《Once a Hero》Original ending to the David Arc
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I admit I got spooked and quickly ended the Arc before it was really over leaving some unasnwered questions
So here is a short summary of ending chapter 15 and all of the chapter 16 (which got scrapped) I posted this as a reply to one person but feel all should have a chance to read it.
Actual plan:
Alexander did not break the influence in the throne room and waits to see what it is Scott was actually doing as a spy for David, once Scott finished the ring, Alexander would take the ring while Scott was sleeping/resting and let them all in. David would give a speech about how pathetic Scott was and Cindy would agree to the shock of Scott and he lose hope as one of his wives was lost to him already. end of chapter........
Then while chained in the dungeon (the dungeon negates the use of magic and access to inventory thanks to the Builders) for his "own good" to keep the children safe and he does not kill himself(Scott reflects on many things here and has an internal discussion, he discovers the soul link has deeper meaning than what he thought and can feel the girls in turmoil as he concentrates on each one of them individually), Patterson comes to his rescue saying everyone is acting strange and that David had a weird evil aura around him. Scott Convinces Patterson to free him and escapes. He confronts David in his own bedroom, while the girls are all dressed in their negligee's feeding him foods like a king. Julie and Ki'Diera would jump out of bed telling Scott it was not what it seemed and they were just having a pajama party. David goes (lots of dialogue between Scott and David explaining things but the short of it is this) on about how easy it was to influence them and how after he came from Albuquerque he saw his chance when Cindy was finally alone without Scott. He tried to influence Scott but Scott is immune to his powers for some reason. Cindy meanwhile looks at Scott with mixed emotions as the love spell is still in effect tearing her emotions up.
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As the confrontation comes to a conclusion David order the girls to strip and show their true faith to him, which they all struggles with and Scott yells STOP with his beast voice scaring the shit out of everyone. Then he pleads to the girls breaking the spell on them using the soul link as they all glow and the soul link is established deeper. Cindy now in a fit of rage awoken from her nightmare sees David in his underwear on the bed, now begging the girls to listen to him incinerates him and the giant bed. Afterwards all the girls are crying about their betrayal to Scott and begging for forgiveness, but Scott see the ring he made that Alexander took and grabs it, Cindy is the most remorseful who can not stop crying, he falls to one knee and declares his love for her and gives her the ring thus breaking the curse and love spell........
THAT was the story I wanted to write, but had to condense it due to the outcry of NTR tho i said it pretty blantanly no NTR no Tragedy, but alas...........it is what it is. As I said my first book here folks sorry.
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