《Waterbrand (completed)》Chapter four
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Chapter Four
It has been eight brutal months of training. Dr. Minton seemed so nice, but that was before I had him for a task master. Starting before sunrise, he had me practicing water manipulation for two hours. Randomly alternating between large, brute force tasks and incredibly detailed models sculpted in anything from bowls to puddles on the street. His favorite motto? If you aren't sweating by the end and having trouble focusing, then you haven't worked hard enough. Heaven forbid he catch you slacking, or else you get to be subjected to his stamina course over the weekend. His first, and apparently easiest, stamina course starts out with a seemingly simple five gallon bucket. Step one, fill the bucket. From atmospheric water. Then form a pillar two feet higher than the rim of the bucket, and on top of that he wants a miniature couple dancing. Oh, nothing fancy, a simple waltz will do. Keep the pillar stable, can't let your mind wander. If you do, he has a lovely willow switch he cut that morning on the way over to provide incentive on the back of your forearm. He also manages to inexplicably hit the exact same spot on your arm. Every. Damn. Time. It took me three tries to get this far.
Just as soon as you have that managed, he rotates the bucket around so you can see a spigot on the back end. Who the hell puts a spigot on a damn bucket? Why? You can just dump it out. Unless you are a sadistic trainer hell bent on coming up with cruel punishments for your students. Keep the people dancing on their pedestal while making sure nothing flows out through the wide open spigot. Sick of trying to divide my attention three ways, I thought I would get creative and make a block of ice inside the spigot to stop the flow. The cruel smile from there heralded a whole new level of hell. Apparently my reward for showing initiative was more work. Now, Dr. Minton is a rather accomplished waterbrand himself. The next portion of my training involved fighting off his attempts to disrupt my training. Sometimes he would flatten the dancers. Pare away the pillar while trying to force water through the spigot faster. His favorite was to shoot a stream of water from the pillar right at my face. I vowed never to play poker with him either. He gave nothing away. No twitch, excess blinking, he could be looking anywhere. There was no pattern either.
I will admit, as horrendous as these stamina practices were, they were also incredibly effective. Once I could fill the bucket in under a minute, we graduated to a pool. A 5,000 gallon swimming pool. As soon as I figured out that I could conjure anywhere above the pool and not just the area of a bucket, My time dropped drastically. Originally 16 hours of mind numbing repetition fell to under four. That's when the informative lessons came in.
"Larry, you have both incredible stamina, unparalleled willpower, and amazing fine detail control. That is the best combination of traits in a waterbrand. The only thing that can hold you back is your imagination on what is possible and what isn't. To that end, I will not tell you anything isn't possible for fear of crippling you. Trust in yourself and your strength, and know I look forward to all the advances you will make in our field."
After morning practice, I had just under two hours to get cleaned up and prepared for classes at the university. Diagnosing was intriguing. Most cases were presented with a small list of symptoms, then the class took turns trying to pinpoint the problems. Every person there had something they were naturally competent at, but the instructors took pains to make sure nobody was complacent. Personally, I excelled at blood sensing. Probably a side effect of having spent countless hours studying the vascular system in my world, knowing where blood should be flowing and how much gave me a huge advantage. One of the class leaders, Ben, excelled at musculature while twins Glenda and Gloria (poor girls) were the best with organs. Even though it made me seem stand offish, I tried my best to keep everyone at arm's length. I didn't want to know these people, didn't want to make any connections that could be used against me on my project later. It was best that way, for them and for me.
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Surprisingly, the leader with the nervous system was a quiet mouse of a woman named Carmen, who was one of the weakest strength wise. Finding myself early for class once, I sat down in the back next to her with every intention of picking her brain. "So Carmen, you are hands down the best with nerves and nerve manipulation. Any tips on what I could do to improve?"
Startling at the sound of my voice, her head flashed up to stare at me for a second, then back down to intently study the grains of wood in her desk. "Um, hi Larry." she responded so quietly I had to strain to hear her. Calmly putting my hand on top of hers, she looked at me wide eyed and panicked.
"Please, just calm down. Take a deep breath, hold it for two seconds, and let it out slowly. I know you're painfully shy. I'm not going to pressure you, just relax and talk to me when you are ready. Until then, I will face forward." Removing my hand and turning away, I gave her a minute to collect herself. Listening to her rustling papers trying to calm down, I slouched down and closed my eyes, content to wait as long as it took.
"Subtlety. How often will an elephant realize it just walked through a spiders web? With all the strength you guys at the top have, you act just like elephants stomping through to do something. Sometimes less is more. Especially with something like nerves. Or even something as simple as keeping a patient asleep. Tell me, when you try and sleep, do you turn the radio on as loud as possible?"
Wow, I think that was the most I had ever heard her say at one time. I would have to find some way to thank her for that advice, doubly so if it ended up working. Turning my head just enough to see her from the corner of my eye, I gave her a smirk. "Well, that's an incredibly useful bit of advice there. I guess this elephant is going to have to learn how to tip toe around. Thanks, and if there's anything I can do to help you out, just let me know." Blushing, she just turned away. Yeah, something simple and anonymous for a thanks would be best.
My conversation with Carmen got me thinking about what I could do to train myself. Doctor Minton had me practicing delicate work, but I never had to think about power regulation. Carmen's comment about spider webs seemed like a great place to start. Not wanting to disturb any arachnids, and thinking this would be vastly different than my morning training, I decided on a path for my evening practice. In the bath tub, I started by creating a spider web out of ice. Or at least, that was the plan. No matter how I started, I ended up with shards in the bottom of the tub. I tried creating the web with water first then freezing it to no avail. Growing the web from the side of the tub worked a little better, until I got to the first fork. Then it all fell apart again. I spent the better part of a month getting frustrated and not really moving forward at all, wishing for an epiphany. It finally came when we had a guest lecturer. To my surprise, it was Jane from the police department. I tried paying attention to her lecture about how long it is safe to keep someone asleep, but in the end kept going back to our first meeting. Visualization worked then, perhaps it could help me again?
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That night I got home and spent the first half hour simply meditating before trying anything. When I got as relaxed as possible, I imagined looking inside my head. There, I could see a glowing well of power. For the first experiment, I merely conjured a small stream of water into the tub. Immediately an arm diameter rope of luminescent blue shot out of the well and out to where I assumed the water was being conjured. Now, I needed to find an adjustable nozzle to determine just how much of my energy came flying out of the well. Not wanting to reinvent the wheel, I imagined a nozzle with an adjustable angle on the well and tried it. Sure enough, the rope thinned down into a cable as thick as a finger. Elated, I opened my eyes while trying to keep the mental imagery intact. Setting up a web of water, I tried freezing it only to watch it shatter time and again.
Damnit, this should be working! What am I doing wrong? Going back into my head, I relaxed the nozzle and stuck my hand into the rope of energy. Weird, I could feel it "flowing" around my hand. Almost like a kitchen faucet that was mostly open. Okay, let's try this with the cable sized flow. Tightening down the nozzle *OW SON OF A BISCUIT* yanking my hand out of the stream I stood there shaking it to get feeling back. That was going a lot faster than the rope was. Damn, no wonder my stuff was still shattering. I wasn't dialing back on the amount of power at all, I was just constricting it. Ask anyone who works with pipes for a living, if you just go from a larger diameter to a smaller, you still get the same amount of water flowing it just increases the pressure. I needed a way to keep the flow the same, but take out less energy. Going from a smaller diameter pipe to a larger one seemed inefficient, plus there was no guarantee that the thicker rope I pulled on wouldn't have the same flow as the smaller one.
I could try and build something like a faucet, but something variable like that just wouldn't help. Besides, I didn't really know exactly how a faucet worked. Guess it's time to wing it and hope for the best. Imagine a giant reservoir, with one main line heading in from my well of power, filling it up from the bottom. At the top of the reservoir is an exit for the power to flow to wherever I needed it to. Now I just needed some way to bleed out excess power without wasting it. Around the base of my reservoir, I created five different drainage pipes, all converging back into my well of power. Each one had a simple on/off valve. If I needed full power, I could theoretically leave all five closed. If I needed a lot less power, opening all of them should leave me with 1/6 of my normal power output without any power loss since all the excess was simply recycled into my source. Just in case, I put a T junction in all the pipes leading back to the source with an end valve like a fire hydrant. You never know when you will need multiple lines of power, and having the time to fine tune problems before you need it could be the difference between life and death.
Opening the valve into the reservoir, I watched it fill before I took a stream out and started conjuring water. Still rope like, it behaved exactly as it should have. Ok, time for the first split valve. The split stream moved back into the source exactly as expected. Unfortunately the conjuring stream cut off entirely. What the hell? Looking at the drainage feed, I realized my mistake. I had made all the drains the same as the output. Back to the drawing board. Rather than trying to fix the bugs with the reservoir system, I went back to basics. Ok, start with a pipe coming out of the source. Take that pipe, and add on a six way split. One split continued on in the original direction and had the same diameter as the original pipe, and we can end it with a shutoff valve. The five remaining pipes were all smaller than the original. This time I wanted to do some math beforehand. Remembering back to all those lovely physics lectures, energy has to be conserved. So if I split my flow, the sum of the resulting flows will be equal to the original. Also, the flow is determined by the cross sectional area, so if I cut the radius of the pipe by two, the flow is cut by four. My main power line was roughly four inches in diameter. Since the area is π times the radius squared, I decided to make my life a little easier and drop the π from all calculations. So my radius was two, square it to get an area of four. Of the smaller branches, I made three of them two inch diameter and two of them one inch diameters. Each of the areas for the larger splits would be one, while each of the smaller splits would be 1/4. So even if I had all the valves open, 3 1/2 would be diverted back to the source while still leaving me 1/2 to work with, or 1/8 of my maximum energy output. The variable pipe split sizes gave me plenty of room to experiment with different amounts of power. Since I still wanted to try multiple streams of power, on all the pipes heading back to the source I put another split in with a simple diverter. Both splits were the same size as the original pipe, and the diverter determined which pipe the stream entered. One went back to the source, the other came out for my use. Think of a split with train tracks. The train can only go one way or the other, depending on which way the switch is set up.
Now that I had that set up, time for testing. Closing all the splits, I had the normal flow of energy before setting any of this stuff up. Opening one of the larger split pipes, I was thrilled when my output dropped from full to 3/4 energy, and I got a corresponding drop in conjured water. I tried it with all the pipes open, and it still worked perfectly! Success! The conjured stream had dropped to a steady dribble, and all my energy was flowing back to my source without any waste! Ok, let's see if I can manage multiple streams at once. Triggering one of the switches on the larger pipes, I easily directed it to conjure a second stream right next to the original. Beautiful! Suddenly thankful for all those lessons in managing multiple tasks at once with Dr. Minton's stamina training, I was ecstatic. Keeping up both flows, I used one to conjure and hold a spider web of water while the other froze it in place. While this time I actually got everything to freeze, there were still several areas that I could see visible cracks in the final product. Well, this just won't do unless I have perfection, or as close to it as I can get before the massive headache I feel coming on lays me out flat. Perhaps I was still using too much power? I switched things around so that the major stream was still conjuring and holding a spider web of water in place, but I was using the smallest pipe I had to freeze it in place. Fighting off my impending pain, I finally managed to achieve it. There, hanging from the edges of my bathtub, was a spider web of pristine ice. I barely managed to get my mental pipe imagery firmly seated before my nose started gushing blood. Grabbing a nearby towel, I decided to call it quits. I'm truly glad I didn't know how soon this new skill would be incredibly important.
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My World To Live
[Do Not Read this version, New FINAL version uploaded August 9th, 2021 as separate fiction, click to link here on RR. Essairyn had never felt truly alive on Earth. It felt like something was missing ever since she was born, but even after nearly 20 years of mundane living, she could never pinpoint what this or the emptiness in her heart was. Suddenly, she awakens in a grandiose, primordial forest and encounters both demons and spirits in a parallel world called Sol'h'meyr. She befriends, in particular, a sassy fox-spirit named Akari who just reincarnated after three millennia. Essairyn is an abnormal human with elemental powers, and Akari is being chased by those of her dark past. Together, they set out on an adventure in a world of magic, danger, mystery, and intrigue. But this not a game. That simple adventure is actually the modest beginnings in a chain of disruptions that tear even the dimensional fabric of time and space. No one, not even Essairyn, was who she thought she was. And not even the gods can change the destiny of the universes... A single promise shook eternity’s existence. — Fantasy || Adventure || Romance || Action || Mystery || Drama || Science Fiction — The My World To Live (MWTL) series, the alternative short name is Canaan, is comprised of three books symbolically named My World, To Live, and My World To Live. Two years prior, the entire story had been planned and detailed out from start to finish before actual writing. Thus, the story will never be dropped. While the genre is largely Fantasy, the book is comprised of many other elements including a School Life (Magic Academy) story portion. MWTL has a lot of scattered symbolism and allusions, hence, the mystery aspect. The science fiction elements progressively become more pronounced, and the slow romance is a late bloomer. The female lead is strong and independent, and her backstory and identity unravel as drivers of the plot. Expect lots of action/fighting throughout and scattered philosophical and psychological themes arising. It's a human journey to find the essence of one's living and purpose. What kind of world do I wish to live for? Any feedback is greatly appreciated. I hope to share the journey with you~! Canaan's Original and New Covers: If you're curious about my art and the various covers I made for this series and other authors, I have a RR thread that makes free covers and shows art processes. [October 1, 2020 Notice: Hello, I aplogize to all followers for suddenly taking an extended hiatus. Life threw a lot at my face and then the pandemic happened, so I hadn't been able to write until around the last month when I decided to challenge myself and finish the first book in this series. I am ok now, and thank you for your patience and understanding. No words can express how much every reader means to me. RR was the first writing platform that I ever felt accomplished to any small degree, so I am forever grateful to it. Multiples changes have been made since this final revision and writing of the ending, so please see the latest chapter detailing the update. This also includes my decision to submit this story to the 2020 Wattys contest (the deadline was Sept 30th). That means I will not be posting the updated version of this story on here until the contest is over (since I doubt I'll win anyway lol). And so, if you want to read the full, now completed (woohoo!) story, please go to my Wattpad. Thank you once again, and wishing you all the very best health and happiness! FINAL UPDATE, March 7, 2021: The complete story has been re-posted after the Wattys. This version that was on Wattys is the one being re-posted. However, the Final Version (which will be on a separate book from this to remain organized, and is technically the fifth version of the story xD) will be released May 2021. For more information, please read this update linked here. Thank you to all readers for taking this two year journey with me!
8 187Verbundener Geist
Yolthem. To be born here is a curse for some and a blessing for others.The Eldritch create havoc, “blessing†some with their power and driving others to utter madness. Spirits give people the ethereal power of Arcane, a force that no mortal can naturally wield that defies all laws of the universe. Blood and those that devour or revel in it reign supreme during the night and bide their time during the day. Mortals cower and pray to beings they do not understand for salvation that will not come while those of the cloth fight to protect them. None of this concerned our protagonist until their souls was bound to another against their will. Now they have two options.Help or hinder.Tags subject to change.**Once we get going past the set up expect very detailed description (of everything) and topics that may make you very uncomfortable. This may include but is not limited to: Religious fanaticism, extreme violence and gore, morally disgusting actions (torture, abuse, etc.) and more. You have been warned.**
8 90Fallen from the Moon
What is a person to do when you wake up and find yourself in a totally foreign environment? And worse still, a completely different body? One moment, Elise was in her castle lounging about, and the next, she finds herself in a life threatening situation and stuck in the body of a stranger. How did she appear here? Why has this happened to her? And what is the body's identity? Even though Elise is plagued with questions that she is unable to find an answer to, and forced into a body with a mana amount much lesser than what her original body, she is still determined to find a way back home. However, she will soon find that home is a place faraway and more difficult to get to than she imagined as she gets increasingly tangled up in difficult situations. "You will regret looking down on me." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Author's note: Please drop comments or reviews to let me know what you think of the story or how I can improve. :) *On hiatus*
8 119Cruising for Murder: Myrtle Clover #10
When Myrtle and her friend Miles set out for adventure on the high sea, they assume most of the trip's excitement will result from shore excursions to charming Alaskan villages.They feel as if their ship has come in. But when a fellow passenger disappears, Myrtle realizes she must seize the helm and find the killer...before more souls are lost
8 66A loose thread
The goddess picked him up. He tried to struggle free, but her grip only tightened. Eventually her thumb caught his head, pulling it backwards. He stared helplessly as she brought her free hand closer, revealing a small vial in her massive hand. She pressed it to his lips, and he felt the contents flow into him. He tried not to drink it, but his body would not listen. Despite his revulsion, his body ignored him by drinking deeply. "Drink and forget. I will give you everything you ever wanted. A loving family. A comfortable home. And then, " Her grip tightened, and forcing the air out his lungs. He coughed up the strange liquid and caused more to spill. “And then, you will pay for your defiance. On your twentieth birthday you will remember.” She pulled the vial away and turned him to look at her. “You will remember, just as everything you love is taken from you, right before your eyes…” Her voice trailed off and his world went dark. .... The above leads right into the story. The first chapter is a bit rough as the MC (a child at the time), hurts himself rather badly. I will try to include similar warnings on chapters as the story goes on, but I want to be up front that I may miss or forget things. Many of the tags are included so I can have flexibility writing the story. I am posting this largely to hold myself accountable to keep writing. Chapters will be short, but I am planning to post weekly. This is the first thing I have written (you've been warned). I am enjoying the story and I hope you will too. Please feel free to let me know what you think of the story as it progresses.
8 191Welcome to the Upward Bound System, V.3
They say third times the charm. With every iteration we improve. When the System came to Earth, it changed everything. It is a grand thing used by gods and men alike. What had once been fantasy was now a reality. People believed and so that belief gave ideas the strength to manifest. "Welcome Founder of the SCP Foundation" It stirred the gods from their deathly slumbers. Stirred by an almost mechanical voice promising them new life, and followers as countless as the stars. All it asked of them was for their help. Help with what though? The old gods, the forgotten gods, and the new gods drew breath, and then made their voices heard. On a day like any other Dante was home from college watching the Presidential inauguration with his parents. Little did they know that this day would turn out to be anything but ordinary. That this was the day everything changed. Dante is not your typical MC. While he has a troubled past, he looks forward to the future. Follow Dante, his parents, and the new friends he meets along the way as they traverse this new system world. However, before they can explore this new world they must complete, the Tutorial. (Please note: This tutorial will be part of the story. Rather than a skim of the information, you will get to experience it in depth. So the tutorial will last a good while.) A much slower style of LitRpg than what you would normally find. Follow Dante and his party as they find their world taken over by the system. Welcome people of Earth to the Upward Bound System!... With the system's arrival so too does great danger come... The tools of your survival shall be granted upon you by the system... Please note, I don't own the art. Please enjoy the story, and if you don't please leave a comment and I will try to improve the story for you. This is the second version of this story, so feel free to check out the original and compare the two.
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