《Invoker》STORY UP TO THIS POINT
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First of all, I want to thank all of you readers for your continuing support. Without you guys keeping me going, I would have long abandoned this story. I have been reading all of your comments, and it's all the 'thanks for the chapter!' that I look to see for encouragement to continue writing this story. Not saying that it's a chore; I love writing, but to see you guys giving your support means much to me.
That being said, I feel like I should address some of misconceptions that you guys have, mostly all up to this point, now that I am past the 20-Chapter point.
1) Invoke is an ability that can only combine BASIC spells together. If you go back to Chapter 05, you'll see that the ability description did say Crow can only combine up to two BASIC elements together to form a spell. This means at this point, he cannot Invoke invoked spells together. Or at least, not yet.
2) Aeryssya is an NPC. She is not a player. In Chapter 06, it was mentioned that she fought back the Undead forces 7 YEARS ago. There's no way she can be player, though regrettably, maybe I should have made her a player actually xD
3) Though my story is based on the actual RoyalRoad, I confess that I have not completed reading the story. In fact, I stopped after the MC got to the vampire kingdom in LMS. As such, I know some among you will be extremely annoyed when you realise that some parts of my story do not tally with LMS. In fact, some are completely off.
But, what's done is done. I cannot un-write this story that so many others like. The most I could do was to introduce new shifts to the game of RoyalRoad in my story to make it more of a story of my own, like in Chapter 18.
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4) You will also realise that I do not like to include a lot of numbers inside my story. I am well aware in LMS that the writer has a lot of stats, a lot of numbers, and a lot of counters going on. I write my story in a way that is mostly just words. Although I know in a real game, the numbers matter. Numbers like XP, HP, Mana to name a few, but I apologise for the lack of all that because to me, I just want to write a good story that I can be proud of, and not be bothered by numerical figures like that. I am more concerned with bringing new ideas and storyline into this Invoker fan fic.
5) I welcome all ideas for Invoking! Give me a basic spell, give me two, then I'll mash them up in the story, if I like your idea and it is not too over-powered. Though I must admit, Tempest Storm is a little over-powered. :D Actually, most of my spells are derived from Dota, for those of you who actually play it, you'll see the familiarity of some of the spells I use.
It has been a great ride so far, and I believe it will become even better as I try and find more ideas to write into this story of mine. It is my first ever fan-fiction so far, so I really do apologise if there are details in the story not to your liking.
With that, please do keep commenting! Also, if it's not too much to ask, please do rate my story. Let's try and make this story into the top 50 rated!
The link is here http://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/410
And to those 401 people currently following my story, I love you guys!
Oh, and don't leave after reading this! Chapter's 21 up as well!
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