《Towards the Light》Discussion
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Since I cannot produce chapters efficiently without my computer, I was wondering what I could do to improve my story without it. Thus I came to this. I value all your input, so I would love any questions, comments, concerns or psychological frustrations you may have. Just type it in and I will answer in 12 hours maximum, if not in the hour or half hour, it just depends. So please, feel free to write anything that may be on your mind. It doesn't even need to pertain to the story, it could just be about you. I care about my audience's opinions immensely. But what I care about more is my audience as individuals.
With that said, just comment and I'll answer, respond, encourage, or just flat out chat with you.
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Thanks for permission to use the cover by WanderingInPixels over on Deviant Art. As of 12-15-18, the story is finished. I am planning to edit and will release the books as I finish in one big go, but there isn't a timeline on any of that. Marty had a fairly easy life as a cook for Arctic Storm Entertainment headquarters when he gets an offer from the company to try out a new playstyle for their biggest VRMMORPG, Oblivion Online. Follow him as he makes his way through the game as one of the monster races trying to survive against the forces of light. Author's note: I will update every Monday and Friday for sure, with the possibilities of bonus chapters through the week if I get extra writing done. I also did a disservice to several of my characters early on. I'm slowly working through a re-write, but it will be a while as I want to make sure I get it right this time around.
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