《One Piece: The Elder Twin》(Notice: Title Change and Maris' status after two years)
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This is just a notice to inform that there's been a tile change, since the original one was just provisional and the one suggested by... Beldarath was better!
Also, on request, here's the updated Maris status after the training. I'm working on chapter twelve!
Maris as of Chapter 12
Primary name: Maris
Surname: Monkey D.
Age: Nine years
Devil fruit: Goro-Goro no Mi(Sound of rumbling/Lightning fruit)
Current affiliation: Marines
Rank: Ensign
Personality:
Maris’ personality is protective, she is the type of person who would jumped in front of a bullet, even if it went right through her. However, despite this and her somewhat loud nature, Maris is quite aware of responsibility and her moral behaviour. In fact, she won’t ever speak for a person honestly, if she does she will do it sarcastically, since she believes it’s their responsibility to make their own words and choices.
She despises things such as school and classical training, since to her they encourage the wrong things in people. If she has to train she will most likely take it into her own hands or do it in her own time.
To conclude, for now, Maris believes that there’s too much of an absence of trust and because of that the world is in disarray. It is her goal to fix her.
Numerical value of skills in comparison to an Admiral/Anyone skilled in the profession:
(1: An admiral/Practitioner could beat them without any issue whatsoever in terms of this skill)
(10: Their strength in this skill greatly surpasses an admiral/Practitioner)
(5-6: Roughly similar to an Practitioner/Admiral’s)
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Physical capabilities: Average of 4.666...
Speed: 8
Strength: 3
Skill: 3
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Devil Fruit proficiency: 4
Stamina/Endurance(Physically): 4
Stamina/Endurance(Haki-terms): 1
Haki: 10
Haki(Control): 9
Physical resistance(Damage resilience-excluding Haki): 10
Physical resistance(Including Haki): 6
Swordsmanship: 2
Gunnery: 2
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Leadership: 1
Ship-sailing/Navigation: 4
Cookery: 4
Carpentry: 2
Medicine/Medical care: 0
Music: 0
Archaeology: 0
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Fighting Techniques:
武裝色: 鋼鉄神
Busohoku: Steel God- This skill is similar to the concept of Gear Third, in that it uses the skeletal system to become stronger, however that is the only similarity. The technique uses her own Busoshoku Haki to surround her own skeleton with it and her own skin which greatly improves not only her physical capabilities, but her ability to take physical hits. Without hardening the Haki it can do significant damage and even kill pirates if they aren’t that resilient enough. The only moment it is seen with hardening is when she obtained the Goro-Goro no Mi.
武裝色: クマの咆哮
Busoshoku: Roar of the bear- This is so far the most powerful move that Maris possesses. At full strength it was able to even remove a part of the white sea as whole, it can cause outstanding amounts of damage when used, however in terms of numerical values, a stamina of 8 in terms of Haki would most likely be needed to use it.
武裝色: 朝の上昇(Asa no jōshō)
Busoshoku: Rise in the morning- a personal technique that Maris claims works similarly to Luffy’s Gear Second, what it can do or what it does is unknown as of now.
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Devil Fruit
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雷の流れ(Flow of thunder)
Kaminari no nagare
雷の流れ: 落雷(Flow of thunder: Rakurai)
Kaminari no nagare: Lightning strike- One of Maris’ main attacks, it consists of her concentrating the lightning into a sharp point, it is able to pierce almost anything!
雷の流れ: 火花(Hibana)
Kaminari no nagare: Spark- A common ability Maris uses to shoot lightning at people similar to a gun.
雷の流れ: 高潮(Takashio)
Kaminari no nagare: Storm Surge- Maris’ acclaimed devil fruit version of Gear Second, she uses her lighting to improve her speed and strength by sending specific impulses to her muscles
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雷の流れ: Vajra
Kaminari no nagare: Vajra- By concentrating on a specific area and sending a incredible amount of power down from long-range Maris can cause immense amounts of damage.
雷の流れ: 雲の洪水(Kumo no kōzui)
Kaminari no nagare: Flood of clouds- An unknown ability of Maris which she claims is strong enough to severely change the climate of any island.
永遠の嵐
Storm of eternity- An unknown move that Maris uses to send what she says an ‘immeasurable’ amount of power towards someone, she even claims that she hasn’t reached a point where she can use it.
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Trivia:
-I chose Maris’ name because it means ‘Of the sea’.
-Vajra is a weapon used by the Hindu God known as Indra, who was the king of gods and the god of weather and war. It translates to Thunderbolt.
-Asa no Josho, or morning rise, is a reference to a character whom a mate of mine is fond of, Escanor of Nanatsu no Taizai. Although the ability isn’t in any way related, the increase in strength which is difficult yet immeasurably strong at this point is basically a reference to how Escanor would grow stronger as the sun would rise yet his personality would be difficult.
-Despite identifying as Maris and everyone calling her it, she's officially ‘Monkey D. Marissa’.
-There are possibly enough hints to decipher an important part of her past. :3
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