《Another Naruto Fanfic (Not For Fun)》Chapter 9: Doing what Orochimaru couldn’t
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I am now almost 1 year old. In the last three months, Hika and I were giving our utmost efforts to turn the Yamanaka Mind Body Techniques from a support oriented technique into a battle oriented technique. At first we thought that Mind Body Techniques were based on genjutsu, but after investigating more, it turned out that the Mind Body Techniques are somewhat similar to Dan Kato's Ghost Transformation Jutsu. Mind Body Techniques most basic form is Mind Body Switch Technique, which launches your conscious toward the enemy's body. The strongest conscious will take control of the host. At the start, the enemy will be overwhelmed by the surprise of having another conscious entering inside his body, but later they will learn how to fight back, and regain control of their body.
Dan Kato's Ghost Transformation Jutsu is similar in a way that it will let his soul leave his body, but his soul will be able to roam freely giving it an advantage on Mind Body Techniques. The second technique of the Mind Body Techniques, is Mind Body Disturbance Technique, which is actually one of the strongest techniques in the ninja world, but the way the Yamanaka clan use it is stupid. The B-ranked ninjutsu should surely be classified as a kinjutsu; due to the fact that it is able to clone the user's conscious and the launch it into the enemy's body.
In a way, Mind Body Disturbance Technique is too similar to Shadow Clone jutsu, with one cloning your conscious and launching them into clones that are capable of holding your cloned consciouses within them, while the other clones your conscious and launch them into the enemies.
Copying one's conscious doesn't seem very strong at the beginning, but studying mine's and Hika's souls, we found out that the conscious and the soul has mostly the same characteristics, which means, like Dan's Ghost Transformation Jutsu, if we can add Yin Chakra into our conscious before launching it, then it should have the same withering effect that Ghost Transformation Jutsu has.
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It took us two months and a lot of efforts to find out this information. In the last month before me reaching the age of one year, we were searching for a way to add Yin Chakra into my conscious when it leaves my body. I suggested sending Hika's conscious first, but soon withdrew my proposal after he explained to me that his conscious and soul are directly connected to his chakra, which means the moment his conscious leaves him, the burden of having so much chakra will take a toll on his soul, weakening it and causing it to be damaged. After thinking for days, we found so many options, but we chose the best option, which is unifying my conscious with some of Hika's.
As Hika explained earlier, his conscious and soul are directly connected to his chakra, which means, if his chakra circles inside my body, it will have the characteristics of his conscious and soul. When launching my conscious at the enemy using Mind Body Switch Technique, while using Hika's chakra to activate it, a part of his chakra will leave my body with my conscious, uniting both my conscious and his conscious fragment. This technique will nurture my soul and conscious if I use it repeatedly. The more I use it, the more stronger it becomes. It also won't hurt Hika, since the conscious fragment that he will send with me will come back the moment I regain my conscious.
In theory, the amount of damage I am able to inflict with this technique is based on the difference between the amount of yin chakra accompanying my conscious and the amount of chakra in the victim's body.
After sending my conscious outside of my body, my body will be exposed to a lot of danger without me controlling it, or at least this is what I thought. Hika, being so old and wise, said that he can control my body when my conscious is outside.
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I called the new technique created by both me and Hika, Mind Body Withering technique... Yes... I am not creative at making names~
In less than a year I was able to advance my understanding of conscious and soul by a huge margin. I might be having a better understanding of souls than Orochimaru currently, and I don't plan to stop learning about consciouses and souls anytime soon.
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