《The Saiyan Immortal》Questions for the readers
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hi there I have a few questions for you guys
how do you like it so far?
What do you think of more permanent transformations? Like once he reaches a set lvl of power and gains the transformation. It becomes his new baseform like an evolution. He could still power down to normal when trying to hide his power though.
Do you guys want him to have a pet / companion? If it happens it will be a monkey/ape though.
Do you want me to put young masters in the story so he can curbstomp them later as he grows or is that trope too annoying? rest assured they would only be a few(2-3) truly annoying ones in the novel.
Do you feel the paceing is ok? There will be some time skips later but im trying to give him a childhood/formative years in the early chapters. I kind of have to build his personality from scratch and its better to show it through action than simply say it.
Do you have any arcs or tropes you want me to try or avoid?
Do you want me to make him a standard dual cultivator of ki(body)/ chi(energy)? Or would you rather a slightly different system instead? I already have an idea for said system where it's a mix of both but with a lot of disavantages.
do you want me to keep to unarmed combat with the Mc? if not what kind of weapon should I go with?
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