《Eternal Pheonix》Side Story: Introduction
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An: I hope you enjoy, if the majority dislike I will redo the chapter.
I am sorry about the grammar (I hope it's improving) but I'm trying to make chapters regularly while thinking of how the story will progress.
I am going to make the story progress more slowly, the training will take longer and you will see how he relearns the different powers by re-understanding the laws.
[when he's thinking]
"Speaking out loud"
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Noble student: "Propestrous! Go away or I will call the head or vice head !"
All Fenix did was click on a button on a watch.
A hologram of a wise old man with long white hair--the head master-- appeared in front of them,
Most of the students recognised the watch as soon as it came out...
That watch was only trusted to the headmasters close freinds or allies with equal power, such as the emperors.
It was the symbol that represented the upper echelon of the academy and adventurers guild (since the adventurers guild is funded by the academy).
[Stupid kids... They're too evil, who says kids a pure?] Fenix starts ranting about the kids in his mind.
(A Pheonix that destroys worlds calling kids evil...)
Everyone's eyes widened, the headmaster finally introduced himself and then told them of Fenix.
Headmaster Alduk: "Fenix will be your teacher, be respectful to him, he is as very much qualified as any other teacher in this academy, now I have other things to attend to..."
His hologram disappeared and he continued with his tea [Poor kids]he thought.
They did after all test Fenixes capabilities and teaching skills.
*Shiver*, [I really shouldn't have used those professors to test that little monster, poor guys...] thought Alduk.
Professor Sinnil then appeared on the holigram .
Professor Sinnil: " I am the vice head of your academy and was supposed to be your teacher but because we believe that Fenix will understand your thoughts more as he is near your age so he can help you understand the difficulties through the training over this course."
"What?! Are you being serious?! I thought this is the most prestigious academy in the world" shouted an arrogant Elven girl.
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"I'm leaving this house! What Pheonix house, no wonder there is only a few of us here!"
The class was still in an uproar.
But then a crystal clear voice rang through every students being.
Even professor Sinnil at the other end of the hologram froze for a moment.
[Is this a deity class skill? No he can't, most deities can't hold up their God realm for seconds, he can't have utilised it by melding it with his voice, only full gods and above can do that...he's only A rank...]
Fenix sighed: "I'm your new Professor, like it or not, if you want to leave you can-but you do understand the consequences of dropping a course, don't you?" He said with a devilish grin.
[Fenix: This imitation of god realm actually worked, haha mixing the profound laws of sound with my little divine energy! So simple, how could I forget such a simple move... Am I t,t-turning stupid?! ] he shook his head to get the thought out of his head.
His voice covered the entire room and sent shivers down everyone's spine, none of them can move.
Fenix:"Dropping a course in this school lowers your reputation, people will think you have no will power and less people will hire you or become a client when you leave."
[These kids, pfff, let's see if they can survive this term
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The students could only listen obediently, they're ages were at least 3 or four year olds than this boy, but they're frozen,-they're souls were frozen with fear!
"You will listen to what I tell you , or I will destroy your family and clan. You will only be allowed to leave your dormitories on Sunday's,
the rest of the days will be learning and raining.
I will be teaching you all lessons, including literature and maths except for mecha, professor Sinnil will be teaching you and me this,
this will be the first time the Pheonix house will be fighting in the tournament, we will defeat the favourite to win, the dragon house and get the 10,000 gold, or else!
I will also be fighting since I'm also classed as a student in some way."
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Professor Sinnil: "Isn't destroying there clans and families a little too mu-..."
He made eye contact to Fenixes glowing orbs of eyes- which looked like all they were looking at was gold -and immediately swallowed his saliva and gulped.
Professor Sinnil: *Im sorry, hopefully you will end up better than those poor professors..." His hologram then flickered off.
Fenix: "the tournament will begin in 8 months, in these months I will turn you nerds except for that boy" he pointed at Drexel "into fighters!"
He continued "Today will be a day off, I except you all to be in top form tommorrow! Mark yourself in this register before you leave ... And you... " he pointed at Drexel
"You will take the register to the reception, since your the fastest here. I will go ahead. Class dismissed."
Fenix said that as he placed the register on the front desk and walked out the room, with two steps he was accross and out the room.
[Oh] He thought. He back in the class and said:
"Register boy, remember to tell them to make 'Professor Fenix' his account on their hologram system. I hate paper, poor trees..." He thought he mumbled the last part but little did he know his voice was still crystal clear to everyone in the room.
Students: [Hes ok with destroying us and our families, but sad about trees, what's wrong with him?!] they thought.
He sighed still thinking of trees, I mean, aren't they alive too, they even help us live and take impurities away from the atmosphere and air, but we massacre them for recourses. [Even though I destroy stuff, I make sure to create a few more back, why can't they plant some back every time they kill one...] with his mind on trees Fenix, the 9 year old Fiery psychopath-as the students soon start calling him, walks, once again, out and into the corridor which takes them back to the dormitories.
The Phoenix house had the dormitories in centre attached to the classrooms, courtyards, kitchen, social area, arena and all other facilities.
Everyone just stood and sat their waiting for the affects that Fenix left behind to disappear.
The first thing someone said was: "WTF just happened?"
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After arriving back to his room in the dormitories, Fenix was in a lotus posture, meditating, trying to attune to one of the higher affinities.
[Haaah, why do I have to relearn one of the higher affinities from scratch. I hate the universal law which erases your memory of higher affinities every rebirth.]
Right now, Fenix was trying to re attune to one of the higher affinities, such as space, life, death and time affinitiy, there were too many to count. There were many higher affinities and the laws within them were far and vast, it was infuriating for Fenix to learn them from scratch, that's why he could never train back to his full strength.
He could always transform into his true Pheonix form and instantly know all laws, even those that the other sovereigns don't know, but the world won't be able to survive and plus [its more interesting this way.] he thought.
[I'm far from my true strength, I only know a 1/2 of only one higher affinity- sound, it took me 9 years, even with all my knowledge of science and sound, but applying that with magic and Ki is too difficult, I can make a pseudo full God realm that's 10 x 10m long, but I can only hold it for 5 minutes at most, that really tired me out, haah...
Well, at least plan 1: Instill fear, worked.
Every teacher knows that you have to be respected to give some respect.
Now, plan 2...]
Little did he know that instead of respect, he is only recieving fear.
Was it really necessary to etch fear on their soul with a full God realm, after all the highest level existence in this realm were the S rank saints and a Demi God. He went totally overboard...
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Enjoy, I hope my grammar is improving, you can give me ideas of what you want him to do in the future.
I.e. Going to a different dimension where his power is average and he has to work harder to fight a foe, getting summoned, getting reincarnated again without memories, any ideas are welcome.
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