《Chronicles of the Wanderer, Siúlóir》How do like the story so far?
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This thread is meant for you, the readers, to vote on the story, and tell me your gripes/problems with the story.
I do hope you will take advantage of it, as it would surely help me as well.
So I humbly ask you to use this opportunity to tell me what you liked, what you didn't and what I should change in the future chapters!
For the poll, everyone has six votes: 1 for like/dislike; and 1 for each 'category' (Pacing, Battles, Romance, Comedy, Chapter Length) and I do hope you take advantage of the comments section
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The System Slaves
Heroes selected from all races competed to prove their race worthy of living free. The Troll heroes failed... miserably. Their Race is paying the price. Most Trolls lost their sentience. This Troll did not, and now he must serve the system and try to prove his race worthy of redemption. Thing is, it's hard to save a race when you can't understand the squiggles that appear in your vision. It's even harder to save a race when you can't tell which thoughts are yours and which thoughts the system put in your head. And what do you do when you never loved Trollkind in the first place? .......................... Update Schedule: Two or more chapters a month. 1500+ words. I am a new writer so bear with me, correct my grammar, and point out things you want to add. I plan on finishing, it may take a while though. The cover isn't mine and isn't exactly the way I like it, I'll be on the lookout for something that fits better. ....... This is a Litrpg story, I kinda regret making it so, but what's done is done. The system is clunky and I forget stuff sometimes, don't hesitate to point out stuff that looks wrong or is wrong. There will be some cultivation aspects and some kingdom building later on.
8 233The Bells of Eternity: A LITRPG Apocalypse
Following a botched assassination attempt, Aaron is locked away in Alcatraz Federal Prison: never to see the light of day again. However, with the introduction of the system, Aaron gains the chance to escape. It won’t be easy, monsters run rampant, and demonic alien invaders have turned the prison into a stronghold. Not to mention the prison’s original inhabitants - the most dangerous criminals in all of America. Faced with overwhelming odds, his only hope of escape lies in understanding the secrets of the mysterious system.
8 151Speedster in A New World
Follow Jake an ordinary high schooler from New York, as he traverses Solaria with his speed force as he spreads the name of his favorite Super Hero the Flash. * I do not own the cover, Just got it off google images if you own the image please contact me if you want it removed. If anyone knows who owns this image link me so I can ask for permission.
8 125BABY GOJŌ {jujutsu kaisen}
▃▃▃▃▃ ❝𝘴'𝘬𝘶𝘯𝘢, 𝘴'𝘬𝘶𝘯𝘢! 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘺 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘮𝘦!!❞ ⤷ 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙗𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙗𝙚𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙜𝙤𝙟𝙤 𝙨𝙖𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙪'𝙨 𝙬𝙤𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙛𝙪𝙡 𝙙𝙖𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙩𝙚𝙧▃▃▃▃▃𝙬𝙖𝙧𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨▃▃▃▃▃⤷ 𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨⤷ 𝘤𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘬 + 𝘧𝘭𝘶𝘧𝘧⤷ 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘕𝘖𝘛 𝘧𝘰𝘭𝘭𝘰𝘸 𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘵▃▃▃▃▃⤷𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝: 𝟐/𝟐𝟎/𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟏⤷𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝: 𝟑/𝟏𝟒/𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟏
8 112Warped
Torven Montgomery just wants to make things better. As an heir to a Lordship with an inevitable career in politics, he aspires to change the world. But, he's not quite sure how to. Mea Kaika is a strong willed woman who is trying her best to forge a path for her people's freedom. She has undertaken the huge responsibility of leading Ka Po'e - The People - as they seek civil righteousness in a foreign land. Torven is torn between choosing following his predestined path to power, or his heart. Things can get pretty twisted with these two. After all, love can you make you do crazy things. Enter a world of clashing cultures: a vivid, nature-conscious island people thrust into the high-tech consuming world of Aruga, doing their best to survive. Join Torven as he navigates through the difficulties of morals within politics, within love, within duty. The road to hell is paved with good intentions.
8 105after dark | matthew tkachuk
AFTER DARK | MATTHEW TKACHUKoriginally posted to tumblr @baevillier (2020)Y/N swore that she would never join a dating app, but after finding herself with a lack of companionship and sex, she turns to 'After Dark' an app meant for finding anonymous hookups. Meeting a mysterious man named Scotty, Y/N learns that the two of share many things in common. Having failed at dating, Y/N is surprised when she starts to get close to this mysterious man. Perhaps they are closer than she ever realizes
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