《The Worst Was Approved!?》Summary change and possible title change.
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I'd like to start off by saying that this, in no way, shape or form, will affect the future of the story.
It was pointed out to me by an old friend of mine that my summary is good, but it isn't catchy enough. It is a small wall of text that. Well he said this, "Story's good, summary sucks."
So I am going to give you guys a few options to choose from, because I feel that letting the community help me choose may help me when writing in the future (Don't bother asking how that works, my mind was like, "Hey, that's a thing that will probably happen.").
Anyways, here is option 1:
At a school full of rich and ignorant students, a young man wishes to start anew, forgetting his past.
However, reality is much harsher than he could ever imagine, but also very forgiving. This young man's name is Logan Redwood. A forced marriage with a school idol, old friends, new friends, and plenty of enemies. What could possibly go wrong?
Option 2:
Current summary (I shouldn't need to put it here)
Option 3:
A young man finds himself stuck in a situation no one on earth could be jealous of. This young man's name is Logan Redwood. He has just managed to make an enemy that wants to make sure he doesn't see the light of day, the school's idol. The girl's father has doted on her since birth, and has 'taken care of' several people close to her before. Does Logan face the same fate?
No. we all know he doesn't. Follow the story of the previous school idol and Logan Redwood through love, comedy, and rough times, but mostly comedy.
So there are the three options (I definitely didn't get lazy for option 2. Nope. Not at all).
For the change of title... I can't really think of anything right now as I haven't put too much thought into it. Ah, I'll try to do a poll, well... you will know by now if I managed to create the poll or not. The options are going to be:
"Change the title, it doesn't fit anymore."
"Keep the title the same, it is fine."
"I don't give a fuck, why are you asking me?"
Almost forgot, have a great day/night!
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