《Broken System》Klocrad The Undead Dwarf and David?!
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*Yawn* that was a decent rest. Hmm it's only 7. I should be able to kill the next boss. Let's buy potions and then head out.
Ding - Host has purchased x10Health Potion. Minus 100 Credits.
Ding - Host has purchased x10Mana Potion. Minus 100 Credits.
Ding - Host is entering dungeon, Please don't move. 3...2...1... Enjoy.
Well then let's go see who were are fighting this time.
Klocrad the Undead Dwarf: 4500 Health
Oh my god.. I am fighting a freaking midget with an axe. Wait.. Hes fighting somebody? Who the heck else can be in the Dungeon? WAIT! that's David isn't it? And hes losing. Dammit let's help him first ask questions later.
"Teleport!"
"Lightning Hurricane!"
"Teleport!"
I dropped a Lightning Hurricane and teleported out with David in my hand.
"David the hell are you doing in the Dungeon?"(Me)
"Jack? i knew you were like me when I saw you yesterday!"(David)
"Yesterday? What do you mean?"(Me)
"I felt mana all around your body. So I assumed you could use magic and I was right. Besides that let's kill him before we continue our talk"(David)
"HuuUMaaanS!!"(Klocrad?)
As if to agree he yells at us and charges with his axe. I step back and fire magic at him to stop him while david charges at him.
"Ice Path!"
"Dark Spear!"
"Earth Spikes!"
-350
-50
David slashes at Klocrad's head with his spear and tears out an eye.
-1500
Klocrad the Undead Sword: 2600
He is close to dying so I drink a Mana pot and fire my strongest spell at him
+150 mana
"Lightning Hurricane!"
-2000
It doesn't kill him but david follows up for the kill
"Crescent Slash!"
-700
Ding - Host has killed Krocrad the Undead Dwarf: Plus 12000 Xp, 3000 Credits.
Ding - Host has leveled up. Plus 25 Hp,25 Mp,4 to each stat,20 Stat points,20 Credits.
"Okay so let's talk about you being here, David."(Me)
"Guess so."(David)
1 hour later
"So basically your family is one of the big families in the magic part of the world, That also happens to run a martial arts dojo? Did I get that right?"(Me)
"Yea, You got it right. But how are you able to use magic?"(David)
"About 2 weeks ago I was struck by lightning when the sky was clear, Next thing I knew I woke up in the hospital and infront of me was a status screen and then I got missions leveled up to 3 and got access to the dungeon. After that I started buying magic and clearing the floors and bosses. And then you transfered and now we are here. That's about it."(Me)
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"Wow I don't know what to say. You are either really lucky or really unlucky."(David)
"Honestly I feel pretty lucky that I got this system, Basically changed my life letting me do more with it."(Me)
"If you say so. Anyway we should probably leave for school now since we only have 30 minutes."(David)
"OH SHIT! I forgot about that well I will see you at school."(Me)
30 minutes later
As soon as I walked into the class David called out to me.
"Hey there Jack."(David)
"Damn dude how the hell did you get here so fast?"(Me)
"Haha I live like 5 minutes away from the school. You are pretty unlucky to love 45 minutes away. But atleast you made it on time."(David)
"Dammit I should just buy an apartment closer to school ugh."(Me)
"If you want to move closer to school just move into my place. I live with my sister there but we have like 5 spare rooms. We got a pretty good apartment there."(David)
"Seriously? If you are offering i'll come over there after school to see if it's fine."(Me)
"Sounds good. I'll wait for you at the gate then so i can wlak you there."(David)
Just as I was about to reply the teacher came in.
"Alright everyone be quiet it is time for class."(Teacher)
"Alright Jack. Can you come up to the board and solve this problem."(Teacher)
"Sure."(Me)
5 times 12 to the power of 7 divided by 4
"The answer is 44789760."(Me)
"Correct. Good job Jack."(Teacher)
The teacher looked surprised by how accurate and fast I answered that question but he seemed proud for some reason. When I returned to my seat David was dumbstruck.
"Dude.. How did you answer that in like 5 seconds?"(David)
"System and a massive increase in Wisdom and Intelligence."(Me)]
"Damn that is so cheating"(David)
"Tell me about it. All my stats have gone up by atleast 10-20 times their original by now."(Me)
"Damn you are probably one of the strongest youths in the magic world then."(David)
"Is there a tournament or something? How do people know the rankings?"(Me)
"Yeah there is a tournament in the summer every year. All around the world youths with magic come to it to see who can get first place. There are prizes for the top 3 and they are normally important for people with magic and rare."(David)
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"I see. I guess we will both be heading there then."(Me)
":Yea it is in 2 weeks. You best be ready for that. We are going to have to run the dungeon a lot and get stronger if we want a chance to win."(David)
"Sounds good to me. I need more Credits for my status"(Me)
End of school
"Alright Jack. Let's head to my house then we will go to yours if you can move in with me."(David)
"Alright"(Me)
David's House
"I'm home"(David)
"Welcome back"(???)
"Hey sam. I brought home a friend from school who will probably be moving in with us so introduce yourself. The magic way."(David)
She looked surpsied but quickly introduced herself to me.
"Hello my name is Samantha. You can just call me Sam. I am a rank 5 Mage. It is nice to meet you."(Sam)
"Hello, My name is Jack. I'm not sure what ranks are but I am pretty strong with Magic."(Me)
"Oh yeah you started this thing 2 weeks ago. Well ranks are divided by your Magic.
Rank 1 is for Mages who can use one type of element.
Rank 2 is for Mages who can use two types of Elements.
Rank 3 is for Mages who can use 3 Types of Elements.
Rank 4 is for Mages who can use 4 types of Elements.
Rank 5 is for Mages who have mastered one type of Element
Rank 6 is for Mages who mastered 2 types of Elements.
Rank 7 is for Mages who mastered 3 types of Elements.
Rank 8 is for Mages who mastered 4 types of Elements.
Rank 9 is for Mages who can use abnormal elements, Like Space and Darkness.
Rank 10 is for Mages who can use every element out there.
Then Rank 11-15 is for Mages who have mastered every Element and have insane firepower with them."(David)
Wow he said that all in one breath and it seems pretty amazing with that kind of system. I should check what Rank I would be.
-Status-
-Name:Jack Bolard
-Race:Human
-Gender:Male
-Age:18
-Level:21(17000 xp to lvl up)
-Health:365/365(0.34 Regen/Minute)
-Mana 300/300(0.34 Regen/Minute)
-Strength:107
-Speed:67
-Dexterity:67
-Vitality:46
-Endurance:42
-Wisdom:60
-Intelligence:80
-Charm:20
-Weight:192.6
-Height:5"11'
-Skill List: Mana Control, Mana Manipulation, Fire Magic. FireBall, Sword Mastery, Wind Magic, Lightning Magic,Wind Cutter,Lightning Spear,Lightning Maelstorm,Healing Magic,Heal,High Heal,Earth Magic,Water Magic,Ice Magic,Inventory,Teleportation Magic,WaterBall,Water Wall,Fire Spear,Fire Wall,Water Arrow,Earth Wall,Earth Spikes,Earth Arrow,Lightning Arrow,Ice Wall,Ice Path,Ice Blizzard,Cure Disease,Martial Arts(Advanced),Hand To Hand,Spear Mastery,Gun Mastery,Darkness Magic,Dark Arrow,Dark Spear,Shadow Control,Sneak,Shadow Ride,Invisibility, Lightning Hurricane
-Stat Points: 0
-Credits: 25600
-Shop Tab-
-Mission Tab-
-Dungeon Tab-
-Locked-
"I guess I would be a rank 9 mage. I have both Space and Darkness magic and I have mastered Wind, Lightning and Ice magic. Aswell as having all the other elements."(Me)
Both David and Sam are dumbstruck then yell at me.
"YOU HAVE SPACE AND DARKNESS MAGIC AND ALL ELEMENTS WITH 3 MASTERED!??!"(David&Sam)
"Uhhh.. Yes?"(Me)
"Holy shit bro, What kind of freak friend did you make at school?! It's been 2 days!"(Sam)
"I don't know! He said he has only had Magic for 2 freaking weeks!"(David)
"Uhh hey. I got my System 2 weeks ago and Magic about a week and a half ago. I used magic ever since in the dungeon every day for about 7 hours. I also kind of created my own kind of magic."(Me)
"You created your own magic you say?"(David)]
"Yeah I was fighting the 10th floor boss when I was too weak so I ended up trying to fuse Wind and Lightning magic and created Lightning Hurricane. It basically takes away close to half of the bosses health from floor 15's boss."(Me)
"Huh. No wonder we killed the boss so fast. So it was because of that magic."(David)
"Yeah. It was a spur of the moment thing and I am glad I created it."(Me)
"Alright enough of this. Since you are going to be living here go home and grab whatever you are bringing here and then come back Tomorrow. I'll get your room ready for then."(David)
"Alright. See you in a bit tomorrow David."(Me)
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