《My Girlfriend: Death》What can I do next? Continue or drop?
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Wow...just wow. Upon writing this, the prologue has garnered around 270 views. That means around 270 people clicked on this short one shot. Wow... for some that might not seem impressive but when you think about it...270 people. That is still quite the number.
Originally, I intended this as a one shot. Something for quick giggles and that's that. I never really intended for this to be a series or anything. As I never really gave much thought into the story. It was just a neat idea I wanted to try. I didn't think it would be this successful.
The story is a big cliche, taking place in a highschool setting with supernatural elements. In truth, I don't know if I can really continue this or not without a solid foundation to go upon. Already, I can see myself stumbling and falling; trying to write a decent story. I'm very hesitant at the moment regarding the decision.
So that's why I would like to ask the reader for some advice. Any advice or comments would be appreciated.
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Little Love
'Just another cliché.'------------Every good girl needs a bad boy.It's just logic.Even Amoret, the naive girl from England knew this.She just wasn't expecting it.But who ever is?------------All Love has ever wanted to do was take control of her life, and make her own choices for herself. Finally, this comes in the form of moving to her brother's home in America and living in a house of eleven boys, all just to escape her father's wrath. It isn't easy, especially being financially cut off from her parents, but she makes it work, falling in love quickly with Greyson. But Greyson leads to numerous issues.Is he in a gang? Does he fight? Does he race? All three? Who knows.Her brother, apparently.It's kind of a wrong place, wrong time thing, however, this naive girl suddenly becomes the focus of the resident bad boy.And everyone knows how that turns out.------------"Love?" I jumped slightly and looked up, only to see him looking down at me. We had arrived at the ice cream parlour, obviously me being too enchanted by his tattoos to notice. The familiar blush flooded across my face again as he got out of the car and came around to my side, opening the door and leaning in close before I could get out, his lips close to my ear. He sighed slightly, making goosebumps rise up on my arms."I have tattoos in a lot of other places you might want to see..." Oh. My. God. He was trying to kill me, burn me alive from the inside out. All I could do was squeak and shove my face into my hands. He laughed loudly and picked me up, swinging me out of the car and putting me down on my feet."Adorable."
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Three Eleven Thirteen
February 19th, 2018He is test subject Three-eleven-thirteen. Ellie for short. He's human. Remarkable.He can breathe freely, no tubes. His heart has adapted to beating on it's own. He opened his eyes yesterday, we looked at one another.He looked at me, truly looked at me. My daughter, Ripley, tried speaking with him, but he didn't understand.I will have her keep working with him. He will speak. February 23rd, 2018He is standing. His bones are still fragile, but he is gaining muscle rapidly. This is incredible progress in such little time. Everything is going as planned, though his fingernails are black. They weren't black yesterday.March 13th, 2018 Ellie attacked Ripley last night. He will be kept in restraints from now on.March 27th, 2018My God he is strong. The mysterious blackness that had formed in his fingernails is now flowing in his veins. Whatever this black liquid is, it's possessing him. April 4th, 2018He bit me last night. I can feel the mystery in my veins. What is this?April 5th, 2018Test subject three-eleven-thirteen, Ellie, will no longer be a patient of mine. I have locked him up in a cell in my lab. I fear him. He will stay in that cell for God knows how long until he starves to death.I am a coward.April 6th, 2018I can't tolerate this. I think I'm truly losing it. My memories, my spirit, I feel them being eaten by this black virus. I have to end this tonight. I have to end myself tonight. I have too. Ripley, my sweet daughter, I love you baby. I am sorry for creating that abomination. I am so sorry.
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His Angel
RATED S FOR SMUTTTTTTT*****"Please, Enzo!" "Oh, angel. You know that's not what you're supposed to call me. I thought you wanted to be a good girl for me, but I guess not. Do you want me to punish you, is that it? I was going to make you feel so good, but now I think I'll hurt you instead." I stifle a moan, but he notices it. "Would you like that? You want to feel my palm against your ass," his tone made a chill run down my back. "I'm sorry, sir," I quickly spoke, fearing what his punishment would be like, but also more interested than I should have been. He must have noticed because he smirked, and bit the inside of my thigh hard. There would surely be bruises tomorrow. "Aghh," I cried out. "Shhhh," he hushed me. My breathing was ragged. He kissed the spot that he bit and sucked on it gently. I moaned into the pillow next to my face. *******Lilly always liked bad boys, but never encountered a real "bad boy". When she catches Enzo's eye--the New York mafia Don--everything changes. He brings out a darkness within her while she brings out the light in him. Enzo shows Lilly a new type of pleasure she never felt before, and she gives him warmth that he has always been a stranger to. Lilly must decide whether she can handle the true darkness of Enzo's life of crime, or cater to her own darkness.(This is a morally gray erotic Mafia Romance) 18+ only please and thank you
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Not If I Date You First
She's a paparazzo. He's a celebrity. And when the two of them get together, cameras will flash and sparks will fly. ***** The summer after she graduates from high school, eighteen-year-old Ada Datchery lands her dream internship, working as a celebrity photographer. Ada's determined to do whatever it takes to turn her internship into a permanent career. But after she gets into an altercation with Liam Anders, Hollywood's hottest young celebrity, Ada becomes the center of a tabloid scandal. When rumors about an unlikely romance between Ada and Liam fly, giving an unexpected boost to both their careers, they decide there's no harm in faking a relationship for the cameras. But as the line between what's real and what's pretend begins to blur, Ada finds herself under constant media scrutiny. And when her new boss pressures her to expose Liam's biggest secret, Ada realizes that making her dreams come true could cost her everything, including her heart.Featured on Wattpad's Official @Romance Page!
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The Vampire King
**Highest rank - #1 in Vampire**The most feared Vampire King.A human girl.Brought together by an unknown prophecy, will she really be the cause of his destruction? Or will he destroy her first? Leaving her to pick up her own broken pieces before she can be an ounce of a threat to him. You're welcomed to explore this world where only bloodthirsty creatures , lies, betrayal, and darkness exist. But don't be surprised if you discover LOVE along the way... -----------------------------Cover by- @forcadeCopyright © 2015. WARNING** Contains inappropriate content, must be 14+ to read. [Word count: 75,000 to 90,000] Enjoy.
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Alpha submitted
|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|•|"You will submit to me!" He growled, clenching his jaw as he glared down at me.I raised a brow and looked him dead in the eyes "No 'Alpha'." I smirked mocking the word Alpha. "You will submit to me." *^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*^*Aylean Rafe Beowulf born a true blood alpha, but was a runt. Being a runt is a disgrace to werewolves, so her pack would have refused her as a Luna, so her parents made her the omega of their pack. Disrespected her entire life, she had enough and chose to become a rouge, but on her journey she met her mate. Alpha Aztec Amaruq Hunter, the alpha of the strongest pack in the world a cold and stern alpha, but when his true mate comes along a stubborn girl who doesn't want to submit, he doesn't know what to do. What will happen? Will Aylean submit or will it be the other way around? Find out :)Just a small warning my grammar isn't good lol, also it's still a working progress, but enjoy! :)(All images are from Google)
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