《The garden of Eden》Chapter 5 training and ring
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I closed the door to my room and got to bed.
Pochi[ hello Edwin ]
Holy shit that surprise me! But that voice sounds familiar.
Edwin[ is that you Pochi ?]
Pochi[ yea It's me.]
Edwin[ did you just wake up Pochi ]
Pochi[ no I have been awake ever since you got your attributes.]
Edwin[ why did you not say anything sooner !]
Pochi[ I was waiting for the right time and plus you would had look like a crazy person since you are the only person that could hear me .]
Edwin[ I see thanks .]
Pochi[ well Edwin before anything there's three things I have to tell you ,first your physical body will start to get stronger than the average human body that also means that your instincts will sharpen greatly , second is your life span will be greater than even the elves thanks to me being in your body, and the last thing I will start teaching you dark magic.]
My jaw was wide open all of the things that Pochi told me where amazing. I did not know what was better that I will have a strong body or that I will live for a long time.
Edwin[ I think I made a great decision when I fused with you Pochi.]
Pochi[ we will start your training tomorrow at night in here ok Edwin .]
Edwin[ ok but tommorow I have my first practice with gramps.]
Pochi [ that means you will have to train harder.]
Edwin[ well goodnight ]
Pochi[ goodnight Edwin]
Today was a really long day.
I felt something shaking my bed and it was gramps.
The clock near my bed showed it was 5:00 am
Edwin[ why are you waking me up so early the sun is not even out yet.]
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Berg [ hurry up Edwin you wanted to learn how to use a sword right this is the time you have to wake up every day if you want to train.]
I get change and follow my grandpa to the garden.
Berg [ here Edwin I will give All of these so you could train.]
He gave me ankle weights,wrist weights, and a sword made of wood. The weight where each ten pounds each.
Berg [I bought those in my younger days when I traveled around those weight cost me a fortune. They could change how heavy they are and the heaviest is five hundred pounds each. For know only ten pound and as you go keep adding more to it.
Edwin [ thanks gramps.]
Berg [ start by running around town once with those weights. Then you will swing that sword one hundred times after that twenty five push ups and sit ups. Every week you will have to add a set to everything got it.]
Holy shit!! I think I might die with all this training and I still got Pochi's lesson later on I'm starting to regret this but there's no turning back.
After all the training that night I was tired but Pochi was about to teach me magic.
Pochi[ Edwin today we will only start with trying to see how your darkness looks. The darkness attribute is hard to control so when you use it you always have to concentrate now sit down on the floor]
I sat down like Pochi told me and started to concentrate. It was already the middle of the night so there was only a light stone a stone that glows and gives off light. I was sitting there for an hour or so when
Pochi [ open your eyes Edwin you did it take a look.]
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I opened my eyes and saw a really dark blue ring around me.
Pochi[ this is your darkness attribute it looks different depending on the person who has it.]
Edwin[ I see so mine is dark blue it's even darker than my hair.]
Pochi[ okay that's enough for today now get some sleep tommorow you have a long day.]
Edwin[ okay ]
I got into my bed and went to sleep the next day my body hurt a lot .
(One month later)
My body has gotten used to the training and my weights are now on twenty pounds. I have not taken them off since I got them from gramps a month ago. I now go to the forest near town to catch rabbits because my mom always praises me and we eat great dishes. I also sell some of them to the butcher in town for 3 copper coins this world currency is as follow
1 gold coin =20 silver coins
1 silver coin= 100 copper coins
I give my mom the money I make so she could buy things that are needed around the house.i was in the forest like always and had gotten three rabbits and decide to leave when I spotted something in the distance it was in a person he was on the ground. I went to him to see if he needed help when I got there I saw that he had a big cut in his stomach and was losing a lot of blood. He saw me and said
Wounded man[ kid come closer I don't have much time]
I hesitated but got closer
Wounded man[ here take this and run ]
He gave me a ring it was really beautiful it had a red ruby and was made of gold.
Wounded man[ leave now]
Those where his last words before he died I was going to leave but then
Man [hey kid give me the ring he gave you and I won't kill you. That bastard tried to double cross me after everything we did to steal that ring!!]
There was a man in dirty clothe and had a sword pointed at me. I got scared and my feet shaked a little.I was going to give him the ring when
Pochi [ idiot kill him he will probably kill you after you give him the ring!! He probably does not want anyone to know.
I was about to give him the ring when I took out my knife that I used to kill the rabbits and jumped toward him and cut his neck. Blood gushed out of his neck and he fell to the ground dead. I started to throw up I had just killed a person .
Pochi[ don't worry Edwin it was you at him think about how your family would feel if you had died.]
I do not want my mom to be sad . I don't want to see her cry.after that I buried the bodies so know one would know of what happend here. I got home but did not feel like eating and went straight to my room .
Pochi[ Edwin why don't you check what's in that ring]
Wait what is this a storage ring where people could put things in to make traveling easier.I took out everything it has inside it had 80 gold coins and a book.
Edwin [ a book ]
Pochi[ read the title edwin]
Edwin[ lightning magic art's!!]
This was probably one of my luckies days
Pochi[ you will start training your lightning magic now we have quite the luck Edwin .]
Edwin [ yeah!]
I can't wait to start training.
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