Hello everyone,

You always give great feedback, and I would really like to improve as a writer even though this is just a hobby for me. That said, I am interested in your opinions for the massive battle we just went through. How did I do? Where can I improve? I know I sort of threw a lot of random viewpoints at you there at the very beginning, so that is one thing I will look into improving. Character introduction earlier than needed. I appreciate all the feedback.

Have a great week,

Mighty Moushie