《The greater universe》Creation
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So does this mean he never set up passcodes for this thing. Let's give it a try hopefully I'll be able to here my alarm go off as well.
Laying down in the pod Edward pushed the button on the inside and closed the lid. It went completely dark. Good thing he wasn't clostrphobic. He then closed his eyes..
Soon he found himself in an empty space but heard a voice of a young lady.
am diety 007 here to be your guide for joining the greater universe. If you say status you will be able to make character selections race job etc.
Remember the greater universe will feel like the reel world so thats pain as well as pleasures giggled the little diety 007. Well thats nice said Edward let's see I will go with my main appearance and adjust from there.
Ok let's start by increasing muscle mass not to ridiculous though went to be able to bend and move, let's give me silver hair and emerald colored eyes. Also let's increase my pen*s to 12 inches and 60 per more width. And a height of 6 '6. There we go all done.
Well it seems your trying to go for a warrior build said diety 007. Ok you do not have the chance to increase stats those are gained through hard work and luck. Would you like to set a timer for your game play today.
Yes please 4 hours will do it. I have things to take care of he replied.
Soon as he opened his eyes he came across a dark corridor made of stone. What is this said Edward to himself. I'm guessing that its a dungeon of some sort.
Status Edward said to himself. A screen appeared before his eyes. Edward hobbitz, race human, title none, skills none.
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Fuck what is this it doesn't show level or anything, do you start off what level 0 and what do you mean no skills how am I supposed to survive in this dungeon.
At least with my status screen up it seems I have some light to see by atleast. But it only goes a couple of feet. I also seem to have a map attached to the screen but its .mostly black. Only a few feet around him was clear. Do I actually have to explore myself in order to get more map shown.
This is realistic but risky, maybe if I can get familiar or something I might be able to explore the map faster and safer. But for now I'm just a week level 0 human.
After walking for about ten minutes he verified his map function needed to be explored before it was cleared up.
He then stumbled upon a body slumped into a corner. As he approached it carefully nothing happened so he grew bolder. He then shook the body.
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