《Bloody New World》Suggestions, criticisms and feedback
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This thread is for anyone that would like to inform me about any suggestions/ criticisms and any other feedback you guys may have. I will be checking this post regularly.
I hope I can improve with your help! :)
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Rise of the White Dragon
June 15 of the year 2010, the third awakening happened. Several smaller worlds had returned to connect with the main world as living beings of different races started to appear and some people managed to connect with the origin and gain control of various powers: control of fire, of water, of wind, of air, and of earth... In the midst of all these confusions, towers that gave unimaginable powers began to appear in all corners of the world, where those who already had powers could upgrade and become more powerful or even those who did not have powers could receive powers through tests of the tower. And because of these towers, conflicts started to happen in all corners of the world by those wanting to monopolize these towers.Luan Dimas was betrayed by one of the people he trusted most. However, in his final moments before being killed, he was transported back to four months before the third awakening that started the apocalypse on earth. Being a man who lived for a thousand years and had accumulated several techniques, he now had a new chance to correct some of his early mistakes. Luan decided to make the most of this new chance that the heavens had given to him.
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Refining the Heavens
[A.K.A. Kairos Astroire & the Snowdrifts] Kairos, a poor village boy, was born in a warring state without a decent shred of cultivating talent. In a world of Ki and Magic where only the mighty will rise while the weak are trodden upon, the Empire judges one’s potential in the academy. Fated to be expelled and starve on the streets, his struggles only turned him into the perfect stepping stone for his affluent aristocrat classmates. When an ancient enemy of humanity awoken during an assessment, life took a turn for the worst... Until he unlocked the power to refine any cultivation manuals and seized fate in his own hands. Since the heavens bore down cruelly, then why not refine the heavens?
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Son of Chaos
One night was all it took. One night to end an old life and start a new one. Destroying his school while trying to save his life, he is rescued from the brink of death by a group of strangers, carried back to a Camp upheld for people like him. Demigods. For the Greek Gods really do exist, as do the myths of old, and to this day children are born from the deities of Olympus who require training and care. Yet the time of relative peace for the demigods is coming to an end, and they will find themselves in the midst of a war the likes of which the face of Gaia has never seen before. Our hero has much to face, much to endure before the end can finally come, but he is not alone. Far from it. This is the tale of Daniel James Greenfield. The Son of Chaos. Percy Jackson Fanfiction Fanfiction timeline divergence from the original work starts after the Heroes of Olympus Series ends
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one || eddie kaspbrak [1]
Believe it or not, Rylee Tozier, a quick witted, creative, and self confident girl, has some secrets. Rylee and Richie are thirteen year old twins, they're basically the same person, aside from height. Both wear glasses, both have short black hair, both have a quick wit, both are very stubborn, both have the same dark brown eyes, both have the same friends, point is, almost everything about them is the same, but not their height. Richie is about 5'6" while Rylee stands at 5'0"Rylee and Richie are part of the 'losers club' which are Bill Denbrough, Eddie Kaspbrak, Stan Uris, Richie Tozier, and Rylee Tozier. The Tozier twins have known them since they were five, but Rylee became best friends with Eddie when they were three. The biggest similarity between the twins; their fear. Clowns. [ BOOK 1/2 ]eddie kaspbrak x fem!oc #1 kindascary march 2020#1 kindascary april 2020#1 kindascary may 2020 #2 kindascary june 2020#4 billdenbrough july 2020
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Free Bird - Morgan Wallen
"She wanted us to leave town and start a life somewhere else but I couldn't just runaway, y'know, like this is my hometown." Or In which Daniella Hunt and Morgan Wallen are reunited through a mutual friend.I own my own characters.
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ESA (Ranboo x reader)
The store looked sketchy, a place Mark definitely would have preferred to avoid. But his platonic husband Tubbo was dragging him inside, saying that the magic lady wasn't a hoax.×××"You need an emotional support animal (y/n)! Your parents refuse to believe you have any mental problems, and you can't afford a therapist. This is the next best option!"I looked at the cat, and back at Jack."Fine, but you have to name it," I demanded. "Catboo, it's officail," he shouted triumphantly.NO ART IS MINE
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