《Scrapped Idea》Explanation (Rant)
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Well, this thread shall basically be my rant thread where you can ask me all sorts of questions.
As for the explanation part, it is the following:
I thank everyone for reading and I do understand the concern many of you guys have about the story progressing too fast. This is basically my first story that I have written with the intent of dragging it along. Since I am completely new to writing long stories, I don't just have the skills to drag out the stroy with a lot of side chapters while at the same time making sure that the side chapters are still interesting and relevant to the story. I try to slow down the pace and "build" it a bit more but I am not going to say that it will work out well with 100% certanty.
As for my previous writing experiences, it may have been obvious to osme, but they have all been short stories and mostly, a slice of life kind/type. I find stories that are Slice of Life a lot easier to write but at the same time, it is a lot harder to write them as you can't have giant mechas or magicians flying around.
Since this is my first attempt at a long story, I would be pretty damn happy if I managed to reach 100 Chapter before either ruining the story or just flat out getting tired of it. Since it is my first attempt, all though I don't have much expectations to it, I will still try my hardest to write the best story I can, even if it doesn't get far. After the story ends, I will just take a bit to sit down, read through it and then analyze my mistakes before starting the next story.
That is all for the rant, if you have any questions, drop a comment down below or just send me a PM.
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