《Path of Evil》Status Update #3
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Well, it looks like I'm back. In the same day nonetheless. It's me, the authors name you cant remember because I didn't add spaces! So guys, I rewrote chapter 11 and I'm planning to delete chapter 11.5 because it's no longer needed. 11.5 was really just to save face on 11, but now that I rewrote it, its just unessecary.
Yeah, so that's what I'm going to do with the chapters, but enough about that boring stuff, lets go onto the story. As you know, I'm a relatively new author, don't got much experience (as far as you know) and this story is my first. It was simple at first, built on the singular idea of a true evil protaganist, something I've never seen (probably because I never looked hard enough). I wrote this story, because I felt the frustration of finally finding a good evil story to read and then half-way through, he turns out to be some backwater anti-hero.
When I write these things, I never look over them. Why? I'm lazy, leave me alone. However, it doesn't mean I don't care what comes out. I want you to see Aenios for the true evil little bastard that he is. My writing just doesn't reflect my will sometimes. So, in order to find what works the best, I want to ask you, the readers, what your favourite moment was (so far). I'll take suggestions and feedback and turn recreate the writing style that you find the best.
It's been 2 months (I think more but I don't know) since Path of Evil started and I couldn't be happier with how its developing.
TLDR? None of this matters, go back to watching Boku No Pico.
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