《The Start of a Unusual Life in an Alternate Reality(Soul-AR. You know like solar)》explanation of the chained crow
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So i dont fucking know how to insert a picture from my phone to the fucking website cause it keeps asking for a fucking source code and when i try doing the jpg it doesnt fucking work. Im salty as fuck right now so im just gonna explain to you in detail what the chained crow looks like in its different modes and how it transforms mechanically in the like. So ok.
The chained crow has three main forms: the scythe model, the AxeSword model, and the Unchained model.
the chained crow in its scythe form is 9ft long. Dont know the metric system so this will be in feet and inches. Or was it the US uses metric and other countries use standard. Dont remember.
The scythe blade is 4ft long and 2 1/2ft high and is on one side of the top of the staff. The otherside of the top of the staff holds the Axe or Halberd Head which comes about 1/2 a foot away from the shaft of the staff itself. The Axe head is 2 1/2ft high as well. Both the top of the scythe and the axe taper into spear points. Therefore making a forked spear at the top of the shaft.
in between the scythe and axe is an opening ,that when Dorian chooses to do so, can compress ki,mana,the Force, or all three, and make a concussion cannon. He can also choose the form the energies come out of the cannon. For example a fireball, ice spike, curse magic, healing magic, lighting(just like the final purple tier weapon you get in jak and daxter 2), or just plain concussive force launching an rock or piece of metal.
Further down the shaft(hur hur hur) is a lock chain that keeps the staff heads attached to the actual staff by tightening the chain. The chain locks are on both the top and bottom of the staff and controlled by the 2 hand guards on the shaft. In between the two handguards is a twist collapse middle that prevents it from randomly collapsing in the middle of battle. The collapsing middle is used to transform it to its AxeSword form but in not done yet with the Scythe mode.
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At the very bottom of the shaft is a cleaver like sword with blade breakers on the otherside of it. The cleaver is mostly hollow and when the staff collapses into AxeSword mode, the Scythe head goes into the cleaver and shaft reinforcing it and allowing the concussion cannon to still be usable. Its sorta like how Clouds Breaker Blade from FF7 can have multiple swords in it.
Now the AxeSword has a handguard made by the 2 chain release levers and can release both the axe head and Sword giving it extra range. The AxeSword can be used either 1 or 2 handed. In between both the Sword and Axe is the cannon. This makes it look sorta lime the HexTech Gunblade from League Of Legends but with an Axe Head on it.
Finally is the Unchained Mode.
In this mode the chains on both ends of the staff are released while in scythe mode giving extra range and manuverability. Dorian can control where the blades go and how long the chain extends through his use of the Force. The cannon can still get used in this form so say if Dorian swings the scythe and the head is moving too slow backwards around an enemies defense, he uses the cannon to increase its cleaving damage causing fissures in his enemies bodies. Causeing even heavier bleeding.
So i was gonna have Dorian use the Mandalorian Darkblade that the leader of Deathwatch has in star wars, but i dont want any copyright infringement due to disney being a bit triggerhappy with that, even if its in a fan fiction. Ill probably have Dorian use a new power later on that covers the blades in a black glow that looks like it though, black lightsabers look fucking awsome.
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