《Xarjurn's adventure》critisisms/suggestions and genrel duscussion
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so i decided to amek this thread here for the readers to write about what they like and such about this story hopefully by using this i will be able to improve my story, anything and everything is welcoem and depending on how tired i am after classes tommorrow i may write and post another chapter until then i ope you enjoyed the story so far and will continue to do so now if you will excuse me hunger calls
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