《No Longer ALDC {Sequel to The Last Night} (Completed)》Chapter 16
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Gianna's POV:
It's Monday now.
That means pyramid today. We are on our way to the studio now.
I put off the mini's coming until next week because I want them to come after we have had a clean sweep at competition.
"Well done to everyone. We nearly had a clean sweep! Let's get onto pyramid. On the bottom, we have and , both of you only had the group. Not much to judge you on. Moving up we have , you came 2nd. If you had won we would have had a clean sweep! Next we have , you didn't stand out in the trio. Then we have , your solo came 3rd. Next we have , your duet and trio didn't win. Moving up we have , I felt that your part in the trio and group were really good. Then we have , your duet and trio were really good. Second on the pyramid, we have , your solo and duet won. Your trio did not. And on top of the pyramid, for the 2nd week in a row, we have , every dance you were in won and you only came out of the hospital yesterday!"
Maddie hugged her sister.
Then I continued "This week, we are competing at Starbound Competition, in Atlanta Georgia. We have a group with 6 of you in it, 2 trios, 3 duets and 4 solos. Group is Maddie, Mackenzie, Chloe, Brooke, Paige and Nia. Trios are Maddie, Mackenzie & Chloe and Paige, Jojo & Brynn. Duets are Mackenzie & Brooke, Kendall & Jojo and Kalani & Nia. Solos are Mackenzie, Maddie, Paige and Nia. Schedule for today is on the Dancers Den notice board."
- Group in Studio A
- Mackenzie, Maddie & Chloe trio in Studio A
- Paige, Jojo & Brynn trio in Studio B
- Mackenzie & Brooke duet in Studio A
- Kendall & Jojo duet in Studio B
- Kalani & Nia duet in Studio C
- Lunch
- Mackenzie solo in Studio A
- Maddie solo in Studio B
- Paige solo in Studio A
- Nia solo in Studio B
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- All dancers Ballet class in Studio A
- Dinner
- Mackenzie solo
- Maddie solo
- Paige solo
- Nia solo
- Mackenzie & Brooke duet
- Kendall & Jojo duet
- Kalani & Nia duet
- Mackenzie, Maddie & Chloe trio
- Paige, Jojo & Brynn trio
- Group
- Go home
"If you are not rehearsing you are either helping with one of the general classes or practising your own routine. Maliboo will stay out of the way but she can go where she wants as long as someone is with her! Let's start with the group."
This group is called . It's a lyrical dance. You will all have a prop, a hand-held mirror. Let's start with.........."
"That's looking good! Kenzie, Maddie and Chloe stay in here. Paige go into Studio B and the rest of you go somewhere."
"This trio is called . It's a lyrical dance. Let's start with .........."
"That's looking good so far."
Meanwhile
Paige's POV:
My trio this week is with Brynn and Jojo. This is gonna be hard for me because both of them are like 7 and I am 9, and I have never danced with either of them before. It's contemporary and its called ."
Gianna's POV:
Mackenzie and Brooke work so well together. I've given them an Acro duet entitled . They both love it.
Kendall and Jojo have a jazz duet entitled .
Kalani and Nia have a contemporary duet entitled .
Mackenzie's solo is Acro and its called .
Maddie's solo is Tap and its called .
Paige's solo is Jazz/Acro and its called .
Nia's solo is Musical Theatre and its called .
*timeskip*
It is now 7pm, and we are all in Studio A to run through the dances 1 more time before going home.
"So, you are all going to go through your dance 1 at a time and then 1 person not in the dance will give you a critique on what you could do better. If it is a duet, trio or group then there will be 1 critique per person. Different people will say each critique. Ready?"
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They nodded.
"Mackenzie, let's see your solo"
Now, 1 person is going to critique her.
I chose Brooke, because she is the best person to critique an acro dance.
"Brooke"
She nodded and said "Well, your skills are good but you need to hold them longer."
Mackenzie nodded and went to sit down then I said
"Maddie, let's see your solo."
I chose Kalani to critique her because she is a tapper.
"Kalani"
She said "Well, you need to connect with the judges more. You look down too much."
Maddie nodded and went to sit down.
"Paige, let's see your solo."
I chose Nia to critique her because she's great at Jazz/acro.
"Nia"
She said "You need to straighten your legs on your aerials."
Paige nodded and went to sit down.
"Kalani, let's see your solo."
I chose Maddie to critique her because she's great at Lyrical.
"Maddie"
She said "You need to look at the judges."
Kalani nodded and went to sit down.
"Nia, let's see your solo."
I chose Kendall to critique her because she's great at Musical Theatre.
"Kendall"
She said "You need to use more faces."
Nia nodded and went to sit down.
"Mackenzie & Brooke, let's see your duet."
I chose Paige to critique Mackenzie.
"Paige"
She said "You need to straighten your legs on your aerials."
Mackenzie nodded.
I chose Nia to critique Brooke.
"Nia"
She said "You need to hold your scorpion longer."
She nodded and Brooke and Mackenzie went to sit down.
"Kendall & Jojo, let's see your duet."
I chose Chloe to critique Kendall.
"Chloe"
She said "You need to connect with Jojo more."
Kendall nodded.
I chose Brynn to critique Jojo.
"Brynn"
She said "You need to connect with Kendall more."
She nodded and Kendall and Jojo went to sit down.
"Nia & Kalani, let's see your duet."
I chose Paige to critique Nia.
"Paige"
She said "You need to use more facial expressions."
Nia nodded.
I chose Maddie to critique Kalani.
"Maddie"
She said "You need to look at the judges more."
She nodded and Nia and Kalani went to sit down.
"Mackenzie, Maddie & Chloe, let's see your trio."
I chose Brooke to critique Mackenzie.
"Brooke"
She said "You need to straighten your legs on your aerials."
Mackenzie nodded.
I chose Kalani to critique Maddie.
"Kalani"
She said "You need to look at Mackenzie and Chloe more."
I chose Paige to critique Chloe.
"Paige"
She said "You need to have straighter legs in your leaps."
She nodded and Mackenzie, Maddie and Chloe went to sit down.
"Paige, Brynn & Jojo let's see your trio."
I chose Kendall to critique Paige.
"Kendall"
She said "You need to slow down a bit."
Paige nodded.
I chose Kalani to critique Brynn.
"Kalani"
She said "You need to keep in time with Paige and Jojo."
I chose Nia to critique Jojo.
"Nia"
She said "You need to keep in time with Paige and Brynn."
She nodded and Paige, Brynn and Jojo went to sit down.
"Now, let's see the group."
I chose Brynn to critique Mackenzie.
Brynn"
"You need to be in time with the others."
I chose Kendall to critique Maddie.
"Kendall"
She said "You need to use more facial expressions."
I chose Kalani to critique Chloe.
"Kalani"
She said "You need to make sure you spot your turns."
I chose Jojo to critique Nia.
"Jojo"
She said "You need to use more facial expressions."
I chose Kendall to also critique Paige.
"Kendall"
"You need to have straighter legs in your aerials."
I chose Kalani to also critique Brooke.
"Kalani"
"She said "You need to have more control in your skills."
Then they all looked at me and I said "Well, I agree with all of the critiques, and tomorrow I would like to see you all try and apply the corrections. Now, let's go home."
"Right, it is 10pm. So, Goodnight everyone. I will see you all in the morning."
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