《Undineson》[SPOILERS] Comment, Feedback, Discuss Here! Also Edit Announcements Here!
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LAST EDIT: 19 MAR 2015
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Hi guys! Lava here.
I made this thread so its easier for me to answer questions and look at feed back.
Please feel free to comment here as this will be the main place I look to reply to people from now on.
Also this will be the main place to discuss the chapters amongst yourselves and maybe even come up with theories. (Who knows maybe ill even incorporate ideas I like that i haven't thought of!)
Anyways thanks for reading guys and thanks for keeping up with me!
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EDIT: 2015 MAR 19
Hey put up the new chapter yesterday! As for the questions regarding Mano and magic, the magic is coming xD. Let me know what some of you think so far or even where you want the story to go!
P.S
On a side note though, I want to thank you guys for keeping up with me even though I make mistakes a lot sometimes. The community has been really supportive and play a big role in helping me grow. Please let me know if I make any mistakes in the future. It's necessary for me so I can provide you guys with the best story I can! Thanks guys! Sorry not sorry for mushy post. :D
Part two will come out soon!
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