《The new Hope: Carnage and Extermination (Droped )》Explications and other stuffs
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I've been hearing a lot of "grammar mistakes " and "rushed story" so I decided to explain them both here.
1.About the grammar mistakes. English isn't my first language and when after i write I sometimes don't read it again to proofread it sorry but that's how my braind works
2. About the story been rushed. What's you've seen in volume 1 isn't the story... and now you'll be like WHAT??????????... but i've already said that was the prologue volume...In it are only pieces of information wich I gaved ya in order to understand the actions the MC and how the story goes... This is like getting you ready for the story with a prologue but instead of 1 or 2 chapters I maked the prologue spread over an entire volume just for you... you should be gratefull that I decided to give you such a long prologue and I'm surprised none observed the fact that the story wasn't there and those were almost like flashback I gaved ya in order to get you used with the story but i understand i can't expect you to think like me so I decided to explain what I want with this story in this little place...
And now you'll whine about why was a reincarnation tag necesary if you were just going to give us a story of a demon leading an demon army and fighting for survival against humans. Well his old life is linked with the heroes part of the story but I won't tell you anymore as that would be spoilers.
And last why I decided to make the prologue so long? for fun offcourse. I'm not a chaos-head for nothing.
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