《Heavenly Will》Chapter 9 - Star God Breathing Technique
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“Primordial God Technique?!”
Knock,knock!
Before Qing Yun could look through this sudden surge of information inside his head, a knock on the door was heard followed by the sweet voice of a girl.
“Big Brother Yun, can I come in?”
Qing Yun shook his head and said with a mischievous smile, “Come in!”
The door opened and an ethereal figure hastily came in. Qing Yun immediately stood up and smiled, “Little Su, is something wrong?”
“Big Brother Yun, do you fell better, is there anything…”
Before she could finish he sentence Qing Su was stunned as her big amber eyes were staring at Qing Yun as if she were in a daze. Her small rosy lips were trembling slightly and her jade white hands where placed on her chest.
In Qing Yun’s memories, Qing Su was akin to an exquisite porcelain doll. As he recalled the petite figure that was always clinging to his arm, from back then, Qing Yun couldn’t help but smile as his eyes contained a tenderness that was hard to go unnoticed.
But now, that adorable figure has already became a fine young lady. She wasn’t fifteen yet but her features were refined, her face gave of a gentle aura and her sole presence had the wondrous effect of making one feel happy. She looked like a refined young lady but her eyebrows still contained a trace of playfulness that made her look very alluring.
As he glanced at the stunned beauty before him, even Qing Yun couldn’t help but be in a daze for a while. Almost unconsciously, Qing Yun body moved as he swiftly embraced the stunned beauty.
“Ahh!!”
As if she was brought back to reality, Qing Su cried out and started trembling like a frighten puppy. Her eyes widened in surprise and a touch of red quickly spread from her fair face to the nape of her neck, “You… You… What are you doing?!”
“What?” Qing Yun put on his most innocent face, “I’m just showing my love for my dear little sister!” Qing Yun said heroically.
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“You… You…” Qing Su was at a loss of word, her snow white face was already crimson red.
“Hee!” Qing Yun laughed shamelessly, “What happened to the little girl who was always clinging to my arm back then, even earlier, you were hugging me so tightly!”
“You… that was when… when we were kids, and… earlier I was just too happy… but now we are already adults so… we can’t do this so brazenly…” Qing Su’s trembling voice was barley audible.
“Oh, then it alright if no one is around!” Qing Yun said with a beaming smile.
“You…” Qing Su was at a loss of words. She knew that this big meany was teasing her but she didn’t have any retort. Although she said all that, she didn’t try to escape , she just buried her face in his chest as she nestled herself in Qing Yun’s embrace.
Qing Yun smile contained a trace of tenderness as he glanced at the obedient beauty in his arms.
“Have you had enough already?” Qing Su said after a long while.
“No! Even if we stayed like this for a life time it still won’t be enough!” Qing Yun said heroically.
“You… Hm!” Qing Su stomped her foot and it just happened that Qing Yun’s foot was right bellow it.
“Ow, ow, ow! That hurts my little sister, are you trying to kill your big brother?!” The innocent Qing Yun finally let go of Qing Su as he said in an exaggerated manner.
“Hm, it your fault for being such a rogue!” Qing Su puffed her cheeks, one could see a trace of reluctance in her amber eyes.
“Alright, alright, we’ll leave this for another time!” Smiling mischievously, Qing Yun put his hand under his chin as he seized Qing Su’s body from head to toe. The adorable fifteen year old girl before him didn’t have the slightest bit of the ‘refined young lady’ deterrence from before.
“You…” Qing Su was speechless in front of Qing Yun’s shamelessness. Her heart wavered slightly when she saw the slightly evil smile in Qing Yun’s eyes. An indescribable feeling made it’s way inside her heart as the redness that started to recede, once again made her snow white face look like a crimson rose.
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“Hehe, alright, alright.” Qing Yun waved his hand and sat down on the bed, “Lass, why don’t you tell your big brother at what realm of cultivation you are?” Qing Yun asked as he looked at Qing Su’s amber eyes. In his memories, her eyes should be black.
Qing Su glanced at Qing Yun for a while before she made her way to him and surprisingly put her small bottom on Qing Yun’s lap.
Qing Yun smiled slightly but didn’t said anything. He glanced warmly at the adorable girl that didn’t dare to look at him in the eyes. He didn’t mind this closeness between them. This much skinship may not be appropriate for two siblings, but Qing Yun knew that he wasn’t related by blood to Qing Yin and Qing Su. Of course, this didn’t matter to much to him. As far as he was concerned, they were his family, and that’s all it mattered.
“Hehe!” After a while, Qing Su regained her calm and laughed proudly with her nose in the air, “What do you think?”
“Mn, peak of Houtian! My little sister is indeed extraordinary!” Qing Yun said with a slight smile.
Qing Su was startled. She looked at Qing Yun in astonishment.
“What’s with that look lass? Who do you think gave you that cultivation technique? You may be able to fool other but not this young master!” Qing Yun said proudly.
“From the looks of it you reached this realm three years ago, but then you reached a bottleneck and your cultivation stagnated at the peak of Houtian.” Qing Yun said calmly.
Qing Su was once again stunned by Qing Yun words. None of his words were wrong. On the surface, her cultivation was at the 8th layer of Qi Refining Realm. Till now no one was able to tell her true cultivation, and that alone left her speechless. She knew that it was thanks to the cultivation technique that Qing Yun gave her. Back then, although she knew about the concept of cultivation, she was to young to truly understand it. Even after a few years she just assumed that it was just an ordinary Cultivation technique. But as the years passed she was left speechless by the prowess of this cultivation techinque that Qing Yun gave her seemingly as he would give her candy.
She reached the peak of Houtian Realm when she wasn’t even twelve. For her and for many other people in this world, this was something inconceivable. After all the other kids of her age were still struggling to brakethrough from the Qi Refining Realm. If someone could reach the Houtian Realm by the age of sixteen they will be regarded as geniuses, but she brokethrough to Houtian when she was eight, and four years latter she attained the peak of this realm.
She was once again left speechless when she found out that not even a cultivator at the peak of Xiantian realm won’t be able to tell her true cultivation level. Qing Su had always wondered how did her five years old big brother, that was seemingly a cripple back then, was able to obtain such a powerful cultivation technique. And now the same brother could speak about her cultivation so accurately to the last detail.
Although Qing Yun looked calm on the outside, he was secretly astonished as well. Who would have thought that the cultivation technique that he gave her on a whim would make her power rise by leaps and bounds.
In his mind, Qing Yun had just the name of this cultivation technique and a small description.
[Star God Breathing Technique – The cultivation technique used by the Star God. It allows one to cultivate the Star Qi]
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