour before she is nothing but a head that I'm keeping alive through pure magic, i had to drink a couple mana potions and borrow from Johanna's rather small mana

pool.

i lift the spell i had on her voice and form vocal cords for the head as i pick it up.

"any last words?" jack

as soon as i say that she starts crying, loudly, for about twelve seconds. after that she just stops. roughly a minute latter

she speaks.

"end it, please just end it" charm

"fine" jack

i was going to keep the head for some psychological experimentation if she had said anything other than pleading for me

to end her life, but i realized that it would be to mana intensive to keep it alive for much longer than a day, mabey i could

get a slave.

i throw the head into the air and keep it afloat with magic as i turn into my shadow form and eat it that way. and all that

remains of the goddess is a bloodstain on the floor and some intestines, oh there's also a bladder.

"let's go get some breakfast" jack

"aren't you full after, you know" Johanna

"of course i am, breakfast is for you" jack

"alright! let's go! i heard Mary is making bacon this morning!" ghost

as i follow them upstairs i read their minds for any hint of disgust, and find none. instead there's not much for ghost, eat

prey to get stronger is normal in nature, and a twinge of excitement for Johanna, blood lust, not lust.

and there it is folks, you don't get a chapter this time though. please tell me what you think about this.