《Avine: The Journey》Human Arc - Chapter 3: The Queen's Invitation
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The royal palace of Firanen sits on the Seabreaker cliffs and is a master-crafted fortress. During the course of the last demon war with a direct invasion of the human continent underway, the major powers of the land recognized Firanen’s defensive capabilities. Invaluable relics, as well as texts of both ancient and cutting edge knowledge were transported into the city for safekeeping. The surge, known as the Pageflight caused such an overflow of the city library that a park within the fortress grounds was appropriated to construct a new, bigger library in which to keep the most valuable and ancient books. Using knowledge from the books, the grand Kildenmelder Girlanfir, at the cost of his life, cast great spells to ensure the cliffs would not crumble. Another spell made sure that knowledge inside the books could not leave the library in the minds of its readers, lest the book itself was removed.
Passing through the outer ring of defenses of the castle proved to be a lot easier than the city gates. Serin’s work as a book-keeper within the library allowed her to pass with ease. Mariel only met with one sceptical look from a royal guard, but was let through without incident.
The two crossed the courtyard, lined on both sides by the royal guard. Zigzagging between scholars and scribes all busily copying texts and writing on stacks of paper. A few painters were capturing the beauty of the centrally placed fountain, topped by a marble statue in the image of a dolphin.
Once inside they were immediately split up. Serin was dragged off by a group of servants to solve a problem in the library while Mariel was gently led by a pair of servant twins somewhere else. After a long walk through a myriad of finely decorated corridors and opulent halls, she was finally led outside onto a big balcony overlooking the city.
“So why am I here?” She asked, but the servants simply shared a grin and said nothing.
“Can I leave?”
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Once more the pair shook their heads in perfect sync.
“Don’t worry, it’s just that someone…”
“Wishes to have a word with you. The two twins complimented each with a perfectly formed, two-part sentence and immediately left the balcony.
“Hello child.” An old woman emerged onto the balcony wearing a resplendent dress and a gem-studded circlet.
“Your highness…” Mariel immediately bent her knees and lowered her head in reverence. The old woman chuckled and bid her stand.
“My, how did you know? Have you perhaps seen my picture?”
“No your highness… Your wonderful clothes definitively belong to royalty, but your signet ring bear the royal seal, and look well used with some crusts of wax still left on it… I guessed.”
The queen clapped her hands and a wide smile emerged on her elegant but time-worn face.
“You have such a keen eye my dear, I am truly thrilled!”
“Um, so why am I here? Where’s my mother?”
“Attending to some minor business, I wanted this time alone with you so we could talk a little.”
The queen led her inside through a different door, entering into something resembling an office. Lined up and down along the walls were huge stacks of books, documents and ledgers. A simple bed, a solid oak desk, an old cushioned chair with a matching footstool and some picture frames.
“Please sit my dear… Would you like some tea?” The queen sat down in the chair and grabbed a teapot on a tray with two cups and some additives.
“Yes please… But, should not I pour your tea your highness?”
“Not in here… This is my private quarter. In here, I am merely Patricia, this is where I indulge in simpler ways of life.”
The queen poured them a cup of tea each and proposed a small toast to happy meetings. The scent and flavour of the tea left Mariel stunned.
“But… Why would you indulge this simple lifestyle when you have everything you could ever want?”
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The queen smiled and picked up an old dusty frame from her desk and handed it to Mariel.
“That’s me, when I was your age, I was a simple country girl living with my family, but I fell in love with a young and dashing prince…”
“Almost like a child’s tale…”
“Yes and I have never regretted it… But I… Would like to ask you some things that I feel are important.”
“Sure, I’ll try to answer as best I can.”
While Mariel and the queen exchanged words about Mariel’s childhood, Serin was busy concerning herself with various copies of books that needed proof-reading and approval.
The library’s interior had been mainly built out of stone, only the bookshelves and the necessary furniture were wood or in the case of the huge chandeliers; wrought iron. Tall bookshelves lined every single open section of wall, with tall ladders leaned against them. Librarians went back and forth, sorting books, making copies and returning books to their backbreaking spots high on the shelves.
“See to it that the pre-imperial texts are translated by next week… And bring three scribes to handle the copying!” Serin signed off on a paper and pushed a stack of books across her desk.
“Sorry Serin, you’re the only one that can handle this mess in a good way…” Her personal assistant Ghiranath apologized and disappeared through a nearby door with the books.
“Heavens above…” Serin sighed and signed another set of documents.
“Hey! Hold on! Those books belong to shelf F 418 C! Get it right the first time!” She shouted to a pair of librarians rolling a stack of books in the wrong direction.
After what felt like an eternity, the hustle and bustle had finally died down sufficiently to allow Serin to think about escaping to the banquet when the doors opened and the King, flanked by two guards and the Archpriest of Yulie strode into the library. Immediately the male servants bowed and the female staff bent their knees. Serin, without thinking made the Imperial courtesy by placing her open hand across her collarbone with her left hand.
“Your majesty? How may we serve?” She asked, but the king waved his hand dismissively.
“Oh, nothing like that my dear… I am merely here to bring you to my banquet… I appreciate your dedication, but this is your day off is it not?”
“Yes your highness, but I felt I could not leave this mess without attendance.” She made a gesture to the remaining, but noticeably lessened stacks of literature.
“You are the driving force behind the library after all… But speaking of dedication… I agreed to lend you to the Archpriest of Yulie briefly… Please come to the banquet hall once you finish up.”
“I will your majesty, post haste.”
The king nodded and left the room.
Serin put aside her fountain pen and walked over to the Archpriest and knelt before the old man.
“Your reverence? What service may I provide for you?”
The old man smiled behind his great white beard and bid her stand.
“No child. I am here to personally thank you.” The priest revealed a small wooden box in his hand and opened it, taking out a small brooch in the shape of a white rose. Serin immediately recognized the symbol and dropped to one knee.
“Y-your worship! I do not deserve such an honour!”
The old man bid for her to stand once more and gently placed the white brooch on her left, just next to her shoulder. “Your reaction makes you even more worthy. Yulie knows to treasure the selfless acts of her followers... Wear this brooch proudly with Yulie, and my thanks.”
“I accept this great honour with equal humility.”
“Thank you, child. Now go. Your presence is required elsewhere is it not?”
Serin took her leave and headed at once for the banquet hall.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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