《The New Start By Sudar》Prologue Predicament
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Prologue
I woke up trying to figure out what had happened to me. I think back and remember that I had been robbed. When I was trying to resist the robber had sliced my throat. Somehow I had woken up and I struggled to look at my surroundings. I noticed that I was in a lying on a bed surrounded by baby fences. I couldn’t understand what was going on. Thoughts raced across my mind.
-Have I died? Did I survive at the last second? Am I in heaven? Or perhaps hell?
I couldn’t comprehend what was happening, why I was in a baby bed, or where I am, but as all of that crossed my mind I saw a shadow pass in the corner of my eye. The shadow moved towards me and I attempted to call out. Instead all I heard was
-Uwaa umu...
What!? I was confused, did that person just talk to me or…
The person who stood in front of me was a beautiful girl with pointy ears, I knew without a doubt she was an elf. She moved to pick me up in her arms and hold me. She held me tightly and asked me a question.
-Hey little boy how are you did you have a good dream?
As she smiled and tried to comfort me in her arms I realized that somehow I am now a baby.
-…
After the elf girl played with me and placed me back on the bed I tried to take a look at my current situation. My memory of what had happened to me and what was going on was hazy. A couple minutes ago I left from work with the weapon smith. I had walked into an alley way because it was a shortcut home. I didn’t usually use the bus because I thought it to be a waste of money. In my current situation as a baby I regret the decision I made that day. Anyway I can’t change what passed, and as I had walked into the alleyway I immediately noticed a person wearing a black hoodie, blue jeans, and dirty boots. He stood directly in front of me and stared at me intently from under the rim of the hood. I nearly gagged on the stench was oozing from him. Instead I politely questioned him, trying to see him motive for blocking my path.
-Hello sir what did you want?
I now know that I should have left immediately when I saw him. Fuck me and my politeness. The person just stood there without answering. I began to get nervous and I wanted to leave. I took advantage of his silence to try and escape from the situation.
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-Well if its nothing I will leave then.
As I tried to pass the man he charged at me holding a sharp 15-20 cm knife. The next thing I remember was that he tried to grab the money in my pocket. I knew that I was not the type of person to go down without a fight. I quickly took up a fighting stance and countered his first attack by pushing him back 5 meters. I waited until he got up to see what he would do next. I hoped that he would leave after seeing just a little portion of my true strength. To my surprise he pulled out a gun and started talking.
-Drop everything you have in your pockets on the ground.
I knew by looking in his bloodthirsty eyes that he would kill me if I made a wrong move. His hoodie had slipped off his head when I had thrown him back and I could finally see his face. He was covered in scars and was even missing an eye. Seeing his appearance I felt bad at the man who had obviously had a hard life. Although I felt sympathy for the man I didn’t want to give him my money, it was the all money I had for this entire month. If I gave it to him I wouldn’t have a place to stay.
I knew that this was not the time to worry so I pretended to drop my stuff, planning to make him move closer to me. It worked and he slowly walked toward me. When the man was only a few steps away I took a calculating glance at the gun and realized that it didn’t have any bullets in it. The slide was locked back showing that the chamber was empty. I hadn’t realized this earlier because my eyesight was very poor because I had to watch the fire while I was smelting.
The man seemed oblivious to the fact that the gun was empty. People nowadays prefer to use energy guns instead of the older type guns so I wasn’t surprised that he didn’t know how to use it well.
In the spur of the moment I used my opponent’s mistake and charged at him. He was surprised and tried to shoot me with the gun. He panicked when no bullets came out and hurriedly threw the gun at me. I dodged it and he pulled out his knife again. He moved forward trying to stab me. I took a step back, avoided the knife, and launched myself at him punching him in the stomach and knocking him back.
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Throughout my life I had prioritized training my body and skills instead of obtaining knowledge. I understood that knowledge was often a better way to go so I learned over 200 different fighting styles. Including gun fighting styles, sword arts, and a variety of different weapons styles to go with my basic hand-to-hand combat.
I was pretty decent in all of them. I won many tournaments and was invited into the Olympics. In the middle of my training I injured my leg and ended up crippled for life. I lost my career and everything that I had worked towards. I was not completely helpless but my leg would often freeze up when I tried to do sudden movements. In the end I was alone. I didn’t have parents who would support me because I was an orphan. I had lost my friends a long time ago when I had moved to a different city.
When I had been crippled I was only 16 years old with no knowledge and no money. I thought everything was lost until an old man invited me into his home. He took me in until my leg was healed and I could stand on my own legs once more. I found out that the man’s name was Charlie. He was kind but strict. Later I found out he was a weapon smith I had been surprised because nowadays weapons are usually not made by humans. Instead machines mass-produced energy celled weapons and on top of that energy celled weapons.
Because I had no real knowledge at all Charlie decided to make me his student. At first I wasn’t very keen on being a smith. It was very difficult and I would need a lot of patience to create a weapon. When I turned 20 I had gathered many years of practice and I began to get really good at smithing, and even started to enjoy it. I had found a reason for life once again. I continued to forge new weapons and sell them. When I turned 22 I began to make a steady income and I moved from Charlie’s house. I thanked him for everything he had done for me. It had been a rough start but he had provided me with a new talent and a way to earn money. It was difficult to find a new place to work. I often visited Charlie for advice and friendly chitchat.
Now, fighting against this robber, I am 36, single, and a virgin. After I knocked the robber back I figured that I should call the police. I shouted for someone to help me but I got no response. The man scrambled to his feet and charged at me. I knew he wouldn’t have a chance so I tried to end the fight by knocking him out. But as I tried to move forward my leg failed me and I lost my balance. A single thought kept repeating itself in my mind.
-Shit, not now!
I tried to regain my balance but it was in vain he was only 1 meter away from me. I saw that he was aiming for my throat. As my leg failed and I lost my balance he pulled my arm causing me to fall forward. In a single instant he sliced my throat like butter. I continued to fall and landed painfully on my stomach.
-(cough cough)
I could feel him searching my body to look for my money and any other valuables I might be carrying. I thought to myself
-This is not fair, why me? WHY?!
During my life I often wished that I could die but my wish never came true. So why did it come true now? Why in the world would my wish come true right now? After I set the foundation of my life. I tried to talk but it was too painful. I closed my eyes and felt a deep regret inside of me.
And now somehow I had ended up as a baby. I guess I had been reincarnated.
I felt this was the chance I needed to turn my life around. I vowed that I would make this life better than my previous one.
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hello my name is Sudar and this my first time making a fanfiction or story whatsoever
plz point out my mistakes in the comments so i can fix them later i only
learned english 1 year ago so most of this may be really messy
with that i will post one every 3 days or so or ones every day it depends on it
so stick with me if you want :hi:
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