《Superficial Story》Chapter 9: Back Home
Advertisement
[Miiia]: Master!
Miia is fucking one of her sons right now. Carrying my orders as told. Nice.
“Get me one of my daughters and get ready yourself. I will fuck you all while I wait.”
[Miia]: YES! MASTER!
My sons back up and my daughters and granddaughters approach.
They are weaker as farther away from my own lineage they have been born, but I don’t care.
I need to blow off some steam and these motherfuckers can endure only a few seconds of my dick each.
Tsc.
The ones beyond two generations can’t endure even that. They become insane the moment they touch my cock.
Tsc.
Don’t matter.
Insane demons are more than appropriate for hell.
Omniscience, how long until Andarluz reaches his army?
[Omniscience]: Two weeks.
Tsc.
I will expend this time building my hell them.
Let’s see.
First a front desk to receive and judge people.
I have more than enough Bad Karma Points now, so I can create minions with limited access to Omniscience.
They can’t get as much as I, but it’s enough to judge the life of the souls of mortals.
Now I expand this to around a hundred equal rooms.
Considering there’s 10 people getting here every second then I will give 10 seconds for the judgement to happen. It’s useless for them to defend themselves, but the minions don’t need to give them right to defense. They have access to the soul’s lives and can pass judgement according to what we have here.
This planet isn’t like earth, which had many pantheons ruling over it.
It is a whole universe created from scratch by the Fantasy Pantheon, so their rule here is supreme.
Omniscience, which is the regular list of sins and adequate punishments of the Fantasy Pantheon?
[Answer]: Here is the list.
Advertisement
Is it a divine sin for me to multiply all servitude time by 100 and make the punishments worse? Which is the reincarnation time of this world?
[Answer]: It is not a divine sin for the King of Evil to increase the punishments proposed on the list. However, creativity must be only added to the standard punishment. The standard punishment must be done.
[Warning]: It is a divine sin for the King of Evil to decrease punishments or fail in punishing the minimal punishment for a sin. Divine sins are punished heavily by the [Writters], therefore, don’t do it.
Yeah, yeah, I know.
[Answer]: The God Emperor has decided the reincarnation time of this planet to be 2 seconds after a soul reaches hell.
TWO SECONDS?
IS THIS MOTHERFUCKER INSANE?
[Answer]: Interference. Impossible to state the God Emperor’s state of mental health.
…
Tsc.
Omniscience, wouldn’t following this make me a divine sinner according to the fantasy pantheon’s rules?
[Answer]: Yes.
Then, how did my predecessor deal with it?
[Answer]: Interference. Impossible to say.
Tsc.
Fuck this guy.
Omniscience, how do I make all my minions become aware of the Sin’s List contents?
[Answer]: There are many methods. These are them.
Good.
Let’s go with the easier one.
[Miiia]: Master, I know what to do with many sinners now, but there are many witch doesn’t have any sin!
“Yeah, I know. Here’s the thing, I will change things a bit here.”
[Miiia]: Change?
“Just lick my balls. You will see.”
[Miiia]: Yes.
First I will create layers in this hell.
First layer will be “heaven hell” for those without any sin.
The Hellish Judgers will send those people there.
Since I can only furnish hell with bad karma points there isn’t much comfort I can give people in the first layer, but they will be free of material needs.
Advertisement
There.
No need to eat, sleep, have sex or anything.
Demons are also forbidden of going there to harm people. They can go to talk, but any harming, oppression or other things is forbidden.
Plus, let’s add some grass… a spiritual sun… day and night cicles… spiritual animals…
Ah, why not?
People there can even have pleasures.
They can have sex if they want the pleasure, just don’t have the need to do it.
And they can eat food from these always-filled banquet halls, and have fun with each other.
They can even have wars, but no one will die or feel pain.
Also, the land is infinite and they can find new kingdoms and lands for themselves if they want to.
Also, why not libraries?
And I will make a demi-god level minion to take care of the place and add things people ask him, as long as they aren’t too expensive. It will be my “suggestion box”.
Nice.
More than adequate.
Now, let’s start making real hell.
Layer 1, petty crimes, petty punishments.
Layer 2, bad crimes, heavy punishments.
Layer 3, people I don’t like and which I want to see suffer, freedom for all demons to do whatever they want to this people.
Layer 4… let’s just dump everything I have created so far in this layer and keep here for everyone who is a really bad motherfucker. People who raped their mothers and stuff like that.
Now a few minions to take care of each place.
Layer 4 stays with [Miiia] to take care off while I’m not home. Layer 3 will be given to [Ardulus], my first born son with her.
Layer 2 I will give to [Hashra], his first daughter. And Layer 1 stays with [Goodie] the minion I made to take care of the ones who haven’t sinned.
Also, let’s make a promotion system.
Once someone has suffered the increased penitence on the deeper layer of hell they are entitled to be punished on they will then be allowed to go to a higher level where they are punished for the rest.
Eventually everyone who behaves well and don’t commit other horrible crimes while in hell will reach Layer 1 and there will be able to ask for reincarnation if they want to.
Nice.
…
Wait.
Thinking better…
If the actions of those in my hell create karma for me… both bad and good… shouldn’t I have done this since the beginning?!
I could have reaped a lot of Good Karma Points so far if I hadn’t kept the good guys together with the serial killers and psychopathic murderers, couldn’t I?!!
[Answer]: Yes.
FUCK YOU OMNISCIENCE!
JUST FUCK YOU!
Advertisement
Draconic System Ascension
Isolated from society and neglected from birth a 34 year old man met an unfortunate end. Waking up in the body of a baby dragon. Where the world is filled with cultivators, read to see how a baby dragon evolves to survive in the ruthless world of cultivation. Evolving to be number 1.-------------------------The Cover is not mine and is from the internet. When I can I'll try to get my own
8 63Quitting the Hero's Guild
During the Scarlet Dawn Massacre, 17-year-old Qin Yang 'Ellen' is confronted by the villain, Nikolas Redfield. With the hero nowhere to be seen, the healer dies with the Moon Flower guild. Then, Ellen wakes up without her Celestial Silver Summoning Staff! And she's a kid again? How can she save the hero's guild? To quit it after paying off the 100,000 gold fee! Cover art by yours truly.
8 91Transformers: Heroes
Heroic Decepticons Alternate Universe. A century ago, the eons-old war between the Autobots and the Decepticons suddenly and inexplicably came to an end. Since then, many have gone their separate ways, whilst others still hold onto the bitter memories of war. Now, as Autobots and Neutrals join forces in a new directive to capture every Decepticon still left alive, it appears that the Autobots will finally get their chance to even the score, and defeat their enemies once and for all. But when they become the target of seemingly random, yet terrifying attacks, some begin to realize that the enemy may be much closer to home than anyone could have ever imagined. Author's Notes: While it helps to have a little bit of prior knowledge about the world of Transformers, you don't need to be a Transformers fan to enjoy this story, or even a Decepticons fan! One thing I can say for sure is that it is unlike any Transformers fan fiction you've ever come across. This story aims to explore one possible set of motivations in depth in a setting of ongoing conflict between the Autobots (and, more recently, the Alliance - a collaboration between Autobots and Neutrals) and the Decepticons. Although this story takes a lot of things from the G1 cartoon, it is by no means strictly G1 toon oriented and introduces characters and/or ideas from other continuities (Sentinel Prime, Jhiaxus, Thunderblast and Rook (not the Autobot Rook - the other Rook!). Set primarily on Cybertron and Alternity City, it also deviates from certain key elements common in Transformers canon. For one thing, the general consensus that all Autobots are good and all Decepticons are bad is challenged, and a new meaning to the motivations behind their conflict is offered (which is a recurring theme in my Heroic Decepticons Alternate Universes). Some personalities have been altered from their canonical profiles as a necessity (Megatron being the most obvious example) and developed to a much deeper level than the original cartoon allowed. I hope you enjoy and thanks for reading.
8 179King Trollex's Adventures: The First Rockfest
And they said being Transformed could not have got so wrong . . .Join King Trollex and Queen Barb as they begin the first Rockfest with a united Troll Kingdom. After the events of TWT, Trollex felt sad for Barb's World Tour not finishing with the end. so he decided to make the first ever Rock Zombie Fluids. Everything felt fine for Trollex, but what about the other trolls?
8 181KuroxReader
You find a cute black kitten on the streets, so you pick him up. Well, you thought he was a kitten...But can there be chemistry between you and the kitten?
8 182Roommates, with nightmares
When max moves back to her hometown to finish off her last two years In collage, she wasn't expecting to be walk in and see her high school bully.The worst part, is thy have to share a dorm. But will hey notice they have much of the same similarities when they both have nightmares that they wake up to screaming? And what will they do when they wind up cuddling every night?
8 149