《Hardcore Online》Chapter 10: Dear Brother
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Mature Content Warning: This chapter has many immature mature things in it. A man uses his penis as a weapon. There is violence and cruelty to lolis.
Author’s Note: I did not intend to update this story on the weekends, but I was ill on Friday and missed an update. So I will update today. I’ll mostly update this story Monday through Friday, barring life issues an illness.
Also, this story will not receive a reader interactive tag, but after reading this chapter you can comment and have a chance to drastically change the direction of the story. I’ll let this story leave the ‘latest updates’ page before taking note of what the comments have decided. So, you probably have till tomorrow afternoon to make your voice known.
However, the decision made in the next 24 hours will permanently change the direction of the story. :) So, make your voice heard!
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Chapter 10: Dear Brother
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There is a certain thing about succubae that often causes men, and some women, to be quite intrigued. There is a sensual, predatory, allure to the creatures that is just neat. However, when that sensual and predatory creature has the body of a young teenage girl it can ruin the fantasy. Sure, there are some who would think of a loli-succubus as being the sexiest kind of creature. Scott was not such a person.
“I said no.” Scott turned away from the pink haired girl and trotted off toward his next opponent. He had left town for the first time since he had started playing the game, and only now had he begun to actively fight for real.
Pink-chan pouted cutely then raced after her oddly dressed master. She had certain needs after all. “Come oooon, let
Pink-chan maintain your weapon, master!”
Scott leapt into the air and thrust his hips forward. His penis shot out with incredible force and accuracy to punch a wild dog in the side. The beast yelped loudly then tried to snap at its opponent’s weapon. It was far too slow to catch its would-be prey.
He tried to ignore the girl but she start to whine, loudly. What was her problem? Was she really going to be worth a damn when it came to capturing and taming his would-be mount?
The wild dog howled and two answering howls came from the distance. It was drawing more of its friends to the battle.
Scott’s dick lashed out once more and hit the dog with enough force to stun it. He had to finish this quickly so that he could take on the other approaching hounds.
“I’m really good at it! I’ll clean it every day! I’ll even give it a spit shine, oh please let Pink give it a spit shine, master!”
The moment that his jail bait succubus had seen his weapon she had instantly fallen in love with the idea of being his squire. She wanted to attend to his every need, whether he needed her to or not.
Scott leapt to the side and launched a series of powerful punches and kicks that shattered the dog’s ribs and dislocated its jaw. It cried then died due to the terrible abuse. “No.”
Pink pouted cutely then flapped her wings. “But master!”
“No!”
“Why not?”
“You’re too young to be entrusted with such an important task...” said Scott. What was he going to tell her? She could give his dick a spit shine when she grew some tits and didn’t make him envision a lifetime in prison every time he looked at her? Sure, in some countries and even a few states in America it would probably be legal, but that did not meant that he was actually into that sort of thing.
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Yes, she was a digital creation. Yes, she was supposed to be three hundred years old. Did that matter to him? No.
“I’m an adult! What can I do to make you see that master?” The pink haired girl seemed to be on the verge of tears.
Scott sighed at her. “Look, you seem nice enough... but... I don’t think you can change my mind unless you suddenly look like an adult. I’m just not into jail bait.”
“Jail bait?” Pink frowned at him. There was that term again! Why did he keep calling her such a thing?
“Yes, you look more like a cute little sister than a sexy demon hell-bent on making me deliriously happy. Sorry.”
The dogs barked in the distance. They had been quite some distance away, but would arrive within striking range soon.
Pink blinked then a slow smile spread across her lips. “You think I’m cute?”
“Is that really the only thing you heard me say?”
She let out a whoop of joy. “Master thinks I’m cute!”
“A cute little sister. Little SISTER!”
“Oh ho... so that’s what my master is into... so be it...dear brother.” The succubus spoke in a husky and sensual voice. Her petite body and sensual voice were quite a disturbing combination for the man.
A sudden chill ran along Scott’s spine. Somehow the situation did not seem to be getting better. In fact, it might have just gotten worse.
“Hey look, hounds.” Scott ran off to fight the oncoming dogs. He did not even want to deal with Pink at all right now. He needed to train.
Hours passed before they had stopped training. Scott’s stats had not increased during the fight, but he had not expected them to do so. He would have to fight much stronger opponents to increase his stats because of his manwhore training.
His level was close to increasing once more, however. Overall Scott had gained two levels since he started to hunt the wild dogs.
Pink sighed wistfully at her master. Why didn’t he want to play with her? Wasn’t she cute? Was there a reason that big brother did not want to spend time with his cute sister? She could not comprehend a human not wanting to be intimate with her. It was her entire power basis after all.
The succubus could use her charms on him, but that would violate their contract. She would be severely punished when she went back to the nether realm if she broke a contract.
“Dear brother... why do you hate me?” asked the succubus.
Scott turned to look at her. “Hate you? Why would you think that I hate you?”
Pink sighed again. “You said that I am cute, but you won’t have sex with me.”
“That’s...”
“Am I not cute? Was that a lie?”
“No, you’re adorable. I just can’t see you as someone to be intimate with, sorry.”
“Why not?” She was honestly confused. If she was cute, why didn’t he want to become intimate?
Scott had told her repeatedly. Was there no way to make her understand? “Look, I’m sorry. You look like a teenage girl, a very young teenage girl. I am not that kind of guy. It would be like being intimate with a child despite your age.”
Pink bit her lower lip and started to cry a little. “I can’t help it. This is not a form that I chose.”
“It’s not?”
She shook her head. “I’m actually quite a bit more... well more!”
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She grabbed her nearly non-extent breasts and pressed them together. “These are quite large normally, and many men have fought over them in the past. My ass too... I’m normally quite curvaceous and erotic.”
Scott stared at her flatly. “Bullshit.”
Pink sighed loudly. “It’s true, though! I’m an adult. It’s not my fault that I was contract summoned by a pervert.”
“If you look different normally, then prove it.”
“Prove it?”
“Can’t you take on your normal form?”
She shook her head. “No... Not easily anyway, a t least not in this world.”
“There is a way?”
“Yeah, I’d have to swear total allegiance to you... and well... you won’t even let me polish your sword.”
Scott frowned. “That figures. I’m not a pedophile, and even if I have a serious succubus fetish I’m going to be denied hot sexy succubus goodness...”
“Well, could you summon me in another world?”
“What, like go to hell or something and call for you?”
Pink grinned. “Sure! Something like that! Just summon me in another world and I can be quite the erotic woman for you master.”
Scott laughed at her excitement. “That easy, huh? I’m still fighting wild dogs and I am supposed to travel to another world and call forth a succubus?”
The pink haired loli-succubus grinned. “Sure, just call out my true name when you are in another world and bid me to take on my true seductive form!”
“Right, it’s that easy? What’s your true name anyway?”
Her eyes widened. “You really want to know?”
“Well, yeah? What have we been talking about all this time?”
She suddenly became quite shy. The bridge of her nose began to grow red and her cheeks became flush. “No one’s ever wanted to know... It’s a very intimate thing and it means that I am the only succubus that you can ever contract with...and... It’s... well...”
“That’s fine. You seem like a very nice person, Pink. If you were a bit older in appearance I’d probably spend half my day cuddling the hell out of you.”
She immediately blurted out a name then pressed her hands to her mouth. His sincere response had been quite shocking to her. No one had ever called her cute and said they wanted to cuddle with her before. Generally, things had been more... direct.
“Was that your true name?” asked Scott.
She nodded quickly. Her face became quite flush as well.
Scott smiled at her then placed his hand on her head. “I’ll keep it safe, OK.”
Pink looked at her master, her eyes glistening with unshed tears. What a nice guy.
They talked for quite a while, and grew a little closer due to understanding each other’s needs. After a while they headed back to town. Scott needed to log out and do a few things at home before he would undertake the next phase of his journey. They would soon need to go hunt a proper mount.
Scott logged out of Hardcore Online and exited his cradle. He stretched and yawned loudly before wandering off to do all the normal things that he had to do when he was in the boring and pointless reality that he knew to be the real world.
After taking a rather impressive shit, he took a shower. While looking into the shower mirror he smirked. “Pink, huh... I wonder how she’ll turn out.”
Now that he knew that he would be able to help her regain her sexy body, he was not quite as annoyed. She was only a loli at the moment, but she could become more adult and thus no longer be jail bait. A demon’s body is always in flux anyway. They had natural transformative abilities. When you summoned one, you did so while bidding them to take a form pleasing to the eye since they might come as something weird and chaotic.
That much was true in the game, and old lore said the same thing for the real world. Of course, summoning demons was bullshit in reality. Still, for a game designed for people who wanted to be adventurous perverts, Hardcore Online was strangely detailed in its lore at times.
Scott looked at the bathroom mirror and sighed. It had completely fogged over due to the shower. He started to wipe it clear but stopped. He was a goofy sort of bastard. Some might say that he had never grown up. When he was younger he had actually studied the supposed ceremonial magic of the world. Not one damned thing ever happened when he tried to use it, but it had been fun to pretend.
Memories of the fun times that he had while being a silly little bastard growing up filled him with nostalgia. He reached out and quickly drew a circle on the mirror then a triangle within the circle. He roughly scribbled four divine names of god that he half-recalled at the four cardinal directions.
The man laughed at his stupidity. “Yeah, summon you in another world, huh?”
Demon summoning was bullshit, but he was feeling giddy due to lack of food and sleep. The impressive shit from earlier had taken a bit out of him as well.
He half-assed a summoning verse that he only partially recalled. He was sure that it was not even remotely correct, but hey... “By this holy seal, I bid you *expletive deleted* come forth in the name of the formless fire that dwells between the worlds. Let the four names of god most high be the chains that bind you to my service. I bid thee *expletive deleted* who has given me her true name by her own will; come forth in a form most pleasing to the eye that you may forever serve as my loyal instrument.”
He tilted his head to the side. “And make sure you look like an erotic woman and not a child, preferably with big tits. Horns, wings, and a tail are a must, as well. Be cute about it though.”
Scott looked at the seal for a few minutes then smirked. “I really need to get laid. I’m *expletive deleted* years old and I still do shit like this.”
He turned to leave but a soft giggle caught his attention. “Dear brother!”
His eyes widened comically when a slender set of arms wrapped around his body and an absurdly warm presence pressed against his back. “No way...”
Pink nuzzled against her master then whispered in his ear. “I accept your proposal, husband.”
It was physically impossible for Scott’s eyes to grow any wider, yet they made a sincere effort. Demon summoning was one thing, but what was with this absurdly erotic cliché event?!
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AN: Alright, I’m sure most of you saw that coming after they started mentioning summoning in another world.
Here are your reader options! Basically, do you want to continue having him work in a pervy online game, or do you want this to turn into an ero story with game elements. You MUST pick a number, however. Otherwise I will disallow your opinion. :) That’s only fair.
1. This can be a dream sequence and everything will go back to normal.
2. This can be the new story direction in its entirety and Hardcore Online will stop appearing in the story. However, the story will continue in the real world while a man and his succubus develop their relationship and learn the depths of perverted power.
3. The same as number two, except he still plays the game. However, he will develop the power to summon captured pets to the real world, though only a few. (His penis powers would STAY in hardcore Online for the most part, though he would develop the ability to be’bigger’ than the average guy.) (This would then earn the harem tag properly and there would be occasional ero scenes and real world RPG stuff.)
4. I go ahead and end the story completely because this pissed you off.
When you vote, please put 1, 2, 3, or 4 in your comment so that I can know which one you choose.
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