《WRITING HELP. TIPS》⋆ instead of 'very'
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❝ SO AVOID USING THE WORD 'VERY' BECAUSE IT'S LAZY. A MAN IS NOT VERY TIRED, HE IS EXHAUSTED ❞
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"i was very sad"
"she was very hungry"
"it was very hot"
"i was very lazy to close the door"
very. very. very.
seeing the amount of the word "very" in this chapter makes my brain triggered
oMFG
well, no need to fear!
HERE ARE SOME WORDS TO HELP AVOID USING THE WORD "VERY" —
AVOID SAYING VERY: afraid
RATHER SAY: terrified
AVOID SAYING VERY: angry
RATHER SAY: furious
AVOID SAYING VERY: bad
RATHER SAY: atrocious
AVOID SAYING VERY: beautiful
RATHER SAY: exquisite
AVOID SAYING VERY: big [lmao]
RATHER SAY: immense
AVOID SAYING VERY: bright
RATHER SAY: dazzling
AVOID SAYING VERY: capable
RATHER SAY: accomplished
AVOID SAYING VERY: clean
RATHER SAY: spotless
AVOID SAYING VERY: clever
RATHER SAY: brilliant
AVOID SAYING VERY: cold
RATHER SAY: freezing
AVOID SAYING VERY: hot
RATHER SAY: scalding
AVOID SAYING VERY: hungry
RATHER SAY: ravenous
AVOID SAYING VERY: wise
RATHER SAY: sagacious
AVOID SAYING VERY: weak
RATHER SAY: feeble
AVOID SAYING VERY: thin
RATHER SAY: gaunt
AVOID SAYING VERY: neat
RATHER SAY: immaculate
AVOID SAYING VERY: serious
RATHER SAY: solemn
AVOID SAYING VERY: wicked
RATHER SAY: villainous
AVOID SAYING VERY: lively
RATHER SAY: vivacious
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there's obviously a bunch more but i decided to put the crucial ones for now
hope this helped !
and also i just saw this, but thank you for the votes and reads i've been getting! even if it's not a large number, it means a lot. thank you :-)
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