《Odyssey》The November Update!
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Hello everyone! Digital Riot here, and I have come with a very exciting announcement! I'm proud to announce the November Update! Essentially, it is a major overhaul of a lot of things for Odyssey!
First and most noticeably of all: Everything looks different! I finally got my own cover art and banner (Created by me :D and with a few second opinions from KoiYujo!) I personally love the art far more than the previous one - which was meant to be a placeholder anyway. This art really represents the vibe that I wanted to take the story in more or less, displaying the modern and fantasy worlds side-by-side. So that's that out of the way!
Second: Chapters 1-4 (The Opening, Red Letter Day, Fargo The Great, and Point insertion), are being almost completely rewritten and combined into two new chapters named; Talking Heads Want To Rule The World, and, Red Letter Day.
The reason for this is simply because my state of mind going into writing this story is almost entirely different from now. What I mean by that is simple, this story origi ally started out on Fanfiction.net as a Gate Fanfic. When I uploaded to Royal Road, I thought that I was just going to copy past everything and leave it at that, only improving and tweaking some things here and there slightly. As such, the introductory sections for my story are almost completely the same. But the issue is that Odyssey has grown much more than that, and has grown in a completely different direction. As such, I needed to rewrite the opening as the vibe of the first four chapters does not match the later chapters at all.
Not only that, but this also to improve your reading experience. The original four chapters (Especially Chapter 3 as pointed out by the wonderful horizon108) is filled with long winded info-dumps and ridiculous dialogue that makes the story arguably worse. This is a symptom of me still being in the mindset of writing fanfiction, and I have plans to tweak a lot more chapters that suffer from that. All in all, improvements are finally here!
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(The original chapters are still being kept as a comparison point, you are free to reread them if you wish and compare the two).
Third: Chapter 35 Kafkaesque is coming on Friday at exactly 12 o'clock PM EST, and what that means is that we are going to start exploring a lot more of the emotional side of all our characters. As you can already tell, there is a lot of drama going on right now, especially within Unity. Hezekiah has gotten himself in some deep shit, and his problems are only gonna get worst. The same is true for a lot of other characters. I intend to exploit the dynamics of Hezekiah and his squad, explore Cathy's character further, and tie Yuri more firmly into the setting. In the rewritten introductions, Wendover, Perceval, Newman and Sherman have been expanded as a characters too! Of I do this right, we'll get some really great chapters in the future with these guys.
Fourth: I've fixed a few more grammar issues Devil Dogs, which had quite a surprising amount. I'm not sure if I caught them all. But we'll see.
Fifth: changed some tags around, nothing major.
Alright, that's all for now. If you could, consider dropping a favorite or a review, they really do help a ton! And if you have a question, concern, or just wanna chat, feel free to leave a comment as well!
Until next time, :D.
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Return of the Woodcutter
Aito Walker was a self-proclaimed martial artist, a criminal, a broken man, and a fishing slave who later became a woodcutter before dying due to his heavy consumption of alcohol.With thousands of other humans, he is forcefully revived into a boundless grey space by the gods of a foreign world, Iris, to take part in a never-ending war waged against Fearmongers. A race capable of corrupting living beings and inducing fear, even the bravest of warriors cannot resist—when the Fearmongers do not kill them, that is.To bait humans into this conflict, the gods offer the mortals powers in exchange of eternal servitude and the completion of trials before finally entering Iris.Even though Aito doesn’t agree with it, he sees in Iris a chance to atone for his past misdeeds, in this fantasy world of swords and magic filled with many races, where everything seems possible.He will pave his own path despite the gods he despises trying to manipulate him into doing their bidding.Aito will start with almost nothing but his wit, a peculiar system, and increased strength—much like other revived humans.Bearing a sin—he could not, cannot, and will not forget—haunting him to this day, Aito will strive to regain what little honor he has left.He will suffer and, at times, fail. Taking advantage of his weaknesses, the Fearmongers, demigods, gods, and many others will hinder his path.But a powerful yearning will keep him from falling apart. An ever-burning flame melting away the despair and welding back the broken pieces of courage.A single desire.«I will find redemption no matter the cost.»………Or not, hun, who knows? The book isn’t done yet. Haha—SLAP!«Who put this guy in the synopsis narration?! Get him out of here and launch the warnings! Now!»***WARNINGS:— The MC is human. If you’re looking for a perfect MC, you’ll only be wasting your time here. However, if you’re looking for an MC who will LEARN, GROW because of his flaws. An MC who will try his hardest to overcome adversity, then you’re in the right place.— No harems. However, it doesn’t mean the characters can’t fool around without having love interests. A relationship isn’t necessary for people to satisfy their physical desires.— You will find a few typos, grammatical and wording issues, that’s certain. I’ll do my best to bring you guys quality content and such issues will either be nonexistent or extremely few. However, one man can only do so much. If I get enough support, I’ll hire an EDITOR that will look at the chaps with a fresh eye. And POOF! Issues no more. Improved quality. Happier author and reader. Not sure if the editor will be happy tho.— The first three chapters are fast-paced as to quickly get into the nitty-gritty but slow down afterward to give the story the time it needs to progress accordingly.— The book can, never mind, it will contain «strong» language, gore and violence.— Comedy, as you know it (and if you don’t, now you know) is subjective. So you might not like the jokes.— If you truly read that until the end you have my virtual congratulations ‘cause I sure as hell wouldn’t have done that.
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