《My Hermit Life》Criticism ( 2 )
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Hello every body I have recently reached over 50,000 total views and decided it was a good time to do another criticism thing. This is where all of you readers can give ideas on the story or ask about the direction of the story or what ever you want. Im doing this for all of you loyal people who enjoy my novel despite its flaws. Thank you for sticking with me and I hope you stay around until the story is over. Good luck have a happy life.
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I NEED 500 CHARACTERS SO THIS MESSAGE IS UNEEDED I AM JUST BORED AND DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO.
THIS SHOULD BE THE PERFECT AMOUNT HOPEFULLY.
I JUST NEED 11
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