《Void God Emperor》Suggestions ,critics,mistakes and helps
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Hey Guys,I decided to create a thread for the readers to suggest and critic me !
Well some people are saying that I don't know how to write or the story is good and so bla bla bla.
I want to hear you guys tell me what to do.
Well as I have told some people I don't write for money ,but I write to experience the emotion of writing and have fun writing .
Many popular authors have started from nothing to everything.
I have read many novels like :Stellar Transformation,Panlong ,I Shall the Heaven,True Martial World,Xian Ni and so.
And these ideas of mine come purely from these xianxia novels .
As you know xianxia means immortal hero.
But...you can't leave a well without help can you ? ^.^
Thus from today until the day I die (Just Joking) everyday I shall read anything that is wrote here.
You also can write small stories, if you want that is .
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Under the light of the three suns, the scorching sands of The Great Desert test any who are brave and or foolish enough to cross its vast and treacherous expanse. With each passing year, it becomes more and more of a necessity as The Great Desert is ever expanding. Omid knew this as he signed onto a caravan crossing. He knew of the dangers and ancient magics that this unrelenting land holds. He knew of ancient kingdoms long lost, buried by the sands. He knew of the strange in-human inhabitants, the true masters of The Great Desert seeking to expand their dominion and drive humanity to the edges of the world. When he is offered the chance to learn magic from a master, Omid agrees eagerly at the chance to discover such ancient arts, and to even dream of defending against a hostile world and all that would claim to rule it. But nothing in this formidable domain is ever easy, nor simple, nor as it seems. Be vigilant, act with cunning, and always remember to choose your words wisely. (Cover art by https://www.deviantart.com/dyrdottir)
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I Was Summoned To Have Tea With The Demon Lord [Rewrite]
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On Hiatus Seekers are those who seek immortality. They cultivate the mind and body, growing ever stronger by absorbing energy from the world. When two powerful Seekers decide to play a game, it’s the unlucky mortals they pick as players that will suffer. Graham is one such player, plucked from his normal life like a feather from a chicken. Will he be able to survive in a wilderness with a hostile environment, deadly monsters, and fourteen other players, each hoping to win the game and gain their freedom? If you enjoy the story, consider voting for it on Top Web Fiction! You can also find this story at my website: Outtathisworld Fiction
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"how disrespectful of you""and?"...lust through the internet (this will contain sexual scenes)highest rank: #1 yugyeom#1 in jinyoung#2 in got7lowercase intended :)
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