《Void God Emperor》Suggestions ,critics,mistakes and helps
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Hey Guys,I decided to create a thread for the readers to suggest and critic me !
Well some people are saying that I don't know how to write or the story is good and so bla bla bla.
I want to hear you guys tell me what to do.
Well as I have told some people I don't write for money ,but I write to experience the emotion of writing and have fun writing .
Many popular authors have started from nothing to everything.
I have read many novels like :Stellar Transformation,Panlong ,I Shall the Heaven,True Martial World,Xian Ni and so.
And these ideas of mine come purely from these xianxia novels .
As you know xianxia means immortal hero.
But...you can't leave a well without help can you ? ^.^
Thus from today until the day I die (Just Joking) everyday I shall read anything that is wrote here.
You also can write small stories, if you want that is .
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Something Smells Flowery
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