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Soaring Dragon Continent, Sky Serpent School

Qiu Zhen opened his eyes and sighed. “I shouldn’t have let him live, now he only brings me more trouble…” Qiu Zhen thought to himself before shutting his eyes again.

One of the grey robed men looked at Qiu Zhen and checked his cultivation. “Ye Fa, this guy has the rank of first Dao realm, he can’t be Qiu Zhen.”

“No, this is the right place, Ye Chen told us where he stayed, he might have had a breakthrough. But no matter, I am at the seventh Dao realm, and you two are at the sixth, this is more than enough to handle this trash.”

Qiu Zhen just fought with Ye Chen earlier today, and now in the middle of the night some more idiots appeared calling him trash. The connection between the two is plainly obvious to Qiu Zhen, Ye Chen went and told Ye Che about the matter and to solve it Ye Che sent over these two.

Qiu Zhen doesn’t know who Ye Che is, but he knows that he must be a high ranking inner disciple or a core disciple, because no normal disciple could make three inner disciples come here. The qi in Qiu Zhen’s body is slightly unstable, he just had a breakthrough so it wouldn’t be that wise to have another one right after. However Qiu Zhen could use a battle to stir up his qi and see how well he is matched against these inner disciples.

“Qiu Zhen, brother Ye Che has ordered us to cut off your arms and legs, don’t worry though we’ll make sure you live.”

The two men in grey robes took out their swords, and pointed it towards Qiu Zhen. Ye Fa stood back and watched, he doesn’t even know why Ye Che made him come handle someone so weak. If he had it his way, he would rather be in bed with a beautiful disciple instead, but Ye Che is in charge and Ye Fa doesn’t want to get on his bad side.

Qiu Zhen slowly stood up and glared at the two men. “Ye Chen should have told you guys about how I beat him and his lackeys with one move right? If so, then you really should have brought more people to come, that way you would give this daddy a real challenge.”

The three men were shocked, they never heard that Ye Chen and his two lackeys were beaten in one move. If Ye Che heard that he would have killed Ye Chen on the spot, the shame of losing in one move by a ninth rank cultivator is even worse than losing to one. Ye Fa couldn’t believe him, he just coldly snorted at Qiu Zhen. “He’s lying, there's no way he would beat them in one move. If anything he used some secret technique that caught them off guard.”

Qiu Zhen’s body blurred and he appeared outside his house, the three men were stupefied. “Such speed!” Qiu Zhen then started taunting the men, “Come, let's play.”

Ye Fa glanced at the two men and made a gesture for them to go handle Qiu Zhen. The two men both were at the sixth Dao realm, and they were proud members of the Death Blood faction, to them facing a first Dao realm disciple was going to be easy. Both men’s figure flashed, both charging Qiu Zhen from a different side.

Clang!

The two mens swords clashed against each other, however they were sure they pierced straight through Qiu Zhen. When the two men charged at Qiu Zhen, he moved out of the way leaving only his afterimage to be cut through. You could say that Qiu Zhen was fast, his speed could compare to a seventh Dao realm cultivator, but the two of them are only at the sixth Dao realm.

Ye Fa who is watching as the two men chase Qiu Zhen around and try to cut his limbs off is stunned. “His speed… it’s almost on par with mines. No wonder he could beat Ye Chen, he used his speed to his advantage, smart brat, but too bad he doesn’t have the strength to back it up.” Ye Fa only seen Qiu Zhen dodging all the attacks, but he hasn’t seen him attack even once.

To Ye Fa, Qiu Zhen only relies on his speed to win over his opponents, but if one of his opponents touch him then its game over. This is to be expected, Ye Fa can only tell that Qiu Zhen is at the first Dao realm, facing a cultivator at the sixth Dao realm anyone can tell who would win.

Clang! Clang! Clang!

Qiu Zhen kept dodging the attacks, while the two men kept clashing their swords with each other. When they thought they had Qiu Zhen he suddenly disappeared, and these two men were getting angry. “Damn trash! All you know how to do is run, what you can’t fight!?”

Qiu Zhen stopped running, and his figure solidified in between the two men. “Oh, only know how to run you say. If I attacked you the fight would have ended before it even started, this daddy here is only playing with you two.”

One man swung his sword at Qiu Zhen, but Qiu Zhen’s figure vanished. “Fuck!”

Qiu Zhen’s figure was in the air twisting around, his foot had flames on it. “ Piercing Sky Burning Kick!” Boom!

The kick landed on the man's shoulder, and a cracking sound was heard before he went flying. The other man was stunned, Qiu Zhen had caught him off guard and attacked him causing him to fly away. “Damn trash! You dare attack when he was caught off guard!”

Gently landing on the ground, Qiu Zhen looked at the other man with a calm expression. “I didn’t catch him off guard, I was simply faster than him. Since he lost to me worse than trash would be compared to a pile of dog shit right? So should we call him dog shit now?”

The man’s face turned red, the person who Qiu Zhen kicked was his blood brother, how could he take Qiu Zhen calling him dog shit. “Ye Che might have wanted you in one piece, but i’m going to kill you!” The man’s figure flashed and it seemed as if he had a sudden increase in speed because of his rage.

Bang! Boom!

The man started throwing punches at Qiu Zhen, each strike caused the air to vibrate making a boom sound. The punches were being struck out as if it was an endless whip, but Qiu Zhen was dodging each blow just as fast.

Ye Fa who was on the side was watching the fight, his expression kept changing every now and again. “Hohoho, it seems this disciple has some potential, elder brother Ye Che could use someone like him.” Ye Fa had many thoughts running through his head, he didn’t know if he should step in now and finish it, or wait and see what would happen.

“If I catch you trash, then you’ll wish you could have kept dodging!” The man was enraged, each one of his blows was being dodged and all he kept hitting was air. The only people who he can’t fight against are those who have a higher cultivation, but the person in front of him was only at the first Dao realm, he was ashamed of himself.

The man didn’t want to admit it, but Qiu Zhen’s speed was way faster than his own, and he felt that if he kept throwing punches then he would lose all his qi. Boom! Finally one of the man’s punches landed on Qiu Zhen.

“Haha, now you die!”

Qiu Zhen stopped dodging the man's attacks, he let the man hit him, only for the punch to be caught in his hand. Qiu Zhen clutched the man’s first firmly.

“I-impossible! Let my hand go.”

Qiu Zhen let the man’s hand go, and spent around fast throwing a palm strike at the man's chest. Boom! The palm strike blew the man back several meters, but he was still standing.

Standing up the man glared at Qiu Zhen with murderous intent in his eyes, suddenly he started coughing up several mouthfuls of blood, until he collapsed.

Qiu Zhen turned his head and looked at Ye Fa. “So, i’m guessing your next?”

Three chapters in one day, and still have plenty of time to write up another one. Getting closer to meeting her ~