《No Longer ALDC {Sequel to The Last Night} (Completed)》Chapter 18
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Gianna's POV:
Today, we are back at the studio to work on the dances for the competition.
At the moment, it is 7am and we are all having breakfast. I said to the girls "You can all wear your matching dance wear to training today and wear your new hair bows and your new tops on the way to the studio and use your new dance bags! Let's finish breakfast and then get ready to go."
"Right, schedule is on the notice board. Go look at it and be where you need to be."
- Group in Studio A
- Mackenzie solo in Studio A
- Maddie solo in Studio B
- All girls Acro class in Studio C
- Paige solo in Studio A
- Nia solo in Studio B
- Lunch
- Mackenzie & Brooke duet in Studio A
- Kendall & Jojo duet in Studio B
- Kalani & Nia duet in Studio C
- Mackenzie, Maddie & Chloe trio in Studio A
- Paige, Brynn & Jojo trio in Studio B
- Group in Studio A
- Dinner
- Mackenzie solo
- Critiques
- Maddie solo
- Critiques
- Paige solo
- Critiques
- Nia solo
- Critiques
- Mackenzie & Brooke duet
- Critiques
- Kendall & Jojo duet
- Critiques
- Kalani & Nia duet
- Critiques
- Mackenzie, Maddie & Chloe trio
- Critiques
- Paige, Brynn & Jojo trio
- Critiques
- Group
- Critiques
- Go home
"As normal, if you are not in a studio with us then you are in a spare area in the building practising your dances. You need to remember your critiques that you got the other day and apply them because there will be more critiques given today!"
They nodded.
"It is Wednesday today, competition is on Saturday and the ALDC will be there! So, we NEED to be amazing, and don't forget the minis are coming next week! We don't want them to come just after we have lost do we?"
They shook their heads no.
So I said "Well then. Let's get to work!"
The group dance is going good. It is nearly finished. I think I made a good decision only having these 6 girls in it, because they were the original 6 at the ALDC. They have danced with each other for a long time!
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Kenzie's solo is full of difficult Acro tricks. Hopefully she can pull it off.
Maddie's solo has the skill to win if she dance it correctly.
Paige's solo is more difficult than what Abby used to give her. Hopefully she remembers it!
Nia's solo should win in her age category!
Kenzie & Brookes duet is so cute. It has the WOW factor with all the tricks in it!
Kendall & Jojo have both been on the bottom of the pyramid for the past 2 weeks. I am going to keep giving them dances until they can move up!
Kalani & Nia are in he Teen category an there are a lot of great dancers so they have to work extra hard!
Kenzie, Maddie & Chloe's trio is very difficult, but they are in time and doing all the moves.
Paige, Brynn & Jojo's trio is a cutesy dance, because Brynn and Jojo are so young it looks cute and Paige is cute aswell!
*timeskip*
Its now 7pm, and we are about to start the critiques.
"Right, let's start with the last run-throughs for today and the critiques. Everyone who is not in the dance will say 1 critique each about that dance."
"Mackenzie, let's see your solo."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to use of facial expressions."
Chloe - "You need to smile more."
Brooke - "You need to work on your scorpion."
Paige - "You need to work on your tinsika."
Nia - "You need to straighten your legs in your aerials."
Kendall - "You need to look at the judges more."
Kalani - "You need to work on your aerials."
Brynn - "You need to work on your turns.
Jojo - "You need to smile more."
"Maddie, let's see your solo."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Mackenzie - "You need to point your feet more."
Chloe - "You need to look at the judges more."
Brooke - You need to work on your turns."
Paige - "You need to straighten your legs on your leaps."
Nia - "You need to look at the judges more."
Kendall - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Kalani - "You need to extend your arms on your leaps."
Brynn - "You need to stop looking st the floor as much!"
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Jojo - "You need to smile more."
"Paige, let's see your solo."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to use of facial expressions."
Mackenzie - "You need to straighten your arms on your straddle ups."
Chloe - "You need to work on your aerials more."
Brooke - "You need to work on your roundoff back handspring."
Nia - "You need to look at the judges more."
Kendall - "You need to spot your turns."
Kalani - "You need to make your movements bigger."
Brynn - "You need to smile more."
Jojo - "You need to use more facial expressions."
"Nia, let's see your solo."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to use of facial expressions."
Mackenzie - "You need to smile more."
Chloe - "You need to look at the judges more."
Brooke - "You need to work on your aerials."
Paige - "You need to spot your turns."
Kendall - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Kalani - "You need to make the movements bigger."
Brynn - "You need to smile more."
Jojo - "You need to straighten your arms more."
"Kenzie, Brooke, let's see your duet."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Chloe - "You need to look at the judges more."
Paige - "You need to spot your turns."
Nia - "You need to look at each other more."
Kendall - "You need to be in time with each other."
Kalani - "You need to make the movements bigger."
Brynn - "You need to smile more."
Jojo - "You need to straighten your arms in your Scorpions."
"Kendall, Jojo, let's see your duet."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to spot your turns."
Mackenzie - "You need to be in time with each other."
Chloe - "You need to look at each other more."
Brooke - "You need to look at the judges more."
Paige - "You need to smile more."
Nia - "You need to straighten your legs in your aerials."
Kalani - "You need to make the movements bigger."
Brynn - "You need to smile more."
"Kalani, Nia, let's see your duet."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to be in time with each other."
Mackenzie - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Chloe - "You need to look at the judges more.
Brooke - "You need to be in time with each other."
Paige - "You need to spot your turns."
Kendall - "You need to be in time with the music."
Brynn - "You need to smile more."
Jojo - "You need to work on your aerials."
"Mackenzie, Maddie, Chloe, let's see your trio."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Brooke - "Kenzie, you need to work on your scorpions."
Paige - "You need to spot your turns."
Nia - "You need to be in time with each other."
Kendall - "You need to be in time with the music."
Kalani - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Brynn - "You need to smile more."
Jojo - "You need to work on your aerials."
"Paige, Brynn, Jojo, let's see your trio."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Maddie - "You need to smile more."
Mackenzie - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Chloe - "Jojo, you need to work on your aerials."
Brooke - "You need to be in time with each other."
Nia - "You need to be in time with each other."
Kendall - "You need to be in time with the music."
Kalani - "You need to spot your turns."
"Let's see the group."
"Right, let's start critiques."
Kendall - "Brooke and Kenzie, you need to work on your scorpions."
Kalani - "You need to use more facial expressions."
Brynn - "You need to all be in time."
Jojo - "Kenzie, you need to work on your pee-wees."
Then they went and sat down and I said "Right, so we have gone through everyone's dances, and they are all looking better, let's go home and go to sleep."
So they all left and went to get their stuff and I went to Christi and Kelly and said "I'm kind of nervous about going against Abby, because she didn't compete last week, so they have probably been working on these dances since last week!"
Christi said "Don't worry about Abby and the ALDC. Everything will work out fine!"
Then the girls came to the door and we went home.
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