《My Hermit Life》Criticism ( 3 )
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From: WaterBear
Forgot this the first time I posted but Id like to be shameless and ask for some reviews of your all honest opinions. Once again thank you and have a nice day.
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Dan's Shoppe of Oddities
After the death of his father Daniel Rhodri was forced to drop out of college and take over the family business, an antique store that goes by the name 'The Shoppe of Oddities'. Receiving a strange package one day Dan's world is flipped over once again as he finds its contents are a Genie named Amani. Who sent this package? And can Dan survive the hijinks of this genie girl? Will his life ever receive some normalcy again? he doesn't know, but he is going to try. Authors note: Like my other novels this one will be my take on standard Harem anime/I Dream of Jeannie mix(Trust me it will work lol)but without a Bricktagonist(The main will know when the girls are coming onto him.) So expect there to be crazy magic and lots of sex, probably lots and lots of sex...
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Convicted
Sentenced to the sea for a crime he didn't commit... Wrongly convicted of killing his lover, Li is sent off to serve his sentence in the privateer fleet of Mahlon, where he finds himself somewhere between a sailor and a pirate. He supposes it is a better way to die than wasting away in a prison cell for a crime he didn't commit. If it isn't the sea or sailing necromancers that threaten his life, perhaps it is his assigned partner, an unfriendly man named Ardlac who seems to want nothing to do with a stranger sharing his space. Li doesn't know that his unfriendly exterior masks a wounded soul suffering from a loss Li can understand far too well. But that is only one of the many secrets lurking around him and one of the many threats to uncover. CONVICTED is a low-stakes story about healing, recovery, and comfort. Originally posted on Tapas, I am now cross-posting this story on Royal Road, Wattpad, and Neovel.
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Ascendant Legacy
[Participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] Saul Andrews is just an average guy. He works, plays sports, he goes out with his friends. He doesn't do anything that would leave him prepared for a life of dungeon delving and adventuring in a foreign world apart from the occasional DnD session. His whole life changes when the gates to the Dungeon appear. He falls through the doorway to a new world and becomes trapped within! Now, he is trapped in a wonderous and perilous world full of creatures that only existed in his imagination. Trapped in a world where to survive is to fight, to learn, to grow. What starts out as a journey to get home develops into a determination to become the most powerful Dungeon Delver. His goal: to discover all the secrets held within that strange world! Isekai Lit RPG with Cultivation elements.
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The Fiercest Battle
‘We are $22.6 trillion in debt as of Sept. 30, 2019. The United States of America is $22.6 trillion in debt.’ The Dark sighs. ‘So what? China’s is $5.3 trillion debt, Russia’s is 219 billion debt.’ Zonoah mentally voices with passion. Zonoah’s plunges his lightsword deep into the enemy’s body. With the lightsword pierced, the energy melts a hole in the enemy's body.
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This Game We Call Life
My name is Jack, I am a martial artist who spent most of his life on a mountain. But for the past two years I have been at a public school. Why? So I can learn more about the life most people lead, and it is BORING. Luckily I have some other fun things to do for entertainment. Well, none of that matters now because….. I took elements from other series in this genera, like re:monster and change:new world, but the story itself is mine. suggestions are always welcome if anyone finds a grammatical mistake or a mistake with a table please point it out in the comments so i can fix it, thank you.
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Her Last Smile
Eight Aliera Franklin...Credits to the owner of the artwork!!
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