《Righteous Sovereign, Shameless Rogue (hiatus/rewrite)》Hiatus/Rewrite notice
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Hi, it's donkey here!
As the title's already indicated, this a notice for my hiatus/rewrite. I've been thinking about this a lot and well, after a lot of comments, good and bad, I've just come to this conclusion, there are a few main reasons why I'm doing this,
1. The first few chapters were just too confusing, I think I was trying to set up too much with my first few chapters,
"the MC's background and his 'parents', Qingtian and her dad, Lin Ming and Shangguan Ying'er, Old Heigu and Fatty Jun, Lan Wenqing and her story, the old lady (the headmistress of the Radiant Sea institute), the Celestial Moon Palace, Deng/Li Xishen, the whole business of the 'Overflowing Yang Summit', the 'revered guest'"
Just listing this all out is tiring and confusing enough for me and I'm the writer ( ≖.≖), and you as the reader probably will have been unaware of half of the setups, since it's hidden among a large pile of crap, I need to kind of spread things out a bit further out, find a proper balance. I want to create a proper world full of characters that feel alive, not completely overwhelm my readers with heaps of confusing information, so I'll need to consider a few plot points more carefully
2. My internship starts next week, and it's a full time 9-5 thing, and will be ongoing for the next month, right as my term starts at uni, so I don't think I'll have time post regularly and take advantage of my trending status (it's like 45th on trending? lol). Tbh, I wasn't too happy about hitting trending, at this stage of the story, right now, it's just not ready yet.
The problem is, when I write over a long period of time (i.e. over 2-3 days per chapter), I tend to change my mind before the arc ends and try to cram in random infos, so unless I finish up an introductory arc I'm happy with, I won't post anything again.
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3. I would be lying if I said the low ratings I got ever since I hit trending didn't affect me, I grew up Asian, so any form of negative stimuli hurts like hell. I won't talk much about this here, since well, it's pretty obvious that .5s and 1s out of nowhere (CAN YOU AT LEAST TELL ME WHAT YOU HATED BRO) hurts.
Before I go I would like to thank all my followers and my favs, and especially big thanks to @CHUBA000 for believing in me ಥ_ಥ!
When I'll be back - Idk tbh, a month or two probably, I have the world built already, just need to find the right way to introduce this, after this, will go reread everything I've ever read in my life and see what kind of introductory works and which don't. XD
P.S. undeleted a few chapters to tide you guys over, hehe...
Anyways, that's it for this notice! Donkey out (>‿◠)✌
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