《The Start of a Unusual Life in an Alternate Reality(Soul-AR. You know like solar)》I explain some things
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So im gonna explain some things to everyone. Especially those who are whining. Also i dont mean to offend anyones culture or views. This is only towards those who seem to think this is one of those cancerous books with no direction, and that im being inconsistant.
Im not a professional author, this is my first book, im also writing this shit based off of whats in my head without any drafts, i just write when i get inspiration.
Next is the whole Dorian learning how to use Ki thing. I dont know the difference between Ki and Qi besides the fact that the terms are different and they come from two different cultures. Either way they do the same thing.
You can cultivate both of em, you can strengthen you body and increase your lifespan as well. Also there is the ability to strengthen your soul with them.
So besides different names and terminology,
THEY ARE THE SAME DAMN THING.
Also im doing this shit on a touchscreen phone. I hate touchscreens with a burning passion, especially when typing.
Now you maybe thinking,"Well why the hell are you using your phone then?"
Well thats cause i dont have a computer ya chucklefuck. Plus at least the grammar is correct so you can still get a damn good idea of whats going on. Unlike a few of the more cancerous books here on royalroad. Im not gonna name them cause i know someone will be after my ass if i do.
Now if you paid attention when reading, youd know how the level system is based off of cumulative life experience.
From, birth to death, the experience is accumulated the longer you live and the more you do. Some of you have seemed to have missed that little detail even though that was very clearly explained.
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Now onto Dorians ONE CHEAT.
Dorian only has ONE CHEAT. It is his Imaginative skill creation.
HE CAN ONLY USE THIS SKILL IF HE HAS AN IN DEPTH KNOWLEDGE AND CAN ANALYZE THE SKILL HE WANTS TO LEARN.
As long as he can understand it, its not impossible for him to learn. The more he understands the skill, the higher level the skill is.
SO IN NEARLY, AND I MEAN NEARLY, NO WAY IS DORIAN THE STANDARD OP PROTAGONIST.
He is not jesus-kun like kirito.
Plus everyone knows kirito is a little bitch. Literally too when he goes into gungale.
The dude literally says that,"The only difference between reality and the game is the amount of data."
Yo author dude, dafuq happened, did you have a stroke and let a monkey do your story writing for you?
Anyway now im just going off on different tangents and drawing away from the point of this authors corner.
Hes not op, qi and ki are the same, leveling is qualitative, and finally i dont have this shit planned out whatsoever so the world is ever evolving. And this is almkst gonna be entirely from Dorians point of view, so many things will be biased.
Also let me know what you thought of the fightscenes last chapter. I might do them for everyfight as long as it doesnt get repetitive. I trust you guys to point out inconsistencies and be helpful when you can. I take your advice seriously as long as its not troll advice.
So i hope you guys continue to read and enjoy.
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