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I don't know what you reader(s) are confused about. Does Life Force not make sense? Is the difference between Life Force and using Energy not clear enough? Are the point and perk system not clear?
Any other part of the story that's annoying or not make sense?
I need help here.
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Genre : Fantasy
*Voiced by a 1970s radio-advertisement narrator* Are you... Tired of your Main Characters getting absurd power-ups? Tired of your side characters having nonsensical plot armors? Tired of your overpowered MCs delivering zero thrills, and their gigantic harems irritating the shit out of you? Tired of your MCs behaving like edgelords for no reason? If your answer is yes, then you have come to the right place. Join us and watch as he slowly gets fucked up(figuratively) by the foreign world he was kidnapped to. Watch him slowly morph from a normal teen into a sociopath who enjoys murdering, suffers from PTSD, and see how he tries to redeem himself from it. And much much more, only at Genre: Fantasy. T&C may apply. This is a slow-paced novel(the prologue itself consists of a dozen chapters.) that pressurizes more on the relations between its characters. Death is common, so better not get attached to characters here and there.
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Pink Sugar Apocalypse
In a world where normal people live normal lives, a normal man is brutally murdered by faux-feminists protesting at an indie video game company. Awakening in a dark place, he is greeted by the goddess of fate and given a ridiculously sexy offer. Does he have what it takes to travel to a fantasy world and become the only man who can level-up? Can he handle a reality where women are completely in power after his epic beat down, a world where taking damage in battle means that your armor and clothing explodes in a shower of light and jiggle physics? Come witness the spectacle that is... The Pink Sugar Apocalypse! Warning: This story utilizes a ridiculous form of parody and satire. If you require your stories to make perfect logical sense, the main characters to be murder-douches, and just hate ridiculous goofy humor.... please keep looking for a different story. You won't be happy. However, if you like the idea of badass women fighting for love and glory, while wearing skimpy outfits, then please continue. Note: No faux-feminist ham-beasts were harmed in the making of this story. Real feminists are cool, though. Fight the power or whatever. You got the right to vote, use it to make your dreams come true. Warning: This story is rated ages 18+ for swearing, graphic violence, ridiculous premises, jiggle physics, and softcore porn logic.
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Cursed eyes (Jujutsu Kaisen x Male reader)
We all know about the ocular jujutsu called six eyes, also called "Rikugan", eyes said to be sent by God. Unique... but what if there was something that was the exact opposite, something more cursed.
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Silent Poetry
(#1 in metaphor)At late nights, I could see those choked words rushing out of my throat-shouting their presence in the ink of the broken pen. They are awake to be in my heart and on this paper. In the soft yellow light of the lamp, I'm weaving them again, breaking the captivity of time. Oh, I'm still writing.
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That's why I love him most || TaeKook
"Don't get near to my girl." - JJK"He was freaking hot" I said, getting a strong hit on my shoulder as a reply."Why he patted on your butt?" - JJK asked lowkey angrily. Boy, you could have back hugged me. You need to learn more. How boring -KTH thought "Taehyung, I promise you after this night, I'll show you the real love which you never get from anyone." - JJK, he promised *A short series of Taekook where Kim Taehyung got bullied by his crush, an imagination of Taehyung and his sassy thoughts"#Taekook#Taehyung #JUNGKOOK #TopkookFLUFFYSOME 18+ CONTENTS
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Taekook oneshots 21+
Top-JungkookBottom-TaehyungTaehyung is wearing girl outfits in all of them 0w0
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