《The Making of a God Slayer》Chapter 10: Unexpected Effects
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(1.592 years until the day of the summoning, Akatsuki's POV)
(Akatsuki): "What? Why? Are you idiot?"
(Shino): "No, i've have tought about it since some time ago. You have teached us and made us powerful enought, so i'll only need my right eye to take my revenge and take back our clan!"
(Shina): "Me too! Please, take my right eye!"
I can feel their resolve... man, i've really softened, i can't refuse when i feel this solid resolve from both of them.
(Akatsuki): "You idiots... alright, i'll keep your eyes. I want you both to keep mines too, one for each. Althought they are completely blind, they will be a constant thing to remember you both that i'm watching for you guys."
They don't know the details, but they know that i'm sealed inside this continent for a long, long time. I raise another bed from teh ground and lay down on it.
(Akatsuki): "Yukari, please."
(Yukari): "Yes."
Her slimy hands extend in tentacles and touch my eyes. Suddenly, i feel my eyes area going numb. Before my body could absorb the numbness, Yukari ejects again her numbing substance, trying to keep up with my bodyes regeneration. I feel her remove my eyeballs. It's an strange feeling, actually. Soon, i feel something entering my orbits.
Htne, she stops to inject the numbing substance in my eye orbits. I feel the servered nervers connect to my new eyes. I keep them closed as i get up. With my perception, i feel both brothers get up as well. Slwly, i open my eyes...
I can see...
the gray walls of the cave, the light coming form the entrance, my pale hands, my barefooted feet, my black pants and my white shirt. My spiky hair that grew until my lower back.
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(Akatsuki): "I can see..."
(Shino): "Isn't that great, Akatsuki-shishou?"
I look at my disciples. I see Shino's pretty face, his left eye black and his left eye blood red with a beatiful pattern to it. His hair is black and short, his skin is pale white. I look at Shina, a feminine version of Shino, Black, long, stright hair, left eye is blood-red with an beatiful pattern to it while her right eye is completely black.
It's easy to see wich one is the eye that i gave to them. I look at Yukari, with her beatiful face, black eyes and black, straight hair. Her boy is perfect for my tastes. No that i don't know that, i have been touhing this body for the last century. I look at both my disciples, who are smiling at me right now. I smile back at them...
Before the three of use bent over, holding our eyes in pain.
(Yukari): "Master!"
They both release grunts of pain, while i stay silent. Blood begans to come out from my eyes as i clutch them. Some escond after, the pain stops and i look up slowly. They both seem fine, that's good. I smile faintly at them and at Youkari, but them look at me, surprised.
(Akatsuki): "What?"
(Yukari): "Master, your eyes..."
(Akatsuki): "What about them?"
She takes a mirror that she has made for herself and gives it to me. confused, i look at my self reflected at the morrior. And there, i see the Mangekyõ Sharingan on my eyes. But... the pattern... is different from Shino's and Shina's eyes.
(Akatsuki): "What the hell happened?"
(Yukari): "Master, i ahve a theory."
The three of us look at her, confused.
(Akatsuki): "Let's hear then."
(Yukari): "Master has an incredible regenerative ability that regenerates parts of your body. Only parts of your body. With your new eyes, you body adapted to them, and absorbed them as your own. i believe that it was it wich has changed the eyes that them both gave to you."
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(Akatsuki): "What do you mean?"
(Yukari): "Your body absorbed the eyes, right? What if that changed the Mangekyõ Sharingan, creating you won Sharingan, as if you were born in the Uchiha clan?"
What an absurd theory... I can't deny, thought.
(Akatsuki): "So what about those two?"
Yukari didn't answered, instead, she took both Shino's and Shina's hands, and opened a deep cut on them. Before that i could voice a complain, before our eyes, we saw the wound close fast.
(Yukari): "As i suspected... Althought masters eyes are blind and can't be cured, they still have your regenerative power. When i transfered your eyes to them, the eyes forced the their bodies to absorb them too, giving a portion of your regenerative power to them."
(Shino): "Wow, i didn't expected this..."
(Yukari): "Me neither..."
Really, waht a great stroke of luck. Then, i felt somethin on my eyes. I took the mirror again and looked at my eyes. The blood-red eyes looked back at me. Then, i channeled energy to them, and the began to spin, taking form of an advanced pattern from my previous one. This is...
(Akatsuki): "I also have the Eternal Mangekyõ..."
I looked at the brothers, shocked, with my new eyes.
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