《Music System》Criticism ( 1 )
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I am having trouble thinking of how to progress the novel right now, so I am going to do something I like to do on some of my other novels. It is called criticism, it is litterally where you the readers give any ideas or criticisms that you may have for Music System. Honestly right now I know what I want to do, but I have no idea how to get there. So it might be a few days until the next day, or I could do a chapter the next day. I am sure you all have songs you would like to see in the novel so feel free to leave ideas and I will check out the songs, if they are they might be featured in the novel. If you have any non-music ideas please leave those as well.
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