《Scrapped Idea》I'm sorry, it's a hiatus.
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As some of you might have read from the yesterday's "No Chapter Post" I am going on a Hiatus, well sort of.
The reason is not because I am tired or got sick of writing Dragon Cross or smth but because after reading over the entire story myself now, I realized that I stacked up too many things without clearing up the old ones. In the beginning chapters, it may not matter much but as the story progresses it will have a mountain load of stuff piled on each other without anyone, me included, knowing who did what where. I also realized that I put in way to many unnecessary things. Since I am not used to hal assing the things I do, my plan is as follows:
I will take a few weeks off and seriously reread the story a few times and do a list of all the plot events I tried to do but did not finish properly. Then I will try to rewrite the story not to be a bullet train that flies off into the unknown with one thing happening after another and would try to slow down and finish one major event before starting the next one. This will also change the plot overall by a lot. I will also try to include more characters and build them a bit as well instead of old man 1, old man 2, old woman 1, old woman 2 and so on and so on.
My plan is to finish about 10-15 chapters (maybe more if luck shines on me) and do a massive release of them on December 24th.
Since I will practically rewrite the story, there will be a lot of changes in terms of characters, abilities and maybe even cultivation levels. The back stories of characters will change too, some may be even completely rewritten. So, this thread will remain open to all the questions and bashing towards me, the lazy bum who can't do anything right.
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So a big sorry to all the readers who liekd the story so far but if you have the will or interest, you might try out the rewritten one.
So, G'Night and I will go find myself a few poro snacks and a cup of hot cocoa to ease my sadness.
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