《Overpowered》To-Do list - updated 4/30/16
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The current to-do/retcon list for me that I feel is important for readers to know is:
consider changing the names of the people at the Grove, because they’re all named after alcohol and that might turn off some readers. probably wont happen but maybe
make past weapon-to-weapon fights cooler and more accurate. Make weapon talk in general more accurate
make Vinoh's injury clearer
switch the events of chapter 35 and 34 around to make Solera’s decision to be a ghetto healer make more sense
get a better prologue than the one that currently exists, which is not on royalroadl at this moment
Tornado Towers -> Tornado Tower
Chapter 44 fight with Jakovich's unreasonable overpower
Drop curse right on top of the characters in chapter 27 instead of having Chip argue for going to it
Give early Solera a personality
Global Dimension Rework
Edit out unnecessary filter words (felt a sinking feeling -> stomach sank; Solera realized -> delete) and to be verbs (cut the useless crap)
colloquialize some language, make peoples speech styles more distinct
fix any and all typos/stupid errors/grammatical mistakes. if you guys ever find yourself rereading or just reading a chapter and you find a mistake, please make a comment or pm me. I will read it and it will be fixed and god damn I hate typos
looking for opinions on the current synopsis. If you have tips for a possible future synopsis please do tell.
My readers are awesome :)
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