《The new Hope: Carnage and Extermination (Droped )》Volume 2 Chapter 2 : Reunion
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Because demonar hasn't contacted me ever since he proofreaded chapter 3 and 4 .. this means no new proofreads from him for now. I'll post this chapter as it is and wait for demonar to proofread it.
on and btw I've read a disturbing review on the main page... It gaved me a very harsh review.. while I agree that my novel it might seem weird and i really love to have good reviews what disturbed it was that he/she stoped reading only after chapter 2.And from that point on i started to ask myself "How many think like him and sudddenly just stop reading" this question is currently bugging me but I'd like to think that there are very few like him. And for theo ens that were a bit blaffeled from the fact that I maked a prologue so long I recomand you to read Eulalias Adventures the author KK_Akatsuki MAKED A PROLOGUE LONG OF 37 CHAPTERS...yeah you heard me 37 chapters and those chapters are a lot longer than my tiny little excuse of a fanfic.(sobs) Anyway elt get the story started don't we?
~~~~~~ Chapter 2 Reunion.
As we were traveling in the carriage we could see the fortress By the looks of it we'll be there in 2 days.
*We're almost there* I whispered to myself but it seems that Kana... heard it
* 5 more minutes mom* That was Kana which was sleeping peacefully on my shoulder heard it https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRIjQUZbDIfP1Z1JrSsY5q6S0nDG_ArgxZDxJ8JumtrZzNhvBncfg ( this is the most similar thing i found just imagine it in a carriage and it's pretty damn close)
*It's already noon sweetie* I whispered in her ear.
Huh... what? Only noon? wake me up when it's dark or when we reach the fortress* after that she went back to sleep
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Sabrina which seemed to be awake for as long as I was, looked a bit down.
*Sabrina what's wrong.. What’s with that face?* I asked her because she showed that face sometimes along the road but this time it was worse than ever.
* I just hope dad will recognize us, we changed a lot and even if I missed him i'm also scared and wondering if he is ok.*
* don’t worry I doubt dad would ever forget you. Before he left it was clear that you were his favorite and as for me if he forgot i'll make him remember what he forgot by force* in that moment a small smirk appeared on my face.
*But i'm still worried what if something happened to him?*
At that moment i couldn't stop but laugh
*Hahahahaha. You think too little of our father, if he was that weak then he wouldn't be the lord of an entire region. Unless the heroes themselves come the humans and faes don't stand a chance, and from what I heard the human lands are currently in a big mess as many factions continue to have a civil war *I've hear this a year ago from dad's last letter. Ever since he stopped writing as urgent matter wouldn't allow him to write but it seemed that the war would last for a few years at least..
* You're right but I'm still worried*
* you’ll see you have nothing to fear when we reach there. We have only around 2 days left*
*Ok*
Despite our little talk Kana was still sleeping she must be really bored.
~~~~ 2 days later
We have reached the fortress and when we reached the fortress a guard stopped us
*Halt who goes there?*
*I'm Arius Darkhearth son of Sabrath and Aria Darkhearth. I'm here to see my father and to join the military*
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* I'm Sabrina Darkhearth daughter of Sabrath and Aria Darkhearthhere for the same reasons*
*I'm Kana Windwalker daughter of Sarah and Sirius Windwalker and I'm here as their companion*
*The son and daughter of the commanders? I'll need something to confirm it.*
*Take this* I presented him a letter from dad that still had its mark so they could recognize it and let us to pass In that moment a large explosion could be heard from the camp.
*That looks like one of mom magic attack* I murmured but the guard seemed unfazed as if he was used to this.
*Let's go in!*Said Sabrina ... * Mom seems to be in a bad mood I wonder what father did*
*Yeah let's go in* i nodded and Kana just followed us.
As we were advancing I could hear mom shouting and saying *Just what are you thinking not telling me that the kids are coming over but telling her???*
We could now see the scene and there it was father been strangled by mom which has holding him with her left hand by his neck and we could feel bloodlust and anger from her and fear from dad..*hihihi* All of us let a small laugh that mom heard. Her gaze now met ours and a deep cold and fear installed in our bodies. Mom is scary, too scary. As she saw us she let out dad and came running at us.
*Hello little ones is good to see you graduated* she said that as she was hugging us and acting as If the scene before when she released that insane amount of killing intent never happened.
*I'm so happy to see you graduated but who is she?*
My name is Kana and I'm Arius's fiancee.*
*Fiancé???* She said that with a deep mix of emotions as if she couldn't believe her 10 years old child had a fiancée (remember he looks like a 20 years old)
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End of chapter I'm looking forward on hearing your opinions guys* (girls)
PS :demonar will be busy with his exams it seems so we'll have to wait for the new proofreads.
Thanks to mataneloro for pr-ing
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