《A Forgotten Soul》Not A Chapter, But A Question
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There will be no chapter today, the reason being I have exams. I'm really to busy to upload a chapter. I did write a draft in the short time I did have, but I'm not satisfied with it. It's not something I can even call decent at the moment so I don't intend on uploading it today or tomorrow. The next update would probably be next Saturday actually. But my exams end on Thursday, so I might write a chapter for my other story Gotta Gacha.
Now what made me bring this up was the current chapter, and the recent chapters I've been uploading. They just don't feel right to me. It might be to content, it might be some the systems, it might be the time skip, or it might be the perspective. And I really don't know what to do about it. I feel there is something wrong, but I can't tell what it is. So I'll be going around my other chapters in the spare time I have during my break, and I'll try and figure it out. I might even delete a few chapters, or change them. Either way I intend to make something change at the very least.
Now this might mean a few things, first off I might not release a new chapter sunday but a bunch of changes to the chapters. I might periodically change the chapters through the week, or I might just leave it be and continue until I figure it out. Anyways I'm going to set up a poll on the perspectives, cause that always bothers me and I'd like to ask all of you a question. What part of this story do you like and what parts of it do you hate.
Though I won't change the fact that he's immortal, that's gonna stay that way. And several things related to his immortality will probably stay as well.
Anyways sorry for this, but please answer my question it will really help. See you all next week I suppose.
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